| "Belated Gift 2: The Gift that Keeps on Giving" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2004 21:59 CDT
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Great chapters. I absolutely love this story. I wasn't a real big fan of ShiRu. But I think you just changed my mind. So is this going to be continued or is there a sequel out there? Love the story. keep up the great work.
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Reviewed By: Guaja On: July 15, 2004 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello!! This story is great!! Please, update soon!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2004 00:39 CST
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Plz finish the story! What are the relationships going to be? Please update, you haven't in forever!
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Reviewed By: watermelon On: February 09, 2004 12:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your fic so much!!!! but u havent updated in forever. will u be updating soon?....please keep on writting...
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Reviewed By: -- On: February 09, 2004 01:10 CST
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I'm a little disheartened that no one else found this story disturbing on an emotional level. I very much liked your first story, but couldn't stomach more than 2 chapters of this. Maybe its because I'm not going to finish it, or maybe its becuase I have been party to, and witnessed many emotionally and physically abusive relationships. I'm not saying your a bad writer, on the contrary, you write very well...I just can't work my mind around the subject matter. It is not my intention to anger you, or draw undue attention to myself...I just wanted to let it be known that I felt I couln't not say anything. Overall, it just makes me very sad.
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Reviewed By: Uohana On: January 25, 2004 23:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my gosh this is such a great story!!! You do everything so well!!! And I'm not just saying this to get you to update soon even though I would love for that to happen!!!!!!!!!! ^_^ Come on I'm dying here I need to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: tite_mouche On: December 23, 2003 21:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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you started an awsome fic ! its really good , i cant wait to read the next chapters so PLEAZE PLEAZE PLEAZE update! i have to know how it will end :)
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Reviewed By: Anime-Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow i didn't know that you updated, so I was so stunned when I found out that it was up dated a month ago! I guess thats better though because that means that I dont have to wait as long for the next chapter...(babbling) Anyway i love your story!!! I love everything, I hope that in the end it works out for them. okay I mean i hope it works out for everyone! Please updated soon. I love your fic soooo much! Thanks
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Reviewed By: demize [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 10:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hot! theres just no other word for it. keep writing id love to read more
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Reviewed By: Jazzy t On: October 17, 2003 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was (is) an outstanding fic. However, stories lose momentum and drive when the chapters come out so far apart. I have always looked foward to reading this story, but now I have lost interest. Next time consider not posting until the entire story is complete.
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Reviewed By: Kat (Sinnamonkat) On: September 28, 2003 11:52 CDT
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I love this chapter! I ran through an entire gamut of emotions reading it. I'm glad they are working everything out. *glomps*
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Reviewed By: sakura star On: August 14, 2003 14:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG This is the best lemon/romance fanfic I have ever read.You are a fantastic writer and I hope you contuniue this.I dont know whear the hell you get this talent from but Im glad you do.It`s a great story idea its sad (I cried a lot) but in some it was incredibaly funny.You make the reader see a dark side of Shigure a side you really dont get to see.Great story great idea great writer.Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Gaby On: July 24, 2003 12:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this fic!!! This is definitely one of the best Shigure+Tooru fanfiction! They are made for each other..hehehe..! Please, continue soon!!
Sorry for mistakes, my english is not very good...^^ |
Reviewed By: Gaby On: July 24, 2003 12:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just love this fic!!! This is definitely one of the best Shigure+Tooru fanfiction! They are made for each other..hehehe..! Please, continue soon!!
Sorry, my english is not very good...^^ |
Reviewed By: Lain On: July 16, 2003 06:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The prequel to Belated Gift 2 was rather light-hearted, considering. I didn't expect BG2 to be so... well, dark. Shigure's personality is rather frightening in its insecurity and possessiveness. I really feel bad for Tooru to be stuck in a relationship where she is stripped of dignity and forced into humiliation. This story is very engaging, but also very hard for me to read at times. It actually took me a few attempts to read some chapters and not look away from the screen, hence my decision of an overall 9. I'm just the overy emotional type. It is very well written, a real rarity among fanfiction nowadays. Well done! |
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