| "Purity Redux: Metempsychosis" Reviews/Comments [ 138 ] |
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2017 05:17 PDT
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I like swans... I'm sure you do Devlin. I died with laughter at
that scene and I noticed that he helped heal the eagle's
wings...maybe he can help Manami. I'm not above begging for this
pairing Sue. Consider this me begging. As for our resident fire and
earth Youkai...Kells will provide a distraction and laughter but
they are in danger of hurting each other. Jessa is beginning to
feel used and Ashur is holding on to guilt. How in the world are
they going to work this out?
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2017 09:34 PDT
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I like swans lolol what a wonderful pick up line lol loves it Sue,
I'm so glad kells is finally home, it's hilarious he rather cuddle
Jessa... maybe it's because she smells like daddy too... :)
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2017 12:17 PDT
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Omg... so much has happened. I've been sneaking moments away at
work and home to try and catch up and all of the lovely chapters.
I'm so happy that they finally got together, then Ashur has to go
and make it seem like she has to be a secret that he sneaks off to
meet... then Hana showing up. Realizing you love someone is hard,
figuring out how to help fight their demons is harder. Especially
when they don't give you much to go on to help. Ugh! Men!
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2017 10:15 PDT
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Lovely, just lovely. It makes me sorry that I'm too old for that
kind of romance any more. They are so good for one another, he is
the rock she leans on, and she is the softness, wonder, and hope
that was never in his life growing up. I'm loving how this
relationship is developeing. Just lovely.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2017 04:27 PDT
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Cain, Bas, Hana. It's all kicking off isn't it? My heart just broke
a little at Jessa's admission... things are going to get a lot
worse before they get better aren't they? Phillips men aren't very
bright in the area of relationships. Thanks for the update Sue.
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Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2017 10:46 PDT
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Devlin is a nice guy. I hope we get to know him a little bit
better. Another great chapter, as always. Thanks for updating!!
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2017 04:33 PDT
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So many excellent chapters. A few that had me fanning myself but
they're still not there are they. Still both so hurt from life and
hiding from what they're feeling, if they recognise it at all.
Maybe Ashur needs to speak to Ben about mates, I highly doubt it
was a conversation he had with his parents. Jessa has been such an
interesting character to read as she is young and with it brings
all the thinking and decision making of a teen. So very different
to Kagome but then again running around after Shikon shards would
temper any teen. Devlin has turned out to be quite lovely, I still
suspect he's the Duke's son so how about you mate him off before
the whole thing comes to the fore, Manami is still unattached. Will
we find out what kind of Youkai he is? And as for Kells, he'll be
back soon and the adults will have no time to do adult things. If
Jessa is frustrated now then I feel sorry for her. Thanks for
updating Sue and I hope you're feeling a lot better. M
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2017 09:43 PDT
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Well, I've been sick and came back to WHOA! LOL, I had to read a
few chapters to catch up and I gotta tell you, I LOVE this story.
Jessa is just emough of a spitfire to really wake Ashur up and pull
him out of his loop. I MISS KELLS, and can't wait till he meets
Evan. He'd be the perfect Mini Me!
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2017 09:44 PDT
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Aww that has to warm your heart when kells called :) and it really
is a sad day that she doesn't know what a smore is... Ashur should
fix that before kells comes home so he doesn't eat them all lol I'm
glad he filled her in on what is going on with the investigation,
we saw how well it didn't work out with Ben and charity the keeping
the ladies in the dark.
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Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2017 13:01 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Kells calling Jessa, is so cute! can't wait for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Sora On: August 25, 2017 09:29 PDT
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Great job as always Sue! Still reading and putting pieces together.
Thank you for sharing with us.
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Reviewed By: Sora On: August 25, 2017 09:29 PDT
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Great job as always Sue! Still reading and putting pieces together.
Thank you for sharing with us.
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Reviewed By: Silent Reader [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2017 16:55 PDT
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Well isn't Ashur thawing, having Carol around just for Jessa's sake
is very sweet considering he's such a grumpy old man. Though I'm
sure that as soon as Kells is back he will look back on this as an
awful decision. I do wonder how Carol intends on helping the
hapless lovers along. I guess I'll find out soon enough.
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2017 15:58 PDT
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Aww good job Ashur!! Way to win hero points. Taking her to a pub
that has dancing and letting her bestie move in. Now they just
gotta be careful with the training or Carol might see some fire
flying about and freak
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2017 19:46 PDT
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And of course Ashur can't enjoy a simple night out dancing lol that
lady is lucky jessa didn't see her making a move on her man... You
know what they say about red heads lol
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