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Title: AWSOME!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Nekosune On: July 12, 2005 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found the story last night at about midnight and read all night untill I finished it! Uh... but I kinda passed out on the floor before I could review, so I'm reviewing now! ^_^ Awsome! Loved it! Here's some cookies and pocky, and if you update soon, I'll give you yamyams! But make it soon or I'll eat them myself!
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Reviewed By: Jasmine Wolna On: June 28, 2005 19:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your writing is absolutely fabulous. Please, post the next chapter soon.
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Reviewed By: Melley On: May 27, 2005 02:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You remember me, ne? *hopes* I'm Sephy/Sephykoi/Sephysama/Melle. XDD Haven't heard from ya in a while, and I was starting to think that this might be left by the way side--which would have been a shame because I LOVE this story, and had been desperately hoping that it'd be updated. And now it is. *squeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~~~~~!!!!!!* I know, it's been a while, but I can still say that your fic is kicking major ass :D *GLOMPS* I hope to see another chatper from you soon again!! ~Melle (SephirothFanatic@prodigy.net or SephirothFanatic@hotmail.com)
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Reviewed By: Rachel Dracon (logged out) On: May 15, 2005 15:05 CDT
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Ooh, squi, you updated! I actually thought this story was going to be another one of those that gets left off in the middle because the author got tired of writing it, and I'm so glad it's not. This chapter was great, just like the rest of the story, poor Omi having to deal with a pissed off Yohji, though I understand why he's mad. Did they mean that Aya will only have 60% mobility for the rest of his life?! Wow, I hope not, that would suck. And damn, Ken's right back where people treat him like shit, though I enjoyed seeing him standing up to them. And it't good he's already got people ready to buy him. Also, Yohji's comment about their lives being like a soap opra with one problem after another made me laugh (actually, soap opras in general make me laugh). Can't wait to find out what happens, which Aya's recovery and Ken being sold. Update again when you can!
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Reviewed By: Rachel Dracon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2004 00:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Augh, I didn't want the story to end! (or need to be continued as the case may be) Great story you've got, I can't wait to find out what happens so please update soon! "Never say 'oops!' always say, 'Ah, interesting.'"
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Reviewed By: westkitsune On: September 22, 2004 10:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
like I kept on telling on FFn, this fic's absolutely perfect! I can't believe I came across this again in here but still all my worship is upon you again for creating such a beautiful story...
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Reviewed By: LAChick! On: September 03, 2004 02:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aww man this is awsome! I love it! I love AYA!!!! Now all you need to do is finish it.
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Reviewed By: buenagirl13 On: August 29, 2004 23:13 CDT
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Thank you so much for updating. I was really excited when I got the email that there was a new chapter. I hope that you are able to continue with this story and don't make us wait too long. Even though I would wait... I prefer not to though... :0) Anyways, awesome chapter. There is hope for Aya and specially for Ken... wooooooohoooooo
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Reviewed By: indentured On: August 27, 2004 21:29 CDT
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YAY!!!!!!!!!!! u updated! im soooo happy! NOOO! u didn't finish it! this TBC-inflicted-torture will never end! as much as i LUV this story, and never want it to end, i can't imagine waiting the agonizing time it took LAST time for u to update!!!~but ah well. we'll do anything for those we luv lol. update when u can and THANK U SO MUCH! keep up the good work ^^
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Starightforward On: August 09, 2004 19:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
An exceptional story. One of the best I read this week. The fact that I read all the 22 chapters one after the other and actually enjoyed it surprised me because most of the stories I read were simply horrible. I'm really straightforward when it comes to criticism. Although I am not a flamer and I want to assure you that the last thing I want is to make you feel bad. I had no reason to criticize your work so far (except one thing, I noticed you always use the term "rip his\their head off". You might want to change that from time to time to prevent your readers from getting a very nasty mental image of the main characters as rippers ripping each others heads off. And of course an expanded vocabulary tends to add to the richness of your story), and I hope there will be no reason to do so in the future. Please accept my apologies for anything I wrote that, in some way, might have caused you discomfort. I never regret what i say and i have enough guts to leave contact information, so if you have anything to say, feel free to replay to the e-address below. Elda_aina@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: buenagirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2004 22:59 CDT
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This was an awesome story. I hope that you continue it. I'm interested in seeing what happens next. Please, please, update... :0)
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Reviewed By: CC On: May 24, 2004 16:57 CDT
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I really like your style of writing. The slave/ owner idea for a storyline. Here's hoping that you will update your wonderful story very soon! Ja ne, CC
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: creze [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story. moves very slow but good. =S
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Reviewed By: Evelyn On: April 07, 2004 02:58 CDT
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I just read the whole story today, and WOW!! It's great! But I have noticed that you have not updated in quite some time. Are you planning on updating ever again? Please do, this is a great story and it deserves to be completed. Pretty, pretty please! ^.^ Could ya email me at Moonprincessoo78@aol.com if you do update and tell me, please? It would be much appreciated. Anyway, I'm gonna go now cuz this is getting pretty long now. Great story! Please continue. And bye! =D
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Reviewed By: Sonona On: December 31, 2003 12:22 CST
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Are you ever going to update/finish this fic?????? I guess i've already forgotten how it started!!!!
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