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Reviewed By: Oblivion On: January 22, 2003 04:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 02:32 EST
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Wow...that last part was so dramatic...I absolutely loved it! Unfortunately it was only a tiny section of the chapter.
How do I put this where you understand what I mean and not get your feelings hurt? Okay, I love this story, I really do. Everything about it is good, but in truth, the sex scenes are getting to be a bit much. What I honestly enjoy is your twisted plot lines and all the drama and angst you pack your stories with that keep me coming back for more. I found myself wondering halfway through the chapter, when the good part was going to start.
Don't get me wrong, I do really and truly enjoy this story, if I didn't, I wouldn't bother telling you about the excess of sex, I would have just stopped reading.
I can't wait for more on this story. I want to know what was in that envelope, who delivered it, if Goten is going to be okay, and of course, when are those asses going to get fried?!? ^_^ I'm going through a violent phase right now. I feel for the peeps I spar every week in karate...
Anyway, update soon! I'm very excited to see where you're going with this! Until then, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 16:19 EST
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WAHH!!! ;-; Poor Trunks!!! Poor Goten!!! I wonder what was in that envelope? Pictures, perhaps? Oh Kami...THOSE BASTARDS!!!
Don't keep me in suspense for too long!!! Please update as soon as possible!!! O_O;;
~*Rizu-chan*~ |
Reviewed By: bachnelkenwurz On: January 21, 2003 14:06 EST
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I can imagine what was inside the envelopment and who the person was who brought it. Sobs. Oh, please let Goten and the baby be alright. They waited for so long to get their second child. I hope they find out why Trunks act that stange, maybe it would help him to get over it instead of driving it away. |
Reviewed By: JJ On: January 21, 2003 12:36 EST
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Poor Trunks! To me he really need a hug, some peace and quiet and some help to deal with all that happened to him!
Beautiful story!
Cann't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: Sara On: January 20, 2003 19:45 EST
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WOW!
Cool story!
Poor Trunks! I hope all will go well and that nothing serious happened to Goten... and that those mosters who hurted Trunks meet slow and painfull death...
And I hope Vegeta will be a little more supportive... after all Trunks is HIS son but he seems to ignore him while he's nice and caring toward Leilani... I think Trunks really need help to deal with all that happened to him and since Goten is pregnant Vegeta should really try be more helpfull... |
Reviewed By: Zion On: January 17, 2003 01:25 EST
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damn them for showing up in front of trunk's like that=/
Well i await the yaoi lemon=D in the next chapter...^_^ |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 20:09 EST
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WAAHH!!! You can't leave me in suspense like this!!! IT'S CRUEL!!! *bawls*
Please update right away!!! =D
~*Rizu-chan*~ |
Reviewed By: bachnelkenwurz On: January 16, 2003 11:33 EST
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OH, KILL THEM, KILL THEM!!!!!!!!! How can they dare to walk over him like nothing happened. I think they should pay for it, before they try something that disgusting again. Please write on. I can’t wait to know what happened in the shopping centre and especially what will happen next. |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 03:16 EST
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Dang you've been updating fast!!! I can't believe those jerks would have the nerve to approach Trunks while he was sober! He should have just blasted them to HFIL! Poor Goten...Gohan slidding on the kitchen floor cracked me up for some reason. It was just too easy to see. And then Vegeta...He's something else. Well, I sure hope you keep working on this because I want to see what happens when Goten finds out and what the baby's going to be like, so keep hurrying! ^_^ Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Kia On: January 14, 2003 03:50 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Hey...I've found you! Heh..actually, I'm not really a Truten fan nor a mediaminer fan *lol*, but I remember reading 'When Love and Hate Collide' at the Hotel (when it was still up, that's so long ago *sob* don't you miss it too?) so yeah, I was really happy to find it here. :P Sorry, I was too lazy to leave a review on that since I was eager to follow up and read the sequel to it...
I particularly like it that you've finished that story (pet peeve of mine *grins*), and the ending was nicely done too. *nods* It wrapped things up neatly.
Nice...you write well. I like the way the story is shaping up...heh, I normally don't read Truten, but I'm reading yours...^_^ It's a little sappy at points for me, but that's my personal opinion (my fav is Vegeta, what do you think I _like_ *giggles)
Love the last bit about the princes of the house of vegeta fainting...*lol*
Anyway, hope to see the next chapter out soon! |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 17:02 EST
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XD LMAO!!!!
"What's the deal with Saiyan princes that faint?"
XD I LOVE THAT LINE!!! That is now gonna be one of my favorite lines!!! ROTFLMAO!!! XD That was such a great chappy!!! I hope everything goes all right for Goten and everything...um...I just am still REALLY curious to know exactly HOW Goten is going to...um...get his child out...but I'm praying that it's nothing too...erm...gross...you know what I mean...
O_o;; So many weird ways this can be done...oi...
LoL...and I'm kind of scared to know!!!
^_^;; Guess I'll find out soon enough!!! This was such a good/funny chapter, I especially loved when Vegeta fainted at the end and then there was that line...LOL!!! Loved it, loved it, LOVED IT!!!! =D
~*Rizu-chan*~
PS: PLEASE UPDATE A.S.A.P. mm'kay??? ^_^ |
Reviewed By: bachnelkenwurz On: January 13, 2003 13:08 EST
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I can imagine the sweet butterfly outfit and when Vegeta faints. It is so cute. How you describe her…I want to adopt Leilani. She must be the cutest girl of the world. I love her! And it will be interesting how Goten can be pregnant. I mean it will be difficult for him to get the baby out of him >grin |
Reviewed By: hippiechick83 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2003 01:32 EST
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I was getting so into the fic and then that chapted ended!!! That is just so wrong!!! Poor Goten. He must really love Trunks to want to go through the hell of having kids for him. That is sooo sweet. ^_^ In the last chapter's notes, you mentioned that this fic may be too twisted for readers. Well, if it's too twisted for them to understand then they don't need to read it anyway. Personally, I love really involved plots and you're good at that along with giving lots of Trunks/Goten goodness. ^_^ I can not wait for more because I know you have some more drama planned. Goten has to find out about the rape sooner or later. Oh, I like the flashbacks and partial amnesia. The whole post shock syndrome thing works really, really well here. I just hope you update quickly! Until next time, Peace and Out. |
Reviewed By: Hisaki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2003 22:28 EST
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OMG!!!!
Another wonderful chappy!!! ...Although I'm almost afraid to find out exactly how Goten is going to be able to have children...
O_o;;
Guess I'll just have to wait and see!!! ^_^;;
PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!!!!
~*Rizu-chan*~ |
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