| "Purity Redux: Metempsychosis" Reviews/Comments [ 138 ] |
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Title: Evloner
Reviewed By: evlonerhotmailcom [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2017 22:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Chapter! I wonder what upset Ash more, seeing Jenna in those
clothes or receiving the proposal? Jenna will not be working at the
club anymore, but I hope we still see more of Carol.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2017 15:49 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm laughing my butt off; a thwarted proposal, an infuriated
Kyouhei and a surprised fire youkai. This is not going to go down
well for anyone involved.
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2017 10:41 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oh snap! I was wondering when he was gonna figure out where she
sneaks off to at night! The next chapter should be very interesting
lol
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2017 10:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
Kels.. damn auto correct. Anyways I look forward to the next
chapter!
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2017 10:40 PDT
Comment/Review:
I love kale! Daddy needs a smiley face! Damn straight he does!!
Love it!
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Reviewed By: Sora On: July 28, 2017 02:54 PDT
Comment/Review:
I'm still here, still reading. I was delighted to see you started
to post again. I think I have followed you since Purity 4 or 5 was
still being posted although I admit I'm sparse on leaving reviews.
I never have much to say other than I love your work.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2017 02:17 PDT
Comment/Review:
Indegistion Kyouhei? Really? At least Ben recognised it. Well this
will only make things more funny (for me) when they pan out. Kells
is adorable and I think lessons with Bas will be great for him.
Thanks for the chapter Sue.
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Reviewed By: Quinn On: July 27, 2017 22:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so excited to see where this story will go!! I've been reading
your wonderful creations for years now and always get excited for
new uploads! However, I have noticed(at least from my end) when I
go to your authors page, the last known update date is wrong. That
threw me off a couple of times! Anyway, your writing is amazing and
always brings a smile to my face!=)
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2017 08:46 PDT
Comment/Review:
Kels with a toy sword does sound like a frightening thing lol and
poor jessa definitely needs to know how to defend herself,
especially if she's gonna be working with creeps
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2017 15:20 PDT
Comment/Review:
Kyouhei, Kyouhei, Kyouhei (Ashur is still growing on me) I do
believe you may be beginning to thaw. Though Jessa's side job still
looms as do its consequences. Also Sue, could you please at some
point put Kells and Evan together in the same room? I think they'd
have a lot of fun.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2017 15:25 PDT
Comment/Review:
Well this is all a very bad idea isn't it. Especially as there's
been no mention of formal defence training for our dear lady. Ashur
is going to be even less pleased than he already is. It's the
makings of a train wreck. Thanks for the update Sue.
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2017 12:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
Okay now I'm side eyeing Jess's first she goes off in desperation
with a strange woman, second she sneaks out and has a child promise
not to tell their parent (I'm a mom so I'm irked lol) then she
doesn't have the forethought to ask Asher about HOW she can go
about getting the legal papers for working. *sigh* I get Asher was
being a duck face but putting herself in danger I a strange country
isn't the best idea. Lets hope she can protect herself
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2017 02:20 PDT
Comment/Review:
So if Jessa is his mate, Ashur and Ben really are brothers who make
it point to meet their teen mates hundreds of years later.
Hopefully this one doesn't wait 26 years but you never know,
Kyouhei and Ashur are very different people, the playfulness is all
gone (understandably). Kells'question made me sad, such an
exuberant child who realises he lacks something. Maybe he'll get a
mama out of all of this and become a panther like his uncle/big
brother. Thanks for the update Sue.
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2017 17:12 PDT
Comment/Review:
How can they pee with no penis... God I loved that. Had me cracking
up giving my child a bath lol. I have good thoughts about this
story already!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2017 16:43 PDT
Comment/Review:
That Damn Myrna lol. He's definitely in a mood with the not so
compassionate wording he used for Jess's' father. But then again he
didnt have the same relationship with his parents as she has, I'm
sure. Seems like this might be something deep if the youkai just
pushed her out her home. I'll be reading lol great Chap
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