| "A Lesson In Humility" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Reviewed By: Happy clam On: January 23, 2010 02:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!
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Title: loschicos.es.503.lesly@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Lesly Hernandez On: August 30, 2009 20:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
keep writing please! best Trunks fanfic I've ever read... love it rather; continue please =[
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Reviewed By: ChiseChitose On: March 04, 2009 12:26 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, so I'm a lurker. I admit it! I'm sorry! I will say that I've been lurking since this story came out in 2002! PLEASE DON'T GIVE UP ON IT!!! PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Black_Ink [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2009 09:52 PST
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it's a shame this won't be finished, but I understand when you lose interest and it just becomes a chore to continue something. It was pretty good, aside from any spelling/grammar errors, it was quite enjoyable. Thank you for sharing!
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Reviewed By: Amazon-Saiyan_Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2009 21:13 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it! pretty plz finish this story its great! i wanna know wat happen with trunks and pan.
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Reviewed By: your biggest fan On: October 27, 2008 00:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is one of the best fanfics i've ever read. i love it! the story gets better and better. I'm hooked! i hope you update soon!
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Title: i don't fricking believe it
Reviewed By: ladybugg0000 also known as ladybugg1234_2004 On: January 23, 2008 00:09 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I haven't been to this site in about 2 years, and when I finally come back I greeted with such a sweet surprise. Goodness I thought that you abandoned this story all together, but I'm glad that you didn't. This is me doing the happy dance. :) :) :) :) :) I loved it and I can't wait to see the changes in Trunks....or not. He's so bad. Also congrats on having your baby. So seeing how busy you are, I won't harass you about updating soon. I know how kids can be, but I'll make sure to come back here and see if you've updated. You've just made me one happy woman.Laters.
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Reviewed By: Toki_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 16:05 PST
Comment/Review:
Really Really good so far. Hope you do update soon please!^-^
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Title: GREAT!
Reviewed By: YoungS On: December 28, 2007 12:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this ^_^ I've been reaing it since summer and was seriously happy when I finally seen you had updated it I cant wait to see the rest !
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Reviewed By: goodknight On: October 20, 2007 21:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god i love this story i read it all in like one day it just caught my interest through out the whole story. i really hope you update soon PLEASE =)
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Reviewed By: Izebird On: September 27, 2007 00:10 PDT
Comment/Review:
omg. YOU FREAKIN ROCK. :D PLEASE CONTINUEEE!! I've been reading this forever. IM SO GLAD YOU UPDATED.
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Reviewed By: Bellatrix Armstrong On: September 26, 2007 10:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...Trunks did clean up his act. I'm impressed. And he's finally taken an intrest in Pan-chan!!!!! Yay Pan-chan!!!! (claps histerically) and Andrea is finally getting off her french ass and being put to work...haha... Enjoyed this chapter!!!!!! Kudoes!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 22:19 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I SWEAR something's wrong with mm.org's system! You're on my Author Alert list and I'm supposed to receive an e-mail every time you update, but it never came! I might have to report this to mm.org's staff. But anyway, I'm glad that Trunks turned over a new leaf. It makes me wonder how far the date will go with Pan...and it makes me wonder when everyone else is going to find out about them. I was saddend that Veggie-chan (LoL!) was angry about what he done, but it's understandable. Either way, whenever you decide to update, just know what I'll be waiting.
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Reviewed By: ElctricButrfli [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 01:22 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! Another chappie! And he's finally making a move! I'm as happy as a kitten with tuna! lol. I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: forgot sign in name On: September 13, 2007 07:16 PDT
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Loving it. Good pan/trunks scene! Hopefully more to come. Update!^-^
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