| "Trinity" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Reviewed By: DB yaoi addict On: July 21, 2003 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a complete fan of all your stuff. But oooooooh, don't torture me with these cliffhanger endings 'cos now I probably have to wait a couple of months for ch. 7!
Lotsa lemon, please, IMHO there can never be too much lemon... |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 02:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
*screams and glomps you*
Well its about damn time you updated! And with Lemon no less!!! Good gravy was that was AWESOME *fans herself*
I love how you write everyone's interaction.... Like Piccolo and Vegeta for example; they may hate each other, but they UNDERSTAND each other at the same time....
And Goku and Vejitto flirting.... and the lemon scene.... omgomgomg.... *takes a deep breath* Sorry, don't mean to sound like a hyperactive teenager or anything ^_^ Its just that that lemon was friggin GREAT...
oh, btw, loved the last line "The prince of darkness was not amused".... hehe
perfect cliffy ending!
Hurry up and write the next chapter, pretty please!! You know you want to Xero... *nudge nudge* |
Reviewed By: Kurayami-sama On: July 20, 2003 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vegitto is so...going to get his ass kicked.
This chapter was awesome and I love it I can't
wait when you update this again so that I can
read the next chapter.
Owari~ |
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant! Absolutely Brilliant!
I have this huge smile PLASTERED on my face! My heart's still beating from that love-making scene, and then the ending! WOW! I CANNOT WAIT to see what happens in the next chapter with Vegeta's explosion! Goodness, I'll have to re-read that chapter a million and one more times than I've already re-read Chapter 4! Please update seriously soon, and I mean like light-speed soon! =))) |
Reviewed By: Sinu-Yasha On: July 20, 2003 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it update soon. |
Reviewed By: Christina G. wytygr74@hotmail.com On: June 15, 2003 16:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
well, Goku. after the way she was acting in the lab; I'd be scared of ChiChi, too. the woman is insane. makes me wonder if she'd ever really hurt those kids. humn... |
Reviewed By: Christina G. wytygr74@hotmail.com On: June 15, 2003 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, how i's love to see ChiChi suddenly blowup. she'll scream so loud she goes KAAABBOOOOMMMM!
woul;dn't that be great? |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: June 02, 2003 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I know I've said it before, but I'll say it again...
I'm not the biggest yaoi fan in the world... but I am one of your biggest fans. You have a rare gift. Thank you for sharing it with us. |
Reviewed By: Miyanon On: May 31, 2003 12:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha! I love Vegeta when he's in a jealous and possesive rage. I don't know why but it's very cute. You have a very great story here. Although I do rememeber someone needing to spork you to update it. Well, if that's what it takes to get the next chapter up soon I will! |
Reviewed By: Miyanon On: April 19, 2003 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story... is so incredibly cool! It's one of the most original yaoi fics I've seen so far! And I just love Vejitto's uh.... "reasoning" powers.
Oh and by the way, ChiChi is insane. *nods* Yup. Completely and utterly insane. I hope she gets sent to a mental asylum or something. Self-combustion actually doesn't sound like a bad thing.
Ohh. And Vegeta's really pissed off now... How is this going to affect everything? And how can Vejitto have both of them at once unless they fuse into Gogeta? .....Wow, half an hour, that's not really a lot of time.
Anyway, again, this story is so cool. And I hope you update this really soon.... Either that or I will resort to threatening you with sporks. |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2003 03:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow.. that lemon was HOT!!
Cant wait to read more and more!! YAY! This is excellent!! WOO HOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lychee SSJ [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 12:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Why must you people tease me so?! For the love of kami, hurry up and write more!!(pouts)
Let's see, Vegeta/Goku/Vejiito...hmmm, I sense a sexy saiyan sandwich in our future. And what about naughty, naughty Gohan?? Maybe he will ask Piccolo for some "help" with his little "problem", yes??(rubs hands together with big hentai grin) Ahem, not that I would ever suggest anything like that...mmmm lemony goodness...(drools) |
Reviewed By: Chibi Hoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 13:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness, you simply CANNOT leave me like that!!! I gotta find out what Vegeta does to Vegitto!!
Not to mention that concubine fantasy, too... That was very interesting to say the least... *purrs*
anyway, the story is splendiferous and you must post a new chapter soon. I'll be waiting!!
Chibi Hoshi* |
Reviewed By: Kinaele [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2003 01:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa....Interesting twist. I think that this fic is highly original. Good work. |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2003 23:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!! Jealous Vegeta!!! How FUN!! I can't WAIT to see how the confrontation between he and Vejitto pans out!!
The kiss was to DIE for!! I loved "Kissed him. Kissed me back." That was too cute! Damn. There were a couple of other quotes I wanted to remember in my review, but my damn swiss cheese brain already lost them. Damn.
LOVED the entire chapter, but I think my favorite part was that naughty Gohan having moaned HIS OWN name!! BWAHAHAHA!! LOVED IT!!
As always, can't wait for more!! But feel free to work on your Truten, first. ^.^ |
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