| "Purity Redux: Metempsychosis" Reviews/Comments [ 138 ] |
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2017 18:31 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oh my, Sue, you have finally written someone who sticks his foot in
it WORSE than InuYasha! I cant stop laughing...makes it hard to
type! LOLOLOLOLOL
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Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2017 23:23 PDT
Comment/Review:
Oh dear lord. That chapter was hilarious! MacDouchbag is going to
be so pissed! Can't wait to read that scene. Ashur and Jessa really
do need to talk about Hana.
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2017 12:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
It never occured to me just how repressed Ashur had been raised,
not only with abusive parents, but as a japanese national. Shew,
talk about putting the cart before the horse, I feel as bad for
Ashur as I do for Jessa. Makes me glad Im single cause these two
are doing and thinking every wrong thing possible and probable to
mess themselves up. Well, they are mated now, though Ashur did that
backwards too, and it isn't finished, cause they haven't done the
marking yet, AND Jessa doesn't know yet, though her Youkai should,
I can't wait for the next post, I'm starting to think you should
change their names to Laurel and Hardy!
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2017 18:14 PDT
Comment/Review:
Ashur you little shit! You still need to actually have a
conversation!! More so now! Welp... at least they are together lol
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Reviewed By: Adjectivenoun On: October 10, 2017 22:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah the suspense! The miscommunication! The drama! I just want to
shake them both by the shoulders and sit them down - I can't wait
for more chapters... this story is keeping me on the edge of my
seat!
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Reviewed By: Sora On: October 10, 2017 18:28 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hey Sue, just wanted to let you know I am still reading and I still
think you are fabulous. I really hope Ashur can get through to
Jessa this time. My heart breaks for her!
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Reviewed By: Sora On: October 10, 2017 18:27 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hey Sue, just wanted to let you know I am still reading and I still
think you are fabulous. I really hope Ashur can get through to
Jessa this time. My heart breaks for her!
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2017 17:35 PDT
Comment/Review:
Thank god!!! Someone finally told him what the fuck he was doing!
Last chance dude...
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2017 11:56 PDT
Comment/Review:
I just feel so bad for her :( God dammit Ashur...
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2017 18:24 PDT
Comment/Review:
He keeps using the wrong head to think with:( even after gin had
her talk with him.... thank God for her tho, someone has to have
some wits about them at this party.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2017 04:32 PDT
Comment/Review:
Hi sue!!! I’m officially back from deployment.
It’s been awhile since I’ve
been able to review. This chapter was full of emotion and honestly
I most enjoyed Gin’s role in the one because we
got to see the wise and vulnerable side of her. She was MVP of this
chapter. As for the rest I really wish you would post chapter 60
today,..give me something to look forward too since my whole family
is asleep but
I’m on European
time and I’m wide awake lol.
It’s good to be
back!!!
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2017 17:36 PDT
Comment/Review:
The damn formalities is gonna be the death of him. Be a little rude
and go get your mate! I'm sure they would later understand lol
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Reviewed By: Quinn On: October 04, 2017 21:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
Did you base Myrna off of the actual Myrna Loy? Because I just
realized the similarities and got really excited!
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2017 17:22 PDT
Comment/Review:
You're just teasing now Sue. I'm here willing them together and it
is not working and tomorrow is Friday...I think if you leave it on
a cliffie I'll combust. Kyouhei pull your socks up and find your
mate preferably before the auction which is sure to either send her
into a spiral or torch the venue.
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2017 16:52 PDT
Comment/Review:
About time someone tells him how much of a ass he's been. Now go
fix it!!
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