| "Lemonade, Too" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: Miss Nikki [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2008 15:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just took up reading InuYasha fanfiction again after probably 2 or 3 years. I remembered this story but couldn't for the life of me remember the name of it. Suprising enough I remembered it after reading 'Spooks Delight.' Some one had mentioned in a review that it was stolen and placed as a chapter in a story called 'Something Lemonade' and viola I remembered the title. Imagine my surprise when you hadn't updated it. Well, understand writer's block and the inablity to complete a story that you've lost interest in. However, I still enjoyed rereading this story even if it isn't complete. Are you still writing? Or did you give up the art all together? MissNikki MisstressNicole@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: gwineveve301 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 13:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it loved it loved! Please update soon. This one has way more chapter then what you have posted on hero 21!
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Title: its been a year!!!!
Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 19:12 CDT
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can you pls pls finish the story???
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Title: its been a year!!!!
Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 19:09 CDT
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can you pls pls finish the story???
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Title: when????
Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi when are you going to finish the story?
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Title: when????
Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi when are you going to finish the story?
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Title: when????
Reviewed By: xochitl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi when are you going to finish the story?
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Reviewed By: aspiringtolove [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 19:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazing! PLEASE WRITE MORE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 14:29 CST
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yay! udoate soon i cant wait to see what happens next. this is an awsome story please udpate soon!
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: StephanieRoxUrSox [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 21:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i love ur fanfic, so far I was overjoyed with tears at the progress of the story but it has been so long since you have written may you please update soon, anticipation waits for no one! Loving it, but if it's stressful take your break!
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Title: YAY!
Reviewed By: The goddess Rhiannon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your updating again! i loved this story a few years ago when i read it and now it's bad again! YAY! It's great, i just love it, i hope you update again soon. PLease?
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Title: hott!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tHIS STORY IS HOTT I REALLY LIKE IT CANT WAIT TO FIND OUT WHAT HAPPENS NEXT. SO PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON. TILL THEN KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK:-)
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Reviewed By: pysiak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2006 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your series! It's one of my favorite things to come back to and re-read over, and over, and over again! Thank you for writing such wonderful stuff!! :)
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Reviewed By: Knock-on-Wood [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 20:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hahaha...finally! I've been trying to review your story since you updated the last few chapters..but it wouldn't let me, claiming I wasn't logged in when I was...Anyways, I love your story! I just randomly found it and from the start I realized that you have something unique here. I've never seen a story like this and its wonderful! :) Well...great chapter...I bet Yash is so going to go ballistic in the next one...heh, I bet he feels like ripping the city apart to find her. Well, great job! Please update again when you get the chance! :) Until next time, take care! ^_^
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Title: ch. 18
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 19:53 CST
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You don't need to capitalize job titles like "director." I'm pretty sure it's spelled "wannabe." ~~~ Too kinky for Miroku? It cannot be! ~~ Foolish Kaede... Surely by now you've learned to leave an infuriating note for the silly puppy.
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 17:42 CST
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Hm... History doesn't usually "shroud" things. Usually, it's the opposite. I adore Miroku's thought omissions. ~~~ Miroku has a list of possible people. The possibilities themselves would not have taken it. ~~~Hmm... Toukijin wasn't made from the Inupapa's fangs, right? I think it was Goshinki's. ~~~Hee hee hee! Our thorough little monk!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 19:37 CST
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wow an update! I applaud your coming back to this story..it's always sad when authors leave us hanging. I had to go back and read the first story and all I have to say is I love it! you're an awesome writer...can't wait to see what happens to the sword and the pup(s)
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Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 18:47 CST
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Wait a sec...am I going crazy? Did I just read an update on something that hasn't been updated in almost two years?!? No, I'm not?!? Awesome! Well, this was quite a shock to me when I got the notice saying you updated. Quite frankly, I thought I was seeing things. Turns out that I wasn't. Good thing too! To see a resurrection of a great fic done by an author is rare in and of itself. But to have it done while still retaining most of the feel of the previous entries despite the two year hiatus is quite another, and demands more than the normal sentence of praise and admiration: So kudos to you! I remember finishing "I'll Have Lemonade, Please", and thinking "This is the best AU Inuyahsa fic out there!" What was even cooler than that was finding out it had a sequel. However, I must admit I was quite disappointed when I found that it was incomplete. Seeing what looks to be a promising resurrection is excellant, and I'm hoping to see more. What strikes me though, like I said before, is how you've retained the same style and feel of this story, despite the two year absense. While it may not be completely on par with the rest, it is pretty damn close (95%). But hell, with as good as an author as you, I'm not complaining. Keep it up, hope to see more! Peace! d('')b
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 12:14 CST
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Visions? These actually sound like garden-variety pregnancy nightmares. This isn\'t as bright as your earlier chapters, but the ending is very strong. It\'s good to see the resurrection.
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Reviewed By: robyrules4eva On: July 25, 2005 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi. I love this story one of my faverotes for inuyasha fanfics. i was wonderingf when you would update next. it's a really good fic and i really love it and i was hoping i could find out what happens. please update soon so i can stop hanging off this fic. again i congratulate you on your awesome fic and it's orginality
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Title: I love it
Reviewed By: DonnaTuskino [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. When is are you gonna update? I am crazy about this story. keep up the good work -_^.
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