| "Purity Redux: Metempsychosis" Reviews/Comments [ 138 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2017 15:51 PDT
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Well the dancing went much better than I expected. No one is dead.
Definitely a sad chapter, the turmoil they're both suffering is
clear. Though sometimes you have to break something down completely
before it can be rebuilt stronger. I hope that's the case here. Oh
and btw, Carol and Chelsea would make great friends. I imagine them
linking up would strike fear into the hearts of the Phillips men.
Thanks Sue.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2017 15:52 PDT
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This made me smile. They're getting to know each other finally,
without burning cuffs or Ashur running away. Maybe some words from
Ben will help with the age thing, actually maybe not Ben,
definitely more Charity. I do wonder what he has planned for day
two. I hope it leads to more letting go/ opening up by Ashur,he
can't keep punishing himself. Thanks Sue.
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2017 07:38 PDT
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About time they went on a proper date!! Dinner on a cruise sounds
so romantic! All they need now is a little slow dancing :) maybe
this is just what Ashur needs to crack his wall so he can start
healing. And I always say, a way to a women's heart is definitely a
horse lol. Have a good weekend Sue!
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2017 04:37 PDT
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So Devlin ran away and these two are still running around in
circles while danger creeps ever closer. And there I was berating
Ben with Charity, clearly it's all genetic. I do hope Ian gets what
is due to him in this story. Thanks for updating Sue.
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Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2017 19:57 PDT
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Wonder what is Ashur thinking now. Thanks for the update. :)
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2017 12:22 PDT
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Sorry I haven't reviewed I've been reading I just... it's been one
of those weeks ya know. When things are overwhelming and I'd never
thought little romantic me would want to step away from love. Your
stories help even if real life love is harsh and hurtful this love
you write shows how it happens but can also help you grow. Thanks
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2017 17:39 PDT
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Aww her poor horse... she never did get to see him again:( And it
can be hard to admit that your jealous, even to yourself. Let's
hope he doesn't get set on fire again lol I'm surprised the earth
wasn't shaking when Ashur walked up to that. Let's see if they can
undig themselves out of this mess!
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2017 12:12 PDT
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LOL...shoe's on the other foot now! She threatened to set hin on
fire again, I am SO glad that I'm not 18 anymore. LOL
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2017 08:21 PDT
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I guess I spoke too soon about a kiss huh? These two and making a
right mess of things.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2017 15:13 PDT
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Kells is adorable, truly. Manami always gets such a bad initial
reception because she's pretty. Jessa should consider herself lucky
there was no kiss this time to work through. As for Kyouhei/Asher,
he may be smug right now but Devlin is going to turn up much sooner
than later and unlike Jessa I doubt he's going to let it be known.
Three weeks of just adult time is going to be interesting. Thanks
Sue
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Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2017 19:56 PDT
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This is getting more interesting. I can't wait for the next
chapter. By the way Kells is my favorite character in this story,
he just says the funniest things.
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Reviewed By: Quinn On: August 12, 2017 09:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have just started my new job 2 weeks ago and this is my first day
off. Reading your work has been such a treat! Thank you for sharing
it!
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2017 09:05 PDT
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Well better late than never on starting to track down her horse! It
didn't take the neighbor long to figure out the horse thing
either... Ashur better step it up. I have a feeling he's not gonna
be happy when he finds out about this dude hanging around jessa...
And I adore kells lol babies indeed lolol
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Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2017 07:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual, I'm enjoying this story immensely. However, I don't trust
that Devlin at all. I think I know who he really is. If I'm right,
Jessa better be on her guard. Kells is just adorable. Looking
forward to the rest of the story.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2017 04:02 PDT
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Wait. Wait. Good looking, Horse riding, aristocratic Brit moves in
next door to Jessa. Potential chosen suitor of Jessa has no photo,
public appearances and mystery mother and is currently nowhere to
be found. Thank goodness Manami is stopping by, she will shed some
light on this. Maybe he'll turn out to be Manami's mate and not
real competition for Ashur. Thanks Sue
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