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| "Shattered Dreams, Broken Soul, Unbound Love" Reviews/Comments [ 95 ] | | Pages (7): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 > » ] | Reviewed By: *Sheik Rox* On: April 25, 2004 20:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are my hero. What else can I say?
| Reviewed By: .::Spryte::. On: February 14, 2004 21:35 CST
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Yay! Sequel! ^^ ~chases chibi kitsune with megaton hammer~
| Reviewed By: Stories4Boys [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it's WONDERFUL! There are no words... so gorgeous... I LOVE Link/Sheik to begin with, and now i love them even more... sooooooo sweet and beautiful.
| Reviewed By: Spryte [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2003 14:59 CDT
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Argh! ~tackles Randell~ So? That shouldn't matter! Grr!! ~pulls out large hammer from who-knows-where, the hammer looks like the megaton hammer only white with a pink handle and twice as big. Spryte bonks Randell on the head with it, and then proceeds to chase after all flamers with it~ Muwhahahaha!
| Reviewed By: Randell On: September 13, 2003 13:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nuu!! You cant end it like that... oh. wait. yes, you can. ...^^' well, I'm to say that i love this, though my rating gives you a nine, not because of boredom, but because of a little... ahh... well, i guess it's just the personal oppinion of me likeing Link better on top. ^_^ over all though, i love it! ^_^ | Reviewed By: Spryte (Triple F?) On: August 22, 2003 18:18 CDT
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Yay! The Epilogue! ~glomps Squall-sama~ I can't wait to the see the sequel! ~jumps up and down~ Okay, no more caffeine or sugar for a while, lol. ~grabs Seifer~ Muwhahahaha! Better not forget or I'll lock Seifer up with a bunch of rabid fan-girls! | Reviewed By: Eoko the Embarrassing On: August 21, 2003 23:31 CDT
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Oh whoa! That epilogue! It was like, totally romantic and hot as hell! *fan self* Yes oh yes. I bet you got really hard writing that one Squall-sama. I sure do bet that!
~ Just so happens to be sitting at a table with Ine and Spryte~
*puts down $10 in chips* I betcha 10 bucks he did!
Ine and Spryte: *look at Eoko and sweatdrop*
Eoko: You know what else I bet?
Ine and Spryte: *shakes heads*
Squall-sama: *on knees begging for me not to say it*
Eoko: I bet Squall-sama got pretty worked up writing that little lemon. I bet he had to go see if Seifer-san was busy after that! Actually! I bet he didn't even care if Seifer-san WAS busy! I bet after that he just grabbed that sexy lover of his and threw him down on their bed!
Spryte: *glances at Ine*
Ine: *glances at Spryte*
Eoko: I bet what those two got into was even hotter than that last chapter! Oh boy! Now that's something I'd like to see!
Squall-sama: *crumbles to the ground in embarrassed defeat*
Spryte and Ine: *move to pat his back*
~ But I think someone else has better ways of comforting our dearest author, and of course that means I'm bringing Seifer-san in again! ~
Seifer-san: *walks over to Squall-sama and sweeps him up in his arms, places a romantic yet lustful kiss on his lover's lips*
Fangirl Heroine Trio: Awwwwwwwww *sparkly eyes*
Don'tcha just luv me Squall-sama? AHAHAHA | Reviewed By: Eoko! I'mmmmmm BACK! On: August 21, 2003 21:19 CDT
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Hi Spryte, yes Squall-sama, I'm talking to her first. You know what Spryte, I like Ine. I think you, me and Ine should fight crime and by crime, I mean flamers as a three-team super hero thingy! There is already Spryte Triple F, the leader, and then Invincible Ine! (I mean, she came up with the tent idea! Brilliant, can't get rid of those kinda great ideas), and me! Eoko the Embarrassing! It's true! I'll embarrass both of you and I do it to Squall-sama too! Yay Yay YAY! A trio of fangirl super heroines! And we have powers! Oh yes! Powers such as! Getting into rooms that have been previously barred! For example! Da Da DUM!
SQUALL-SAMA'S BEDROOM!
