| "Lemonade, Too" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: morningirl On: February 08, 2003 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Are you going to continue with it? I really like it. i've read alot of I/K fics but this one has to be the best so far. Please write more! |
Reviewed By: lizzie On: February 13, 2003 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great update to this fic of yours...nice touch with the ring selection!!! Hope to read more from you as always! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen On: February 13, 2003 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This version of Miroku rocks! Even more than in "Lemonade," you're giving us a great pic of Miroku's levelheaded side translated into a modern context.
"You can't do that! This is Wisconsin!" I am so lucky I wasn't drinking anything during this one. I can only dry off my keyboard so many times... |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen On: February 14, 2003 09:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! Once again, I love how you did Miroku: he's levelheaded and sweet, yet still obsessed with chickage. "How about because if you don't you won't be getting any 'til you get back to L.A.?"
And it's just as funny as the first one! "You can't do that here! This is Wisconsin!" (snark!)
Are we going to run into your version of Hojo in Kagome's hometown? Can't wait to see what THAT would do! |
Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 10:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the robbery scene where Kagome called Inu-chan "his supreme pompous assness." CTFU!!! I laughed so loud and hard at that!!! This is a great story, and I loved the first installment as well. Hurry and add more funny stuff....you're a great writer!!! |
Reviewed By: Saya415 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles* I'm so happy you've decided to do a sequel!! It's too cute~! Never mess with moms!! They know all ^_____^v
So where's the next chapter? |
Reviewed By: Meg On: February 14, 2003 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this story can't wait to read chapter three and I can't wait to hear all the names she will call him when she goes into labor.....
ja ne |
Reviewed By: my comment On: February 06, 2003 20:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my favorite partis this: when he was satisfied with their relative positions, he balanced his hands on either side of her shoulders, looked her directly in the eye and said, "OK, now, bitch. Say it!"
Downstairs, in the great room Kagome’s mother heard her pregnant daughter dissolve into giggles. She closed her book, stood up and turned off the small reading light she was using. "I think I'll read in my room for a while. Bound to be quieter. Damn insomnia," she muttered.
As she reached the door she heard, "Sit!" Thump, "Umph" and a lot of laughter.
"Way too much information," she said and went down the hall back to her room.
Loved this story. LMAO ROFL from this!
Please continue this!!!!!
you got a 10 from me for this story. |
Reviewed By: Write more please On: February 24, 2003 23:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the love of God if you don't write more of this I swear I will get angry, and I am not pretty when I am angry so write some more, damnit! |
Reviewed By: neb On: February 04, 2003 05:46 CST
Comment/Review:
ha, cool continue this story is excellent |
Reviewed By: inuyashas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2003 19:13 CST
Comment/Review:
YAH SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope this one is full of mystery and LEMON *wink wink* as I'll have Lemonade, Please! That was one of the best stories i have ever read and i don't doubt for a second that this one won't top the last!!! Please update soon, kay?
~luv ya~
Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Lenkia On: January 27, 2003 00:10 CST
Comment/Review:
I love the original and I am liking what you have written so far. Can't wait to read chapter 2
later |
Reviewed By: angle-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2003 16:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!
please update soon.
angle-chan |
Reviewed By: Yash'sChick On: January 24, 2003 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally!
First of all, I totally LOVED the 1st Lemonade -- it was damned good! Your writing is a great mix of humor & sexy. Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: Saya415 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 10:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Muahahaha!!! It's part two and I like!! This is too cute! Next chapter please ^__________^ |
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