| "Trinity" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Reviewed By: GEMINI66 On: March 26, 2003 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I CANNOT *WAIT* UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!....MY POOR NAIL CAN'T TAKE THE WAIT...HOPE YOU POST SOON ...GREAT FIC |
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 06:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm back!
THIS is a seriously awesome yaoi fic! I think I've reread Chapter 4 four times now! You've got a great imagination and I just can't wait for your next chapter! I usually wait until a fic is complete, but I've already added this one to my Favorites!
Post soon, ok?! =) |
Reviewed By: kookie On: March 23, 2003 22:45 CST
Comment/Review:
woo hoo! This just keeps getting better and better :)
heh heh heh! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shiat... O_O SOMEONE'S GONNA GET THEIR ASS BEAT! well... someone's gonna ATTEMPT an ass beating at least ^_^
I CANNOT *WAIT* UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER!! **P-P-PLEASE HURRY!**
MUST SEE SESSY THREESOME!!! I MUST I MUST I MUST!!
*purrs lovingly at u*
hurry!! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 13:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Every time I read a new chapter of one of your fics, Xe, I find myself deciding that that particular fic is my favorite.
Now here I am back in the camp that Trinity is my favorite Xe fic. ;-)
That little trick of Gohan's to take matters into his own hands was a brilliant idea!
But Vegitto's seduction of Goku was... yummy! Now he has to figure out what to do about the... other situation. What fun! 8-D
As usual, fantastic job. |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2003 09:52 CST
Comment/Review:
Vegeta or Goku what is a Vejitto to do? Both of course. Love it so far. |
Reviewed By: alfarrar On: March 22, 2003 07:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Looking out from under her cluttered desk, A'nore kicks aside the vodka bottles and beer cans to final crawl out of her hole and peer around only to find her twin curled up in the dirty laundry corner with an expression of pure bliss on her face.*
A'nore: L'orn! L'orn! *waves hands in front of twin's face*
L'orn: *vacant eyes stare* Must...have...more...
A'nore: What? *notices discarded laptop and turns it around to read screen* OH GOD!
L'orn: Vegeta...Vegiito...Goku...Vejiito...Vegeta...Vejiito...Goku...*drools*
A'nore: Well, You've done it! She gone completely off the deep in. Every single perverted fantasy she's ever had all wrapped up in a little story called Trinity! Never thought I'd see the day this would happen. Thanks so much Xe'!
L'orn: More...Vejiito...more...Goku...more...Vegeta
A'nore: Wake up sweetness! I need you to get back to work on our stories now! L'orn! L'orn!
L'orn: Gohan...split technique...two Gohans... *drools more, her shirt is soaked*
A'nore: Aaarrgghh! Just don't hook Piccolo up with any one or I'll lose her completely! She has a thing about green. *throws twinny over shoulder and hauls her out of room* Come on little one, I have a nice padded room all ready for you.... |
Reviewed By: gemini66 On: March 13, 2003 08:21 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like the twist, and I can't wait for it to be finished keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAH!! LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!
GO, BULMA, GO!! Way to put Cheechers in her place! That bit was awesome!
The sparring bit was fun...poor Vegeta was a soprano there for an instant, eh? ROFL!!
My favorite part of course was the boys with the bondage mag!! How precious are those two chibis? And thank you for being NICE to them! I'll be sure not to let the Evil Author's League know about it! ^.^
Vejitto being so conspiratory with them was delicious!! Contributing to their delinquincy!! Bwahaha!! I liked that you commented on how the boys understood him more than any of the others. They're such good boys!! And the way he handled the bit with the mag was cute too, although I'm surprised he didn't keep it for himself!! LOL
You know you are my favorite writer in the yaoi world, and I love EVERYTHING you've EVER written (that I've read, at least) with all my heart, but I have to say it's really nice to read something you've authored that is a little lighter in tone. I ADORE dark fics, but this one is a nice bit of diversion from all the angst. I'm enjoying it VERY VERY MUCH!! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2003 23:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As usual, Xe, you've devised another fic that's captured my attention after the first few paragraphs. Your writing style is superb; I absolutely loved your description of Goku's cool-down stretches on the beach. *Sigh* You've provided such a creative explanation of the complexity of Vegitto's existence and predicament he finds himself in, and the hints you've given us so far of what we can expect are DRIVING ME CRAZY!!!
*Ahem*
I look forward to the much-anticipated pairings YOU'RE TEASING US WITH!!!
*Cough*
Great work, of course. 8-) |
Reviewed By: delihn64 On: March 07, 2003 12:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best fanfiction I've read in a long time. Your style is wonderful and smooth. It makes the actual reading enjoyable. If I have to work to hard just to read the words, I don't like it as much. The premise is also well thought out. I like the portrayal of the characters. They're close to the originals with enough quirks thrown in to make them really interesting.
There were a few points that could use some work. I like the story coming from multiple points of view, but sometimes the transitions are a little hard to follow. There were a couple spots where I didn't know who's thoughts they were. And for some reason, the word balls in the third chapter took me out of the story for a moment. I don't really know how to make a man's crotch sound less crass, but maybe there's another way to word it so that it matches the elegance of the rest of your piece. I'm really looking forward to future chapters. Keep it up. You're a really excellent writer. |
Reviewed By: shiek On: March 07, 2003 06:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more, it's absolutely outstandingly captivating!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Myself On: March 06, 2003 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
More please. |
Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 11:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Great story. Can't wait to see how the 3 of them get together. Keep it up, and update soon! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 11:23 CST
Comment/Review:
lol
Go Goku! Get him where it hurts the most! weee!!
This chapter was awesome ^_^ But WHY did it take so long for you to update!?
*smirk* Trunks and Goten with a bondage mag.... naughty little boys! shame on them! lol
As always Xero, you have out done yourself ^_^
So when does Vejiito get to go a-courtin? I can't WAIT too see that.. *snicker*
anywho, keep up the good work, and don't wait so long to update!! you're gonna kill us all if you do that again!!
~huggles n kissies~
toodles! |
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