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| "Trinity" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] | | Pages (7): [ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 › » ] | Reviewed By: quartzorosa On: June 15, 2007 01:06 CDT
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I should have writen this in my other review, but I'll do it here instead: Your characterization is amazing and I just love your style. That's why I should thank this person who woke you to DBZ fics again. Goku and Veggie need you. I just hope Blue Siren, Alfarrar and other great authors would receive "waking reviews" as well... but I'm glad you're back.
| Reviewed By: Akoya On: May 19, 2007 23:36 CDT
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Well now, I didn't actually expect you to have updated when I checked your profile, but this was a pleasant surprise. I hope to see more, hopefully with a smaller time in between?
| Reviewed By: qwaynt On: March 11, 2007 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Yes! I am so glad you updated. I remember coming across this a while back, but alas I could not remember the title or author (so very sorry about that). This story is just so much fun and the latest chapter a great addition. From ChiChi ready to do battle to a confused and worried Dende, I laughed so much reading this chapter I kept getting strange looks from my husband. Wonderful job and I'm so glad you updated, now that I have a title and author I can keep tabs on this fun romp. Oh and I didn't read your summary, I plan on going back and re-reading the entire thing. So much more fun that way
| Title: 9
Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 09:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAAAAY!! you updated! *starts jumping around* so this fic isn't dead ^_^;; that's good. loved this chapter, will there be more fluent updates now or is this a one off?? ~ i hope you do update soon ^-^
| Reviewed By: Shattered Dreams [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 00:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have no idea how happy I was to see the alert for this fic appear in my inbox. So glad this story still has a heartbeat XD
| Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this fic even more. Don't stop now, keep writing. I can't wait to find out what Vegito's plan to have both of them is. Don't keep us in the dark for so long this time. As for rewriting the chapter, its just great as it is now. Now, back to the keyboard, your darling fan club demands more. We'll get out the sporks if we have to.
| Reviewed By: FireFly1 On: March 10, 2007 18:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
SQUEE!! My eyes nearly bugged out of my head when I saw this fic updated! I've been checking back with it for nearly 3 years, you know! *shakes fist like mad* But I'm so very happy you've picked it up again and I hope it doesn't take another couple of years to see chapter 8 :P You stopped at such a cliff-hanger though! Why did Trunks and Goten need to fuse? What's going on between ChiChi and Goku?! I MUST KNOW! *bows many times* PLEASE cotinue soon and thank you a thousand times for not abandoning this fic.
| Reviewed By: FireFly01 On: February 21, 2007 00:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heeeeeeeey! It's been 2 years! Please update! I adore this fic and was around when you first started posting your DBZ ficcies. I've been stalking around ever since and I'd hate to see this fic left unfinished like so many others. Please, it's too good to be abandoned. PLEASE update! *puppy dog eyes*
| Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Katiefoolery [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2006 04:31 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gods, I have the worst habit of thinking I've reviewed things and then discovering that was all in my imagination. *slaps self* So here goes: I love this story to little bits. Your characterisation is superb and the whole concept behind the story is amazing. And my glancing over chapter eight to re-fresh my memory has convinced me to just re-read the thing from the start.
| Title: Trinity
Reviewed By: SonSofiaNecro On: November 20, 2006 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, sweet! Vegitto finally got a piece of that hot tight ass! Yeah! Man, you put so many authors to shame, I never thought I could find something so good to read, and it's long and keep my interest every step of the way. This story is the hottest thing I've ever laid my eyes on. There is only one fic to rival this one, but it's a long oneshot. This is too good to be true, you are ridicously talented and it gets better with each chapter. You are the queen of fanfiction, yaoi, and if you have other heterosexual (which I'm not fond of) talents, then you are the queen of all fanfiction. You rule!
| Title: Trinity
Reviewed By: SonSofiaNecros On: November 20, 2006 20:22 CST
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This time, instead of countering it as he normally would have, Goku simply grabbed Vegeta's ankle, pulled it up high, and used his momentum and his fist to punch the royal saiyajin in the balls as hard as he could. I was so surprised, tears flowed out of my eyes/ OH MY GOD, He punched Vegeta in the balls?! As hard as he could?! Can Vegeta even have anymore sexual relations without the help of the dragon?!
| Title: Trinity
Reviewed By: SonSofiaNecros On: November 20, 2006 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Vejitto understood all of this, and its meaning for him, on an intellectual level. The rest of his mind had gone through a simpler formula to reach the same place: Goku was a fine piece of ass + Goku was unhappy + Vejitto was lonely = Goku getting his lovely bones jumped as soon as possible.' Oh yeah, now that's logic for the textbooks, true philosophy! Three things: Goku is HOT! Vegeta is HOT! And Vegitto is... well, he's hot too but not as hot as Goku even though he looks mostly like him... Still, I mean, shit, this fic is gorgeous. I've never read a story like this before, it's unique and perfect. The best story I've ever read in my life. I love you, is that okay? Not like that, but you have the talent of a god, and if I were to meet you, I would bow before you, because you are the shit! Everything in this story is so perfectly worded and described. No one knows what Vegitto is really like, but I think if Funimation had to explore something like that, you would have Vegitto down to a tee. Of that I'm certain. Write more, maybe a Gogeta, with a different spin?
| Reviewed By: starlight_dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2006 01:10 CDT
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I love this story, when will there be an update.
| Reviewed By: chibigoku [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2006 16:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok, just a warning; this is probably going to be a crappy review because i'm tired, so this is going to be short... at least i think so anywayz...~ right, i really like this fic, it's very original and sometimes i have to remember that vegito is a completely different person to either goku or vegeta... he just has odd 'quirks' if that's the right word ~ and is able to access goku's and vegeta's memory too ~ and i know it seems a bit odd for me to type this but, i like when goku gets jelous... he's sort of kawaii when he does... i don't know why but that's the feeling i get when reading this ^_^;; ~ anywayz, good fic and i hope your still updating this, it's been about 2 years now... i don't want to sound annoying or anything like that, it's just that i review alot of fics where there hasn't been an update for a series of years and i never get feedback (except for 1 time) on whether they are trying to update or not... so, yeah... this doesn't seem that short anymore now, heh *scratches head* ~ ok i'll stop u.u;; ~ just please update as soon as you can ^-^
| Reviewed By: Dead One [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2006 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope you continue this, I was crushed when I ran into a dead end. You have a talent in writing that is very hard to come buy, and I hope to see more!
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