| "Purity Redux: Metempsychosis" Reviews/Comments [ 138 ] |
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2017 19:42 PDT
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Once they get married and maybe pop out that surprise baby, I think
he should get a portrait of them all done for the castle. With them
all smiling. Bring a new era of happiness to the family home lol I
can just picture kells now trying to go after nessie lol or is that
Scotland? I can never remember lol
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2017 16:13 PDT
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Iâ€͐ 2;m really curious as to this whole prophecy.
What is specifically special about Jessa???? And honestly I get
that there are tai Youkai’s; but if sesshoumaru
knows that MacDonnough is crooked af then why does he allow him to
keep his position especially after his role in the uprising,
that’s like the president knowing that a member
of his cabinet or like the attorney general is having illegal
dealings and still keeping them in their position? Idk I feel like
sesshoumaru is a bit too removed for my liking and he could
definitely prevent some of the tragedies that have occurred. I
can’t wait for MacDonnough to get his
comeuppance tho. And I hope Dev knocks his twisted father
out...saying that his mate is expendable! Not to mention any child
that Devlin has....is Devs child! Wtf I just got mad. Lol
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Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2017 21:39 PDT
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Oh but this is getting good. I can't wait until both Carl and Ian
find out their plans are for naught. They're both going to crap
when Ashur shows them that will. Heeheehee.
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2017 11:32 PDT
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I love that they are looking and feeling like a family more and
more each day. That’s exactly what they both
need. Since I’m just catching up
how’s your Mom? I hope everything is better.
Great Chap
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2017 08:49 PDT
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Aww mommy and kells day! Love it!!! And of course we have a secret
will! Feel it's very Cinderella story lol
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2017 10:55 PDT
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Nice going Jessa!!! Way to put the fear into those rotten boys! And
now Kells has a mommy:) I'll keep you and your family in my prayers
Sue
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Reviewed By: smpnst [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2017 09:51 PDT
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This is my favorite chapter so far :') thank you so much for
updating, I hope everything goes better for you today
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Reviewed By: xSerenityx020 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2017 16:03 PDT
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Awe im so glad kells had a nice day playing with them both! Sounds
like somethings going down at schook he doesnt wanna talk about.
Sounds like a surprise lunch at school visit to me...
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2017 11:47 PDT
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Itâ€T 82;s been awhile but I’m
always reading. I was hoping he took it upon himself to ACTUALLY
speak to her. The poor kid Jessa could’ve very
well ended up differently if it wasn’t for her
Da. I’m glad she had at least him and I feel
pity for her mother. Holding on to others version of you is a
terrible way to live.
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Reviewed By: M On: October 19, 2017 21:20 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow, poor little jess :( I'm so glad to finally hear more about her
childhood. Can't wait to see/read what happens next!
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Reviewed By: M On: October 19, 2017 17:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes! Finally some light fluff :) I'm so glad he put those nasty
girls in their place :)
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2017 18:30 PDT
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I loved this chapter!!! It’s about time he shut
those nasty little bitches up. Maybe now Jessa will realize he
really does want her. Kells was the mvp this chapter. Lol he
straight up told like daddy fix it cuz they’re
pissing me off talking about my mommy lol I love it!
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2017 18:31 PDT
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Oh my, Sue, you have finally written someone who sticks his foot in
it WORSE than InuYasha! I cant stop laughing...makes it hard to
type! LOLOLOLOLOL
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Reviewed By: Goldeninugoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2017 23:23 PDT
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Oh dear lord. That chapter was hilarious! MacDouchbag is going to
be so pissed! Can't wait to read that scene. Ashur and Jessa really
do need to talk about Hana.
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2017 12:42 PDT
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It never occured to me just how repressed Ashur had been raised,
not only with abusive parents, but as a japanese national. Shew,
talk about putting the cart before the horse, I feel as bad for
Ashur as I do for Jessa. Makes me glad Im single cause these two
are doing and thinking every wrong thing possible and probable to
mess themselves up. Well, they are mated now, though Ashur did that
backwards too, and it isn't finished, cause they haven't done the
marking yet, AND Jessa doesn't know yet, though her Youkai should,
I can't wait for the next post, I'm starting to think you should
change their names to Laurel and Hardy!
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