| "Ai no Koinu" Reviews/Comments [ 126 ] |
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Reviewed By: KM On: January 27, 2005 20:11 EST
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PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^ DATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT"S BEEN A LONG TIME SINCE U ^ DATED LAST! PLEASE!!! I WANT TO C WUT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!!!!!! THANX!!!!!!!!! ^_^
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Title: Ch. 6
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 18:21 EST
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This story haunts me for days on end.
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Reviewed By: ginger75125 On: November 17, 2004 01:24 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic rocked! Hurry and finish the next chappies! I couldn't stop reading! Please let me know when youre done! ginger75125@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: Hisoka no ningyo On: October 29, 2004 13:33 EDT
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You DO plan on finishing this, right? *begs*
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Reviewed By: Cliodhna Glen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2004 09:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an interesting story! I'm glad I was pointed in this direction while reading; since I don't watch InuYasha, I'm not super familiar with the series. However, your fic is interesting to read, so it kept me reading despite not knowing the series. There are a few small technical errors, but otherwise it looks in top shape as far as technical writing goes - you're certainly on your way to being a very polished author. Keep up the great work - I hope to see more work from you on the site. :D
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Reviewed By: jetrodboy27 On: September 19, 2004 16:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! You better finish chap 6 soon or Ill hunt you down and force you to write it!
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Reviewed By: skeezo On: September 10, 2004 03:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
interesting very interesting i don't think that i have read something like that before so i think that i like it i just hope everything goes well in the end of the story for the two of them but over all i liked the story so i hope you are still planning on writing more to it and finish it soon thankx
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Title: August 20, 2004
Reviewed By: Ryoka On: August 20, 2004 06:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find it to be a good chapter, besides the fact that there were some spelling errors, but what can I say we're only human :). The discription of the clothes and people were great. I say this because I have read many fanfics, most not that well. I like how their actions were done well as well, most writers aren't good with them, but yours were done well. Well I have nothing else to say, just that I hope you finish the 6th chapter soon. Bye
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Title: August 20, 2004
Reviewed By: Ryoka On: August 20, 2004 06:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find it to be a good chapter, besides the fact that there were some spelling errors, but what can I say we're only human :). The discription of the clothes and people were great. I say this because I have read many fanfics, most not that well. I like how their actions were done well as well, most writers aren't good with them, but yours were done well. Well I have nothing else to say, just that I hope you finish the 6th chapter soon. Bye
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Reviewed By: Ryoka On: August 20, 2004 06:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find it to be a good chapter, besides the fact that there were some spelling errors, but what can I say we're only human :). The discription of the clothes and people were great. I say this because I have read many fanfics, most not that well. I like how their actions were done well as well, most writers aren't good with them, but yours were done well. Well I have nothing else to say, just that I hope you finish the 6th chapter soon. Bye
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Reviewed By: Ryoka On: August 20, 2004 06:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I find it to be a good chapter, besides the fact that there were some spelling errors, but what can I say we're only human :). The discription of the clothes and people were great. I say this because I have read many fanfics, most not that well. I like how their actions were done well as well, most writers aren't good with them, but yours were done well. Well I have nothing else to say, just that I hope you finish the 6th chapter soon. Bye
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Title: cool!
Reviewed By: Insane Kawaii Shippo-chan On: August 19, 2004 01:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love the fic! it use to be on ff.net right? or have i gone insane o.O; anyways, after many many many days of searching, I FOUND YOUS!!! and this fic of course. tee hee, I love this fic and, and...waaaaaahhhhhh! you left it as a cliffie! why!? ;.; i hope you update again soon! its august man! ^__^ i look forward to the next update! ^.~ ta ta!
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Reviewed By: Shizukesa [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 17:24 EDT
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I started reading this story about a year ao or so... I never expected it to be updated ever again and then I was so shocked and excited to find out that it has been! Please, I beg you, don't wait another half year to update... my memory is not all that good... But either way this story captured my attention with the setting and the whole situation. It actually forced me to find the Ai no Kusabi anime and watch it. Very good, I only wish I could read and understand japanese... I would read the book. But I'm rambling so, this is praise for your fanfic and I say its very nicely written! Quite the original if I may say so myself! I'll keep reading and please update soon!!! Sincerely, Lee
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Reviewed By: sufferingviolets On: August 15, 2004 20:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great idea for an inu fanfic. I found it whiole searching for some stories to read one night and this is gotta be one of the best and funniest I have read in a while great job and I hope you will update soon or heh if Im not wishing to much if u could finish it soon! I already have three other friends reading it adn they all agree they want to see the ending!! hope u finish it It kicks ass so far and as always I love shesshomaru in any role he plays heehee...
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Title: Eee!
Reviewed By: sorena [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 19:02 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I've waited for a long time for this awesome fic, and I'm so glad you haven't forgotten about it. It was a really cute chapter, and I adore the concept of this fic. :) I can't wait until the next chapter and what Sesshoumaru will do....
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