| "The Dark Duke" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: skhr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2012 02:46 PST
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We are really getting to the juicy parts now! Cant wait for BV interaction next ... |
Reviewed By: preciousjade76 On: January 14, 2012 16:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness! I just love this fic. Even though this chapter didn't have any b/v interaction, I still enjoyed reading it. Hopefully we'll get some b/v interaction in the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2012 07:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a happy girl. First Catgirl updates soon.her fic Vengeance, then in the same night you update this fic. What a wonderful treat. Loved this chapter. Hope to see another update soon. |
Reviewed By: vegeta's_chew_toy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2011 19:43 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first fanfic I've read for the past...wow, past two+ years. And I simply had to say how happy I am for finding your fic first... it's made me remember why I love DBZ so much. The interpersonal relationships between all the characters...especially the old favs is SO FREAKIN FUN TO READ! I hope Bulma continues to show her dominant side to Vegeta... love those scenes. Eagerly looking forward to more from you and Merry Christmas! :) |
Reviewed By: lovesreina [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2011 09:14 PST
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I loooove this fic!! I look forward to every update, and I'm glad that you seem to update in a timely manner (something I could very much learn from you, lol!). You're doing justice to the historical romance theme. While I love the scenes with the B/V sexual tension, I also kind of want to see Bulma and Vegeta have some more normal conversations together and get to know each other more on a personal level. We know how lust can take over us physically, and that's always very apparent in most B/V fics, but some of my favorite interactions between Bulma and Vegeta in any fic are ones that are just battles of the minds. You've had a little bit of this but I'd love to see more. I'm also looking forward to reading about Vegeta being Bulma's "sponsor"... Helping her to find a suitor while being super jealous? Will there be a rival character? And does Vegeta get to beat him up in the end?! Haha, I love the cliche, so I'm more kidding about that last bit (regardless of how much I'd like to read that... LOL). Keep it up, can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2011 06:24 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update. It's my bday this weekend, so this makes a nice bday surprise for me. Loved the chapter, but I want more b/v interaction. Preferably steamy interaction, lol. Btw, is Zhelonie going to be Picolo? Have a great thanksgiving. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2011 09:28 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter. Hopefully things really start heating up between b/v, instead of in vegeta's dreams. I love historical AU storylines, and this by far, is one of the best ones I've read. |
Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2011 18:27 PDT
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Chapter 7: I see that Vegeta realized that he was the only one reacting. Though it's obvious that Bulma didn't react simply out of shock. Both of them seem to be unaware that the other actually has feelings for them, all the better for high tension and I love it. Chapter 8: So not only do we get Chichi in this chapter (speaking Cockney it seems :P ) but if I'm reading this correctly 18 is the widow. Didn't see either of those coming though I guess I should have since Goku needs someone and you brought Krillen along as well. I wonder if Bulma is going to shock the Brits when she actually shows that she's got great manners. That aside I love Vegeta's pain in the chapter. I know that sounds awful but it's true. It's good that his want for Bulma is so strong that he couldn't sleep with the Widow but even better that he finally realizes that for himself. Not to mention that Vegeta's ever active imagination seems to have made things worse for him turning something as innocent as a brother/sister relationship into a secret affair. And it seems that his inner self has already declared Bulma as his own even if he's still only amounting it to lust. It's too bad that he'll be leaving. I really want so more moments between them. Can't wait for more. |
Title: AMAZING
Reviewed By: 34surfer On: October 23, 2011 14:42 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just an amazing fic, I love where u r taking this hope this is updated quickly so we can see what happens next. I just adore this B/V fic! |
Title: amazing
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2011 09:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one amazing tale that u are weaving. I'm totally infatuated with it. I'm glad that vegeta didn't do anything with the widow. He is such denial when it comes to bulma. Also, loved the part where bulma compares vegeta's grandma to the animals at the zoo. Entertaining stuff, lol. Anyway, hope u don't keep us waiting too long for an update. I like the long chapters, so don't u dare change a thing. P.S, Is the widow 18? |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2011 20:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so amazed by how you can weave such a wonderful story. This is like watching a movie. I can totally imagine bulma on deck drooling over vegeta. Shoot, reading your description of him, I was drooling. Lol! I really hope vegeta doesn't sleep with that widow, because I think bulma will be hurt if she finds out. I love the length of your chapters. Don't change a thing, unless u make them longer. Update soon, or might have withdrawls from lack of updates. Lol |
Reviewed By: Nintendocat [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2011 09:47 PDT
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Lol, I love how Vegeta wanted to make Bulma moan and groan and shut her eyes and he ended up being the one to do those things. Such a steamy chapter. Can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: preciousjade [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2011 09:01 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another amazing chapter. Loved the b/v interaction. It was filled with sexual tension. They better get to England soon, or they're going to be rocking the boat. Lol! U mentioned a widow in England. Do I sense a love triangle? Update soon! I'm in love with this story. |
Title: My 2 cents.....
Reviewed By: X0oBuffyo0X [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2011 03:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yummy! I'm loving the tension between B/V. It's ok to love a particular chapter. If I was writing this, trust me, I'd have my favorites as well. I love Bulma's character. She's so daring. She makes the story exciting! Even though she's a brain, and self-sufficient, Vegeta's always there to catch her. That's so cute! He's protrayed so sexy in this last chapter too(dangerous waves...sorry if it's wrong..hehehe). Climax is building up! I can feel it...lololol. =^.^= Great job with the story! |
Reviewed By: Munny On: August 30, 2011 11:37 PDT
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Wow, i just discovered your story and i'm already hooked ! Please update soon ! You gave V/B a fascinating twist, love every bit of it. |
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