| "Belated Gift 2: The Gift that Keeps on Giving" Reviews/Comments [ 67 ] |
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Reviewed By: smileyjones On: June 13, 2005 01:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story even though it is a bit dark. The dark parts lead to some great dramatic moments so when people complain just ignore them. I believe that you have balanced the story well by having extremely sweet moments between the not so sweet. I really hope that you update because this is my favorite fruits basket fanfiction that I have read so far. (sending mind control waves)***you are going the update, you are going to update***
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Reviewed By: hopya On: May 05, 2005 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i read your fic at what i think years ago and i absolutely loved it! i even saved in my pc. however, my pc crashed and i lost all of my fave fics including yours. since then i looked for it. i have forgotten the title and all. i only remember the storyline. now i have found it again! yay! but i see that you havent written anything new.. why? do update, darling.
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Reviewed By: Uohana On: April 13, 2005 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Anyway I would just like to say....THANK YOU FOR UPDATING I thought that it was some kind of joke that you updated like you were going ot tell us that you were bored and didnt want to finish it. I hope you dont get bored because im not going to get bored of reading it. I really want to see how you fix everything and make it nice hehe. Thanks for updating Ii hope you update soon this time XD
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Reviewed By: gamerz [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2005 13:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nicely done;) saw some spelling and grammar errors though:) reading it was like a roller coaster ride, in a sense it went exciting then abit *horrifying or unbelievable* (heez..:D) then sweet then maddening then soothing.. overall, it's great~;) i like the focus on white colour panties Tohru is always depicted as, purity then kinda tainted the next thing:) *reading the one u posted on 31 Mar 05*
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Title: oops
Reviewed By: Jisshi On: April 02, 2005 20:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oops...sorry it said it wasn't posting my posts...but it posted them 3 times...hehehe...(blushing)
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Jisshi On: April 02, 2005 20:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this continuation of Belated Gift. I think it is interesting to have a story that doesn't always focus on the "flowery" kind of love...Shigure always has had a darker side...you see glimpses of it every once in a while...and it is pretty sexy in a creepy way...keep it up. I can't wait to read the next chapter....
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Title: I love it...more please!
Reviewed By: Jisshi On: April 02, 2005 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this continuation of Belated Gift. I think it is interesting to have a story that doesn't always focus on the "flowery" kind of love...Shigure always has had a darker side...you see glimpses of it every once in a while...and it is pretty sexy in a creepy way...keep it up. I can't wait to read the next chapter....
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Title: I love it...more please!
Reviewed By: Jisshi On: April 02, 2005 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this continuation of Belated Gift. I think it is interesting to have a story that doesn't always focus on the "flowery" kind of love...Shigure always has had a darker side...you see glimpses of it every once in a while...and it is pretty sexy in a creepy way...keep it up. I can't wait to read the next chapter....
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Reviewed By: Guaja On: April 02, 2005 11:51 CST
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Wow, you update! Thanks! :):):):)
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Reviewed By: jj On: April 01, 2005 19:29 CST
Comment/Review:
YES! YES! YES! You updated my favorite story! *Hugs...*sniff *sniff, but what is wrong with Shgure? I wanna know, I wanna know, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: DarkBlueKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2005 18:40 CST
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lol....talk about your underage child mollestation. Not that they kinda havent done it in Samurai X...oh well. its anime what more could we say? Good...good...i like the pairing anyways..
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Reviewed By: Guaja On: March 06, 2005 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi!! I really love this story, please update!! It's one of my favorites!! Maybe you have it on another site? Or maybe you aren't going to continue :(? Please, tell me! My email is: magabygc@yahoo.com , feel free to write.
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Reviewed By: Tigerbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 22:56 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG!!!! Totally loved the second story but they are both really really really good. I really hope that you write more to this story maybe even make a third that carries the Uo and Kyo portion further..... but that is totally up to you. Plz email me I would love to talk to you my email address is Tigerbaby32043@yahoo.com PLZ ANYONE FEEL FREE TO EMAIL ME!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: silver_stripes On: September 07, 2004 18:29 CDT
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Wow! You haven't updated in almost a year! I'm really hoping you will update this fic soon. It is really well written. I've really enjoyed it and I like to see a darker Gure on occasion, I'm just glad it's not in every Gureru fic. Anyway, PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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Reviewed By: fya On: September 02, 2004 09:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like lemons but I'm so disturbed right now, like the previous reveiwer. This is not a bad fic at all, it's the fact that you have Shigure doing such awful things to Tohru. I'm sorry, I tried to get past chapter three, even though I skim read most of those chapters, but I just couldn't do it. It was torture and unbelievably sad to see Tooru deteriorate like that. This is far more darker than I expected. You're a creative writer, but I think your talents could be better shown elsewhere...
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