| "A Lesson In Humility" Reviews/Comments [ 172 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bellatrix Armstrong On: September 09, 2007 11:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It looks like Trunks has finally saw the light!!!!! Thank goodness!!!!! I wonder what's going to happen to Marron now that Trunks doesn't want her around...and what about our sweet little Pan?!? Will she get what she wants? Or will she be bitting off more than she can chew? But all things aside; what's going to happen between Bra and Goten? They seem to be getting along...for now anyway... But let's all hope and pray that Trunks keeps his you-know-what in his pants this time!!!!!!! I enjoyed this chapter and the spelling and grammar...as you said, were
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Reviewed By: ForBloodIsLife [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2007 16:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so so so sooooooo freaking happy that you've posted again! I have been waiting, along with many of your other fans, and now I can breath again! Well, I'm sure it will turn into little pants until the next chapter comes out. :) You have a great writing style and this story and kept me enthralled since I first read it. Keep up the awesome work! (and congrats!)
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Reviewed By: ElctricButrfli [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2007 23:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry I have never..or have I...lol written a review. My computer is always acting up so it rarely lets me write one. Thankfully though I just recently got some things fix on it so I'll be able to review more often. I really REALLY enjoy reading your fic! For a minute there I was beginning to wonder if it was gonna be finished. I look forward to the updates. There isn't many good fics out there that catch my interest but this one has. Keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chappie! Oh! And congrates on having a baby!
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Reviewed By: forgot sign in name On: August 27, 2007 10:48 PDT
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I think its getting good, but I do wish there are more Trunks and Pan scenes, I hope we're getting there soon! Update^-^
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Reviewed By: ss10009 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 07:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A great chapter filled with several turning points. I'm happy that Trunks ditched Marron (finally) so he and Pan can be together. Their relationship was so weird and unnatural. It's a good thing Bra showed up, too. Otherwise Goten would be no more. Yea for his survival! Anyways, great chapter, update soon!
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2007 06:17 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That's interesting. Usually I'll get a e-mail notification saying that you updated one of your stories. But either way I still liked the chapter. Whether you decide to finish this story or not just know that I did enjoy reading it over the years.
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 10:36 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know GG, you are really missed. I've been to this site everyday since January (since you last updated) just to see if you're going to continue with this story. But from the looks of it, you're probably not. I just wanted to tell you (from one of your biggest fans) that I really enjoyed this story (so far) and I'm saddened because it doesn't look like it'll ever be complete.
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Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2006 08:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry up with the updates, come on you cant just leave us hanging on like this...pleaseeee...this story is really getting interesting.
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Title: Reviewing(a little push)
Reviewed By: Ameana [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2006 18:10 PDT
Comment/Review:
Great story, I love it, pretty original. I just wish you'd update a bit faster, and with more T/P scenes. Anyways hopefully this will review will give you the push you need to update this really good fic...update soon please!
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Title: Continue
Reviewed By: ss10009 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 09:21 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a GREAT fiction and you must continue it now. I am dying to know what will happen next. When will Trunks and Pan finally be together? Will it be Goten and Bra or late Goten and an angry daughter? I have to knoooow!
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: Mia Skywalker [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 10:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Argh! You have to finish this! I got to the end and I'm like, where's the rest? Unfortunately you haven't updated since January so I don't know if you're even going to finish. T_T Not that I can complain about lack of updating.... I really loved this. I think this is a GREAT story. Trunks and Goten as "man whores" - it's awesome! ^_^ Um... would you please update? How about if I cover Vegeta in whipped cream and give him to you if you do? ^_^
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: Chibi Halo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2006 20:02 PDT
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Thank you for submitting your piece to FFARG. You have a good start to your fic with a nice grasp of grammar. The story has a good flow and pace to it. There were a few things, however, that could use some renovating. For instance I noticed a couple of places where you may have not removed suggestions from your betas. Also, in this passage "very unlikely it would happen" you need to chose to use "it" or "that" not both words for the sentence as a whole. I would also suggest taking out the references to modern music and film in this chapter as they do not fit in with the Dragonball world. Calling it rock music and movies would better fit in with the world the story takes place in. All in all you have a good start to your piece with good grammar and pace. Keep up the good work and thank you once again for submitting your piece to FFARG.
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Title: Aw, come on!
Reviewed By: ghoul [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 11:11 PDT
Comment/Review:
Write some more? People like this story! I personally don't like to wait *this* long for a new chapter, especially when it's *this* good! >_< LOVELOVELOVE!
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Title: !!11
Reviewed By: ghoul [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2006 10:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
Aw, new chapter, come on!!! >__<
Good stories like this should be updated like .. all the time!
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Title: A Lesson In Humility
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2006 08:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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