| "Purity Redux: Fruition" Reviews/Comments [ 128 ] |
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2017 13:22 PDT
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If Ben has trouble with Toga as father I wonder how he will react
when he realizes Inuyasha will now be his great-uncle and
Sesshomaru his grandfather. Of course that also means he will have
to claim Evan as family too, lol. I love how most of this is
shaping up but I hope Kyouhei, Manami and Hana will be ok. They all
ended up hurt by everything and I know they will have to spend time
recovering. I half suspect that Kyouhei and Nana will get together
somehow, if she can forgive him and he can convince her he doesn't
blame her for his mother's death. I am curious how the war will end
but I suspect it will be finished in another story. Not to be too
much of a bag but I do want to see what happens in #10. From what
you said here I suspect Morio has surgery to repair his balance
issues but I would like to see how it all comes out.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2017 07:01 PDT
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I'm actually at a loss. The depth of the twistedness of Ben's
parents, the weight of having killed his parents and Kyouhei's
helplessness in watching his friend kill his mother and then having
to cut her open. There is just so much pain here and written so
poignantly - thank you for that. I do hope the cub survives and
that will be the start of healing for them all. Although I'm not
settled yet, the threat to the family still remains. Can Sess just
hunt down Teswhatshisface and end this all please?
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2017 02:38 PDT
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OMG I hope Kyouhei doesn't die. I could feel Ben's turmoil in these
last few chapters. :'(
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2017 10:49 PDT
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Hold on Kyouhei, nii-san is on his way! I can't imagine the torture
that his parents are inflicting on him. I'm sure this confrontation
will not be easy on Ben, I'm sitting here counting down to your
next update. Though, despite being on the edge of my seat and
refreshing the page in hopes of a new chapter a part of me is
slightly amused. I think when it comes to asking for Charity's
hand, Ben may regret beating up on his father-in-law. Thanks Sue
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2017 19:32 PDT
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Oh my gosh! This has got me on the edge of my seat! All these
wonderful chapters got me trying to sneak in bits on my phone at
work! All the men better get on the move to go save Kyouhei! Would
love to see Inuyasha and Sesshomaru kicking some ass again!
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Reviewed By: floopyloopyoopy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2017 19:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
The excitement is building! I look forward to reading the rest of
the story. I still love your writing and imagination. Thank you for
continuing to share with us!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2017 15:08 PDT
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Every time I started reading I was super excited to see MORE
chapters!! :,) you made my day lol. I'm ecstatic and just a little
nosey question how has your muse been feeling about the other
Purity Story? I'm just adore your universe :)
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2017 10:43 PDT
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Well, craps getting real, and the troops are gathering. The bad
guys want everything out in the open and humans along with hanyou
eliminated or enslaved. Team Taisho is going to have to stomp a LOT
of idiot ass in order to quell this thing. Ben is going to have to
rescue his little brother, and stomp his father into the ground
without killing him or his pregnant mother...then go home and mate
Charity. Did I miss anything? Does this mean that we are going to
get to see Sess in his true form? Gin is going to be hurt that her
Oji-chan lied to her about being too old to shift anymore. LOL this
is getting so exciting, I can't wait, Sue, so please put me on the
more posts the better team. Think you, and love the way your mind
works.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2017 09:22 PDT
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Eeeeekkkk two chapters! There's so much happening and I'm afraid
for Kyouhei. His parents wouldn't kill him would they? But all
we've seen so far suggests that they would. Thank goodness Charity
specialises in plants maybe she can save Manami. I feel awful for
Ben, no matter what these are his parents what an awful decision
and blow he will have to make. Also, in all this where is Mikio? He
wasn't at the move and neither was Madison and there was some
mention of surgery. I do hope he is okay.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2017 04:10 PDT
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I've been loving the chapters!!! especially when Inuyasha came down
just to talk to his great niece I thought it was super sweet. Are
you doing like a purity subseries? what is the whole redux thing??
I'm really curious. I like it especially since knowing you planned
to end the series with Gunnar's story and mikio's is #10, and I
believe you said gunnar's was 11, its nice to be getting more
stories from this beloved universe you've created. I hope you get
back to Mikio's story, I caught a glimpse of what would happen when
you mentioned Madison cancelling on babysitting her brother due to
a surgery, which I took could only mean one thing. I won't ruin it
for the others, but I think you know what I mean. I'm
excited...can't wait to read more!!!
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 19, 2017 04:10 PDT
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Hey Sue I'm not logged in but its me oblivion-bringr. I've been
loving the chapters!!! especially when Inuyasha came down just to
talk to his great niece I thought it was super sweet. Are you doing
like a purity subseries? what is the whole redux thing?? I'm really
curious. I like it especially since knowing you planned to end the
series with Gunnar's story and mikio's is #10, and I believe you
said gunnar's was 11, its nice to be getting more stories from this
beloved universe you've created. I hope you get back to Mikio's
story, I caught a glimpse of what would happen when you mentioned
Madison cancelling on babysitting her brother due to a surgery,
which I took could only mean one thing. I won't ruin it for the
others, but I think you know what I mean. I'm excited...can't wait
to read more!!!
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2017 14:20 PDT
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Unless mine eyes deceive me you treated us to an early chapter.
Thanks Sue. Now please let Ben get back to Japan and save Manami
because his father can only have ugly plans in store.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2017 18:34 PDT
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I've wondered if somehow Ben was the only youkai without crests and
here there are placed where it suits him. I agree with Ben's gut
feeling and I too am worried about Manami and Kyouhei. I really
like how you've written Charity's process of dealing with the
fight. Healing and acceptance are processes, others can encourage
and guide you but ultimately if it doesn't come from you it won't
work. I love how you managed to bring the American Purity contigent
under one roof for the move, their interactions with each other
make me smile and of course it ended with a spar. So... they have
babies...they've moved in together...when is Ben going to
propose/mate her. Does Inuyasha need to give Ben a talk on the
dangers of a delayed mating? Thanks for the chapter Sue
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2017 05:00 PDT
Comment/Review:
I have to admit I'm beginning to feel uneasy as well. That's how
well you convey the emotions your characters feel. Always reading
even though your moving too fast for me to review lol. Great Chap
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2017 16:21 PDT
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Fans herself. Re-reads and continues to fan herself. Do panthers
purr Sue?
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