| "Lemonade, Too" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: my comment On: February 06, 2003 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my favorite partis this: when he was satisfied with their relative positions, he balanced his hands on either side of her shoulders, looked her directly in the eye and said, "OK, now, bitch. Say it!"
Downstairs, in the great room Kagome’s mother heard her pregnant daughter dissolve into giggles. She closed her book, stood up and turned off the small reading light she was using. "I think I'll read in my room for a while. Bound to be quieter. Damn insomnia," she muttered.
As she reached the door she heard, "Sit!" Thump, "Umph" and a lot of laughter.
"Way too much information," she said and went down the hall back to her room.
Loved this story. LMAO ROFL from this!
Please continue this!!!!!
you got a 10 from me for this story. |
Reviewed By: Write more please On: February 24, 2003 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the love of God if you don't write more of this I swear I will get angry, and I am not pretty when I am angry so write some more, damnit! |
Reviewed By: neb On: February 04, 2003 05:46 CST
Comment/Review:
ha, cool continue this story is excellent |
Reviewed By: inuyashas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 19:13 CST
Comment/Review:
YAH SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope this one is full of mystery and LEMON *wink wink* as I'll have Lemonade, Please! That was one of the best stories i have ever read and i don't doubt for a second that this one won't top the last!!! Please update soon, kay?
~luv ya~
Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Lenkia On: January 27, 2003 00:10 CST
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I love the original and I am liking what you have written so far. Can't wait to read chapter 2
later |
Reviewed By: angle-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 16:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!
please update soon.
angle-chan |
Reviewed By: Yash'sChick On: January 24, 2003 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally!
First of all, I totally LOVED the 1st Lemonade -- it was damned good! Your writing is a great mix of humor & sexy. Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Saya415 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 10:26 CST
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Muahahaha!!! It's part two and I like!! This is too cute! Next chapter please ^__________^ |
Reviewed By: luna_night [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2003 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur story kicks mad ass...i am so happy u started the sequal i was dying waiting for it...i love how inuyasha is such a baddass...and so kawaii at the same time...gotta love inyasha |
Reviewed By: Mariam On: January 22, 2003 20:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i looooove thi story but i am not sure if i like inuyashas character and how he gets all upset about the fact that they can't sleep in the same but. all in all i really really want to read more and i hope you update soon!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: little_bit_of_faith16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 20:40 CST
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Love the Wisconsin thing by the way, I live there too. |
Reviewed By: little_bit_of_faith16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2003 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've loved these fics sooo much. Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Dark Angel On: January 20, 2003 17:54 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been wating for the sequel!! It's sooooooooo good so far!! I really like the ending! I hope it becomes a lemon! Write more really soon! |
Reviewed By: dreambraider On: January 20, 2003 07:52 CST
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Lol,keep up the good writing.
Too bad its completed. I was hoping for a clearer picture of what happened to the sit.
Oh well. Keep it up. |
Reviewed By: inuyashas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 17:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow good first chapter but i hope there will be some mystery, action and a lot of lemon like the fist story hich was awesome by the and i know that this one with your talent will top the last!!!! with that i bid you farewell! :P
~luv ya~ |
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