*shakes a finger* Tsk tsk Squall-sama, thought you could keep the three of us out? *does not notice the scene right away*
Spryte and Ine: *clasp hands and whistle innocently, pretending they had nothing to do with the door being opened*
Squall-sama: *is shocked and strains his head to see the three girls, as he is tied up by scarves and Seifer-san is licking chocolate off his body*
Seifer-san: *either does not notice the girls or chooses not too*
Ine: *drools, because she is the first to notice*... Spryte... *pokes Spryte and points*
Spryte: *gawks, grins.... plans on making cookies and other goodies as a thank you for this little scene, for Squall-sama of course*
~ So there we all were. Squall-sama with silk scarves around his wrist and ankles, and wearing nothing but the sweet, brown, liquid chocolate... and there, right over him, enjoying his treat was Seifer-san, and yes, he was _really_ enjoying himself. Eoko, was stupidly still commenting on how Squall-sama had tried to lock them out, with her eyes closed, because in anime, they seem to ALWAYS talk with their eyes closed. And Ine and Spryte continued to drool, which was now causing a little pool to form around their feet.~
Ine and Spryte: *snap out of their drool-fest long enough to use their super cool, awesome, fangirl super heroine powers to clean up their little, well, not really little, but anyway, puddle.*
Eoko: *STILL commenting*
Ine: *finally gets embarrassed but Eoko's idiocy and goes up and smacks her up side the head!*
Spryte: *does a little happy dance while still watching the pair on the bed!*
Eoko: *glares at Ine, who grabs her head and turns her to stare at Squall-sama and Seifer-san. NOW starts drooling*
~ By this time it is quite obvious that Squall-sama would like to have the girls leave, of have Seifer-san make them leave or anything that would have them gone! But it is also very obvious that Seifer-san knows that the girls are there and wants to give them a very good show! This makes the fangirl heroines very very happy and so they grab so chairs and sit down next to the bed to watch! ~
~ Now, just because I don't want to embarrass Squall-sama tooooo much, I won't go into how Seifer-san licked and sucked all of the chocolate off his brunette lover's body, or how there was chocolate on well, all the good places. And I won't say that the three fangirls were hooting and hollering and cheering every time Squall-sama happened to moan, whimper or cry out at what Seifer-san was doing to him. I ALSO won't go into how Seifer grabbed that strawberry scented lubricant I gave Squall-sama or what he did with it... except maybe there was a lot a the name Seifer being screamed a little later on. ~
~ So, as a quick recap! Seifer-san was doing the naughty naughty with our dear author while three happy fangirl got front row seats! BUT ALSO! Eoko was recording it and playing it on the 20 foot screen outside so that all the other reviewers saw it too!! ~
Okay, I think I'm done now.... off to the epilogue! | Reviewed By: Spryte On: August 14, 2003 15:01 CDT
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~checks her email~ Oh. Well, while we're waiting... ~goes back, grabs all the flames and makes a campfire, pulling out a jumbo bag of marshmallows~ not enough. I know! ~pulls out hot chocolate and a huge bag of chocolate~ Any more flames will be added to my fire. Roasted marshmallows for all! There's chocolate too but I lost the graham crackers. | Reviewed By: Spryte On: August 12, 2003 21:39 CDT
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~pauses for a moment~ hey! wasn't there an epilogue on the one you post on ff.net? one with a lemon? grrr! ~chases Squall-sama~ Hey! come back! ~pouts~ | Reviewed By: Spryte On: August 12, 2003 20:45 CDT
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~glomps and huggles~ yay! you finished! ~gives you cookies~ okay, I'll be nice so no cage. | Reviewed By: Aoede On: August 08, 2003 18:22 CDT
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'Tis done! *does happy ending dance*
ooh, i've been attacked! my first attack! i'm honored!
but i don't care about what they say, lol, i've read that kind of story before. i remember one called Sadistic Shades. And i wasn't complaining, ppl! i didn't say "i hate these kind of stories". I love them, in fact. And- and yes i've read all those kinds of fics, the ones Spryte said! lol, me likes them. and me likes yer fic too. my angst dose for today. YAY for the happy ending! 't was great! write another one, i command you!
P.D: very good drawings, BTW | Reviewed By: Ine On: August 08, 2003 17:43 CDT
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I'm one happy fangirl... I can go to sleep peacefully again now, knowing everything turned out the way it should be. ='D *tear of joy*
I loved everything about this, from the very first till the last word. Not only in this chapter, but in your entire fic. You've really done a great, awesome job at writing this and I'll be sure to check out your stuff from time to time, whether it'll be another fic or more great art. =3
Thanks for sharing this with us! =^___________^= | Reviewed By: Mina Tsukiyono On: August 08, 2003 14:41 CDT
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Yay!!!! Bravo!!! Bravo!!! *claps madly* brilliant, that's what it is! Brilliant!!! Happy ending, happy ending!!! Yay! I love it!!! Best ficcie I ever read!!! yay!
*Runs off chanting mindless drivel about how wonderful the fic was* | Reviewed By: Ine On: August 07, 2003 14:20 CDT
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*looks at her message above this one*
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Okay, I'll probably look stupid now because only half of my message got posted. I'll blame it all on MediaMiner though, for not working properly for me. -______-;
Original message (or something along those lines):
*gladly accepts the popcorn and tries not to drool too much at the scene in front of her*
=3~~~ ( that's not too much drool, is it?)
You know, we could erm... place our tents and stuff right here. At least here we have a nice view on our surroundings, right? X3 | | Pages (7): [ « < 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 > » ] |
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