| "Seven Day Revelation" Reviews/Comments [ 142 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ericyamaha89 On: November 08, 2003 18:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please hurry up and update its been forever
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Title: Ya gonnas...
Reviewed By: Wild Nymph [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 22:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You gonna update anytime this century!? Update!? PLEASE~!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 16:24 CST
Comment/Review:
ur story's great and ive been suffering from withdrawal since u havent posted in months! please continue!!
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Title: konnichi wa
Reviewed By: Wild Nymph [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2003 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You gonna update any time this century? It's good
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Reviewed By: Star Katt [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2003 22:06 CDT
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cool, i like it. i hope u get more up soon. l8r
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Reviewed By: bejipan [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 01:36 CDT
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You are really staying in character. But I wosh that you would update soon.
Bejipan |
Reviewed By: ady anhee 999 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 22:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good story. I can't wait to read the rest of the story. Hope you update soon, although I know how it goes sometimes. |
Reviewed By: Angel452 On: September 12, 2003 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you going to continue this anytime soon? What happens next? |
Reviewed By: Messed On: August 24, 2003 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please contiue it's a very good story... ^_^ |
Reviewed By: stacie On: August 23, 2003 00:41 CDT
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please continue, very good. :) |
Reviewed By: Kilala On: August 03, 2003 12:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is awesome I love your story, I'm so glad your back, your hilarious. Dog shit instead of Turd was brilliant. I love Inuyasha and am obsessed (nah just kidding) you doin a great job, yu wrk the story line to make it your own. Your fingerprints are etchd over every sentence.
Kilala ^-^ |
Reviewed By: dbzobsessed On: August 02, 2003 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't give a 10+ - It's wonderful to see you have updated again. I know you've had a lot to deal with in your private life, I only hope things will get better in time.
I enjoyed this chapter immensely from Inuyasha waking up tired and sore to the tiff they had because of the impression Kagome's friends have of IY. The description of a robe from IY's eyes was great and conversation between IY and Kagome's mom was wonderful especially his thoughts about what it meant and how it related to his own feelings. Well, you have let IY meet her friends and confront Hojo. You also are explaining what is happening with Miroku, Sango, etc and I loved that Kouga has coming looking for Kagome. That section should get interesting too. I still hope Kagome and IY go to a movie or a school dance especially on the day he's human and I still like the convertible idea. And the mall, that's great. It should be very interesting. And let's not forget that lemon. Wonderful writing, thanks for sharing. (Did you see you are an inspiration, yet?) |
Reviewed By: Nokomarie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 02:51 CDT
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So glad to see you've updated! I really hope things settle out in your life so I can read the rest of the story. Selfish, that would be me.
Grins, Nokomarie |
Reviewed By: Rocky On: August 01, 2003 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!!! You finally updated yeaaaa!!! Good please keep it up i was enjoyin your story!!! So update asap!! Thanks :.) |
Reviewed By: samiam [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2003 22:41 CDT
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I love your story!!Inu-Kag--great stuff!!love the tension/bickering---aint love grand^_^ no offense...I just wish you could update faster!!!! I hate having to wait for good stuff!!!!! |
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