| "Satan Video" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: dancingstarchic On: May 14, 2003 13:42 PDT
Comment/Review:
this is great! continue... i want 2 know what happens next... soon.. please? :o) thnx |
Reviewed By: Buruma-chan On: May 14, 2003 01:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been following this story for a while now and it is one of the best I have read. I love it. You keep Vegeta in character and thats rare. Not only that, but I love the Yamcha bashing. Bash him more. He is so gay! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2003 23:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT CHAPTER!!
The Yamcha part are funny :P
CONTINUE SOON!!
DAmn, mediaminer has been sooo long lately, what's up with that?? o.O |
Reviewed By: ssjprincess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2003 19:23 PDT
Comment/Review:
I have to apologize to you. I have been reading this fic for awhile and have been just to busy to review. But, I am prepared to correct that slight. ^_^
I think the whole premise of this fic is an original idea. Kudos to you for that. I've enjoyed you've portrayed all of the characters. The fic has a nice flow to it, an added bonus is the humor throughout.
Now for the constructive part....
There are a few mistake, nothing major mind you, but there are a few. For example sometimes you will change a scene without any notice. O_o; That was a bit confusing at first. lol
All in all, I have to say that you have done a wonderful job on your first fic. Keep up the good work and don't make me wait to long for the next chapter. ^_^
~**ssjprincess**~ |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2003 17:31 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another wonderful chapter. I will be waiting for the next! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 18:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWW ^^
I loved this chapter!!!
IT HAS TO BE MY FAVOURITE ONE SOO FAR ^^
(beside the other lemon ones ^^..but this one was as kawaii as hell)
ME LOVE!! ME WANT MORE!!
*stomps feet*
UPDATE SOON!! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2003 16:23 PDT
Comment/Review:
Loved the chapy man keep them coming .Bulma finnaly says her true feelings *sigh* Cute very cute! The toe action very very cool ! and why when someone is sharing a breakfast the fucking phone has to fucking interrupT!!!!
Oy soory anywho Update soon!
By the way I saw the comic strip it was hilarious Vegeta's ass *hentai thoughts*
uhhh ..... gotta go Later! |
Reviewed By: The crazy One [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 10:33 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so so sorry! I've been rather busy, nd never had time to read your story. So I was being a bad little reader and didn't review >.> *Hits self with a blunt object* I am a little hyper.... Anyway....
Please continue soon ^^
~*~ºCrazy Oneº~*~ |
Reviewed By: tristar49 On: March 19, 2003 21:42 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you know this thing gets better every time i read it and also keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 21:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter ^^
Wish there was some VB fluff though.....oh well ^^
CONTINUE SOON |
Reviewed By: Mela989898 On: March 19, 2003 21:08 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK first and far most I Love this story! I can so see me and the idiots I call friend doing some of the things in here. I can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2003 19:52 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPPPPDATEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!
IM BEEEGING U CANT TAKE IT !! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 01:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter ^^
The scence in the washing machine place with Vegeta and that kid was cute ^^
CONTINUE SOON |
Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2003 17:48 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I like the chapy ok Update soon!!!
I wanna know what happens at the club
Later !
Give me more Lemon! >:D |
Reviewed By: kureeji [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 10:20 PST
Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness, you want reviews and I just dont know what to say! The story is good, what else could i say?? lol. That stalker chick was a nice little touch in the Yamcha-cheating-on-Bulma thing. Hmm...off to read more! |
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