| "The Dark Duke" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2012 23:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this chapter. You can clearly see things from Bulma's pov. I love how you show her confusion and insecurities toward her's and vegeta's relationship. The scientist in her is always over thinking everything. I would love to read how vegeta is feeling throughout this whole ordeal. I can just imagine the plethora of varying emotions running around in his head. Anyway, I'm very happy that you updated, and look forward to a new chapter next week. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2012 00:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find myself giddy with happiness everytime I get an alert that you posted a new chapter. It is truly a treat. I hope you update soon. |
Reviewed By: skhr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2012 22:30 PDT
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:-) I just love when Vegeta "feels" emotions!!! Its just too cute to witness him struggle with it. |
Title: awesome
Reviewed By: kramarczuk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2012 13:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story!! i am always waiting for the next chapter and you never disappoint! thanks so much for writing this, you are a great writer! hopefully you keep writing for a long time because this story is developing wonderfully. This story is great when i need a break from studying for finals |
Reviewed By: vegeta's_chew_toy its ME On: May 05, 2012 09:47 PDT
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Hahaha, did I mention how I love your story? And you style, come to think of it. May your Grandmother rest in peace, and may she rest happy knowing how she inspired her granddauddy to write such compelling romance. ;) |
Reviewed By: Dare2 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2012 16:36 PDT
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Finally Bulma and Vegeta understand their love...well somewhat, the ending just took me by surprise, cant wait to see how all this will play out. keep it up :) can't wait for your next update |
Reviewed By: skhr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2012 22:27 PDT
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I enjoyed the update ... Only, is Lilacs with child? Oh my, that would be ... I honestly don't know!!! Disastrous? Wonderful? If she is, I cant wait to read how you spin it! That old hag!!! Now it will seem like Vegeta is just doing what she wanted by seducing Bulma. And I can just imagine how Bulma will react when she finds out ... Oh ... Cant wait for next update ... |
Reviewed By: vegeta's_chew_toy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2012 10:05 PDT
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Oh. My. Gosh. This story is amazing. The kind that relentlessly draws you in leaving no room in your head for anything else other than the characters, the story...and just the plain awesomeness of it. Seriously, big hats off to you. Heh, besides the sourching hot moments between Vegeta and Bulma(which I love more than you know;P), the way you have them interact together while carrying out this spy business is so exciting! I'd love to see them pair off against a situation where they are forced to come together to win. :) Also quick note, I love how you write in V and B's awful communication skills. Makes the parts when they really "talk" so much more satisfying. Keep up the good work! All of us are eagerly waiting for your next update! :) THIS STORY RULES |
Reviewed By: lpwillik [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2012 19:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story!!! And to answer your question...I can't. I'm torn. I love long chapters (especially when the story is this fantastic)! But I also love regular updates (something to look forward to and all). Love it! |
Reviewed By: skhr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2012 23:55 PDT
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:-) that was hot!!! Vegeta is such a God ... Anyway, I really just cant wait for the next update!!! S ... |
Title: Bad Bulma!!
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2012 12:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think Bulma is being irational. How could Vegeta not know than he took her Virginity? I don't like this Viridian guy he seem shady, could he be Zhelonie? I hate that Vegeta's grandmother she seem almost as bad as frieza! Will Vegeta try an seduce Bulma again or will Bulma try an seduce him? Will Goku and Chi-Chi get together? Keep Up The Writing 'Cause I Love It |
Reviewed By: skhr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2012 12:06 PDT
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Oh!!! Although I feel really bad for Bulma I really loved the way she kept up the Ice-Princess act. Only as you said, "How long can that last?" Men are such arses - even Vegeta! And that damn old hag! Urgh!!! I hope she chockes on a bone or something! Is Piccolo the other Green man? Will Vegeta listen to the old hag and seduce Bulma - again? |
Title: great story
Reviewed By: Bianca24 On: March 31, 2012 11:26 PDT
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Hey I love your story keep updating soon please and hey you should definitely make a continuation of the teacher I would love to read what happened the second time please I would really appreciated (^_^)v. |
Reviewed By: su On: March 30, 2012 19:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think they can keep their hands off each for long. Lol! I'm in love with this fic. |
Title: NICE!!!!!
Reviewed By: LavonyaVegeta lover [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2012 17:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can't wait to read any encounters of Bulma and Vegeta on the ship!!! Is there going to be any B/V lemons in the next chapter?! If not in the later chapters?! Also is Goku/Kakkarot going to spar with Vegeta?! Does Frieza come into play in this? Piccolo? Rivalry with Vegeta and Goku/Kakkarot? Chi-Chi/Goku? Little Gohan? Trunks? Am I forgeting anything else? Nope I guess not. Anyway I LOVE THIS IT'S SO DRAMATIC IT KEEPS YOU GUESSING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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