| "The Dark Duke" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: NCKB [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2016 06:41 PDT
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Just found this fanfic and got sucked in! Don't stop writing! I
need to know how it ends!
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Reviewed By: gya On: October 06, 2015 16:12 PDT
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I like where this story is going...
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Reviewed By: Nova81 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2013 00:11 PDT
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This is an amazing story!!! I'm not an historical romance fan but this is beautiful work. You have gotten a hold on the characters so perfectly that they were never OOC in the story. You managed to find the perfect role for each DBZ character that it was beautiful to picture them in this wonderful little world that you created for them. Your plot is exciting and interesting and even though there were other couples it never seemed to take away from it being a BV fic. I'm really glad I've read this. :-) looking forward to seeing how this ends. Hopefully happilly of course. Thank you!!! |
Reviewed By: renny On: September 10, 2013 10:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it.. love it... love it.... please continue... cant wait for the next chapter.... |
Reviewed By: BVLover On: July 09, 2013 20:17 PDT
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Omggg can you believe I actually started crying when I was reading about bulma sitting in the tree!? I was in her exact position before & it really hit home. But I immediately stopped crying when goku asked bulma for her hand in marriage. Reeeeally made me a little queasy lmao gross. But great story so far! I've been too busy reading to stop & review but I finally had to after reading this chapter. Love love love! |
Reviewed By: Koyana On: July 07, 2013 12:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found this fanfiction about a couple weeks ago and haven't put it down since until I've gotten to the last chapter you've written. I am addicted to it! I absolutely love the ideas and you genuinely are surprising me with every twist and turn. I wish I had reviewed every chapter but.. I couldn't stop reading the chapters long enough to do much else! I'm so excited you just revealed who Zarbon is and i'm trying to figure out how you'll reveal Trunks, and whether or not his father will indeed still be around. Among all the B/V fanfics I've read this definitely goes on my favorites list and i'm very, very picky about writing! You asked if us readers have any questions for you and all I can say is, I'm really waiting to hear about Vegeta's brother, and how on earth are you going to tie Piccolo's background and story into all of this? Again, super excited, but you're probably bored of me telling you that again and again! I can't say enough, but one scene in particular that got my heart racing was when Bulma was about to fall off the ledge of the hotel, and how you tied in the Ginyu force was excellent. Your use of tying in side stories like 18 and Krillin are flawless. Keep on writing! I'll be on the look out for your next installment, and I will definitely be reviewing again after the next chapter... now that i'm actually forced to take a break from the story. :) - Koyana |
Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: jordansmom [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2013 09:08 PDT
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I have to say that this is one of the best fanfics that I have read. I had skipped over it, thinking that I probably wouldn't like it but once I got started reading it I couldn't stop. I love it. I wish that Bunny Briefs would beat the $hit out of that old B*tch. lmfao. I can't wait for more chapters. Keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2013 08:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, and perfect! As usual, lol... XD |
Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2013 19:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love this story great update so very happy they are together |
Title: Fantastic, Captivating, Beautiful
Reviewed By: sanelyinsane7 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2013 07:55 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great fanfic. So fricking great. You have a wonderfully wicked way with words that makes reading this piece of art 1000x better than watching a movie. This story is so creative and unique. I love it to death! Please don't stop writing! |
Reviewed By: Nancy103 On: January 21, 2013 17:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another fantastic chapter!! This is one of my favorite A/U fan fictions EVER. The descriptions are so detailed, you can just visualize everything. Dickens would be proud ;-) Looking forward to your next update! |
Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2013 23:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best stories i have read i wait on the the edge of my seat for the next chapter....awesome story |
Reviewed By: rychefan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2012 18:10 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i love this story great fight scene and i am so happy they are married can't wait for the next chapter great work |
Title: Thank Kami!
Reviewed By: TFSrules [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2012 06:30 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I never expected you to best yourself, but, you have, indeed! I completely visualized this brutish fight, and it was spectacular! And, I am SO very thankful that Vegetas honor isn't being called into play (as if his inner beast would even allow it, lol!)... And, what is this sudden sprouting of evil, on your part, with Vegetas pending demise? Did I completely overlook a hint of this, earlier in the plot line? Or, was this the most obvious choice of placement, due to his realization of his duties to Bulma, and his growing heir? My, you certainly know how to keep your audience returning...admittedly, I haven't been reading, from the initial beginning of this tale, but, I assure you, I am just as deeply entangled with these characters now as any of your other fans. This update has been an early Christmas present for me, and I bow down, deeply, to you, with great thanks... The only thing that I can possibly add to what I have already stated is this: BRAVO! Well done, my friend, you, truly, never disappoint! XD |
Title: Thank you!
Reviewed By: lpwillik [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2012 23:33 PST
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I can't speak for everyone else who reads this masterpiece, but I know whenever I see the notice that there's a new chapter for this fic, I can't stop smiling and am always excited to read it and see what's in store for two of my favorite characters ever. Thank you for writing this and have a great holiday season! |
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