| "Satan Video" Reviews/Comments [ 79 ] |
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-not logged in On: June 16, 2005 17:23 PDT
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I'm so glad to see this update! We don't mind waiting when the pay off is this great! Good job and full of your spunk as usual!
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Reviewed By: nan_de_mo_chibi_otoko *not signed in* On: May 27, 2005 11:47 PDT
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wow luv this story, I was reading it on another site dont remember wich one but when i saw it here i got all tingly since i can now tell you what i think ouf ur story!
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Reviewed By: christabeleve71 On: May 26, 2005 17:12 PDT
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I just loved Mr Satan on the prowl. "He was pimpin'."
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Reviewed By: Sk8turgurl On: March 15, 2005 12:15 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Any updates in the future?
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2004 05:41 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was worth the wait. But I'm sad the next chappie will be the last. This has been an awesome fic!
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Reviewed By: christabeleve61 On: April 25, 2004 09:27 PDT
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Vegeta covered in chocolate and whipped cream. Loved the update.
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2004 05:45 PDT
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Woo hoo!! Sex, a fight, and the wanton destruction of Satan's livelihood... what more could anyone ask for?? :D I love your writing style, it's so smooth and easy to read, it really adds to a VERY entertaining story! I did feel sorry for my poor lovely Yamucha though... Can I volunteer to nurse him back to health?? :D Please don't let us wait as long for the next chapter... :D
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Title: O_O
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 15:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LAST CHAPTER OF SATAN VIDEO?? ;___: LAST?!?!! YOU CAN'T STOP THIS!! x( YOU CAN"T!! DON'T END IT NOW!! NOT AFTER THE WHIP CREAM SCENCE!! T_______T DAMN YOU!! CONTINUE SOON!! (and great chapter :D)
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Reviewed By: Angel Tinuviel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2004 12:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I AM SOOOO HAPPY!!!!!! You updated WOOHOO!!!! hehe Vegeta kicked Yamcha's ass. HELL YEAH!! I just hope Bulma and vegeta can resolve this little issue. He has every right to be mad, but I don't want them to have this long seperation period like in all those other fics. They just need to "make up". ^_^ lol man I'm such a pervert when it comes to B/V. Anyways I await impatiently for the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: TRUNKS' LIL BITCH On: July 11, 2003 14:08 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS FUNNY AS HELL AND ENTERTAINING I HOPE U DONT HOOK UP YAMCHA AND BULMA AGAIN SHE DESERVES BETTER THAN HIM YAMCHA IS A BASTARD... WELL HURRY UP AND WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER ^_^ |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2003 09:39 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just too good! Love it..it's so funny!! It's well written and I just love it!!! I'd love to read another epic by you! Write another one!!!! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2003 14:37 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT CHAPTER!! IT WAS SOO FUNNY ^^
Lol, when I read the chapter name, I thought someone had recorded Vegeta and BUlma getting it on on the roof :P
CONTINUE SOON ^^ |
Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2003 13:19 PDT
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I've only read up to ch 3, but I HAVE to review NOW!!! I LOVE this!!! It's so funny! You have some really witty lines in there! A joy to read... :D |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: May 26, 2003 17:57 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hate to say this, but I'm having a hard time feeling sorry for Yamcha... but it's s great story and I can't wait to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Mushi_azn [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2003 12:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter ^^
Loved it ^^
The VB moments rock ^^
Did Goku and Krillen go into a lezbian bar or something?? ^^"
CONITNUE SOON!! |
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