| "Trinity" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Reviewed By: moonglaive [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 11:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Go Bulma! You tell that > Chichi off....
I love the story! The characterizations are great! Can't wait for more!! |
Reviewed By: Lauryn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 11:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally! I was beginning to think you'd abandoned this fic! ChiChi's as bitchy as ever, and I couldn't help but laugh when Goku hit Vegeta in the...er.. jewels, lol! PLEASE don't wait another three months to update! *pouts* I deserves more attention from its creator! |
Reviewed By: I Luv Vege [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 06:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is a really good fic!!! I luv it!! Its so unique and original! WELL DONE!! Please update soon!! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2003 18:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*rips her hair out*
you just stopped it! Please keep going! You're writing is hipnotic and addicting! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! gimme gimme gimme! |
Reviewed By: Spencers13 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 16:12 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow! Very unique idea! I hope you get a new chapter up soon! I'd like to see this Vejitto courting! ^_~ I'd also like to see how Vegeta gets drawn into the mix. He would seem a tougher nut to crack than Goku. I'll be watching for updates! |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my God, EXCELLENT chapter!! I LOVE your characterization of the Bitch from Hell!! Bulma getting Goten a special gi was precious...Vegeta giving Goku a job...Vejitto's musings about Goku...ALL excellent plot points. My favorite bit, though, was how you described Goku stretching on the beach after Vegeta left. Absolutely poetry in motion! I had the perfect mental picture though the scene, your imagery was perfect! As if I would expect anything less from you!! ^-^ Wonderful job, as always! Looking forward to the next chappy! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 19:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was good me want to know more too |
Reviewed By: Tobe On: December 31, 2002 17:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so cool! Hurry and finish it before I die of suspence.
Tobe |
Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2002 12:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOHOOO! Way to go, Vejitto! *cheers hybrid on
This story is so refreshing! And I can tell you a thousand times how much I love your style, Xero, and still not be done with it! Can't wait for the next chapter.. GO, VEJITTO, GO!!!! |
Reviewed By: Lauryn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been waiting so very long for the next chapter to this fic, and I'm very pleased you've finally posted it :) You're writing skills never cease to amaze me. It's flawless... except ya forgot the 'l' on 'Videl' at one point, lol! The story is developing nicely and I certainly look forward to the courting :) I'll be waiting :) Fantastic work! |
Reviewed By: znother lover On: December 27, 2002 14:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE MORE!!! im begging here!!! I want to see the treesome that i know is comming... or gogeta x veggeto... WOHOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Zuci On: December 14, 2002 23:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THis!! I want more!! nextnextnext!!!! |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 09:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What an ORIGINAL concept!! This idea holds SO much promise, and I know that you are just the author to deliver it! I can't wait for more!
~anxiously awaiting the THREESOME~ |
Reviewed By: AMCM74 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2002 19:40 CST
Comment/Review:
WHERE IS MORE!!! I LOVE THIS IDEA! but I really cant wait for more so drop me an email when you post again! |
Reviewed By: bageta [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2002 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Aw, is that it? I really like this story, neat twist, and I can't wait for it to be finished! |
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