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Reviewed By: chidogs [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2005 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I can say is AAAAARRRRGGGH! And I thought the Christmas party fic was funny. I am in traction right now. I have never laughed out loud at something I was reading before. My husband and daughter think I am insane, and I sure as heck am not showing them this! I refuse to sink to fangirl level and plead for another chapter, honestly, I just won't plead for another chapter. See, I didn't. *whimper*. Ahem; Gohan drunk as a skunk rolfing in Bulma's kichen. Vegiito in hawaiian dress. Goku with a hickey, blushing. Vegeta brooding with actual reason. Jealous Goku. Jealous Vegeta. Your dialogue is priceless. I could go on but I won't. I just read the whole thing in one sitting so forgive me if I'm a little incoherant.
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 12:56 CST
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What a fun ride! You've got to love any chapter that includes both Oolong and the word "boobage". Very funny and enjoyable. I hope you are able to update soon.
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Reviewed By: TalonSage On: November 07, 2004 23:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
goddamn, I love this fic...wanted to review on LJ, but it's okay... The little bit about Puar, was PRICELESS...and I love Vegeta and Vejitto's interactions. And the image of Gohan surfing was wonderful. I just really enjoyed that for some reason. Now, Vegeta's plan is good...but...is it good enough? Will there be a pig roast next chapter? It's well worth waiting for, I can say that much!!! *drools over the sheer amount of bishieness in this fic*
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 06:33 CST
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Ohhh - *Jumps up and down in excitement* I don't know where to begin!! SO may wonderful moments and lines in this chapter!! Damn it woman - I think you may have outdone yourself! Let's see, I was particularly fond of the Chichi blasting line - even if they DID decide that doing that wasn't an option... :( I LOVED the hint of jealous Goku (GOD I LOVE HIM!!!) at the end of the chapter - Vegeta nearly grinninh - I had the strong urge to throw my arms around him at that point... :| Vejitto's erm... interesting, shirt... (You need to get someone to draw him in those clothes!! :D ) Dang, I should've taken notes as I was reading through this... but I was too busy enjoying reading it to do so... :D I loved this so much, I'm not even going to whine for 'Absolution'... :D (yet)
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 23:03 CST
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It's great to see another update to this fic kiddo! I love 'watching' Vegitto, Goku, and Vegeta circle around each other in an ever-tightening ring. Strangely, I find myself reviewing the past chapters quite often... just for reference, you know. Yeah; that's it. Drunk Gohan is both cute and scary. Maybe they should bottle up his vomit and sell it in paint stores and heavy equipment shops. He keeps secrets as well as his father, too. As horrible as Chichi is, I kinda feel sorry for her. She'll probably end up being the last person on earth to find out what Goku did, and even if she doesn't learn about Gohan's little sake episode until the boy's 35 years old, I'm sure she'll make him wish he'd never learned to even spell sake. Wonderful job again!
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Title: I love it
Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 19:55 CST
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O laughed my ass of the entire chapter. Yhe way you moved from character to character was just great. I love stories where everybody is involved and no one gets bashed. Well, except for Chi Chi; and you even pointed out some of her good points. Must needs more -El-
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was well worth the wait. I'm grinning stupidly, and I can't believe you made me get the warm fuzzies over Bulma and Yamcha. I've never loved Vegeta more in any of your stories, and Vegeto is a breathtaking plot foil for everything--I'm infatuated with him as everyone else. Your style is so accomplished here--it floats like a butterfly, stings like a bee. Loveliness, pure loveliness.
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Reviewed By: chayron [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 16:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, Gods! This is incredible! The humour the intrigue! Update! Update! Update!
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Reviewed By: Samira-chan On: July 08, 2004 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read your fics and its sad that you're so anti feminist. Bashing women to get charas who aren't gay anyway together is sick and I hope you wake up
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Reviewed By: SCOOB On: June 29, 2004 06:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Am I the only one who really, really hopes that Vegeta misses out...Goku deserves happiness away from chichi's bitchin' and Vegeta's insults and what better way than on his own with Vegito....A wonderful story can't wait for the rest....the suspense is killing me!!!!!!!! The piece on Roshi's Island was a real scream
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Title: Chappie 7
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2004 21:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sobriety is a very beautiful thing, but so's getting drunk 3 times a year! Any-who, I LOVED LOVED L-O-V-E-D!!!! Gohan's reaction! Oh my God, I LAUGHED MY ASS OFF!!! Talk about ROFL! I just hate knowing I'm going to have to wait another bloody YEAR before I get to read the next chapter! Damn, you would think you're J.K. Rowling or something! ;) Just kidding, just kidding!!! Update, sooner than one year, MOST preferably!
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Reviewed By: OujiVegeta On: May 30, 2004 17:13 CDT
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Nice, very nice indeed, all u need now is to get on with the show and plzzzz continue ;) i wanna see Vegeta and Vegito get it on with eachother, and then prehaps goku...w/e
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Title: too drunk to login properly
Reviewed By: Plyric_Drunk as a skunk On: May 28, 2004 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know the song Elmer Fudd sings when he's hunting Bugs Bunny? Kill the Wabbit? Kill the Chichi, Kill the Chichi, Kill the Chichi, she must die! Oh yeah, let the booze speak. Uh, not usual for me, in the least, actually downright rare, the drunkenness I mean, but I seriously loved this chapter! Oh yeah, some triple-male sweaty slicked musking action with some serious orgy hot hot sex mama oh yeah.... *drops to floor, passed out from beer and overly horniness, smiling...* =)
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Reviewed By: aaf On: May 28, 2004 16:09 CDT
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Wow, that was amazing...though I'm still waiting for some Vegeta/Vegitto action, or a threesome heh heh. Also for Goku to just leave Chi-Chi already, lol!
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2004 15:01 CDT
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This is so entertaining. You've done a lovely job weaving an implausible story into a totally believable one. It's amusing and hot all at the same time. (does that make sense? O.o)
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