"Lemonade, Too" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: Cat On: June 08, 2003 20:07 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I quote:
Reviewed By: wut's up?!! On: June 05, 2003 23:37 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG!!! I've been like, waiting for this update for like, EVER and u totally like, put me down!! It was AWFUL; no plot, not much talking, and even wrose, no lemony goodness. I'm sorry but u really let me down. Please, do try to do better work, especially if ur gonna take so long to update!
OK, now people, tell me who's the bitch? I, who wait patiently for the third chapter to be out and got mad at someone who dared insult the creativity of fujifunmum or wut's up?! who insults her??
Fujifunmum, I greatly enjoy this chapter! Please update soon.
wut's up?! bitch, learn respect! |
Reviewed By: CherryEvil On: June 07, 2003 20:05 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh I love this story! Could you e-mail me when you update? |
Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 20:37 CDT Comment/Review: omg that ending has me speachless like what the? Sesshy-chan a singer? O.O don't take forever to update again!! or i shall spaz lol |
Reviewed By: little_bit_of_faith16 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2003 16:41 CDT Comment/Review: It's SO good to have you back. I was totally afraid you had died or something. Or worse...you just got bored and didn't want to finish. That would have made me sad. Oh well, your back now. Great chapter as usual. Update SOON!!! |
Reviewed By: Cataluna [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 23:42 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Yay! I'm so happy to see you're back and updating ^^ Love the bonding and the way Inuyasha is trying hard to make Kagome happy. Bruce Lee impression? This I got to see. |
Reviewed By: wut's up?!! On: June 05, 2003 22:37 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10 Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review: OMG!!! I've been like, waiting for this update for like, EVER and u totally like, put me down!! It was AWFUL; no plot, not much talking, and even wrose, no lemony goodness. I'm sorry but u really let me down. Please, do try to do better work, especially if ur gonna take so long to update! |
Reviewed By: Sorena On: June 05, 2003 19:22 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I've been checking for this fic ever since the 2nd chapter every 2 days, and I'm so glad you updated! Fantastic job as always, great great great! This is my favorite story in the world! ^__^ 10 thumbs up! Wheeee!
*~Sorena~* |
Reviewed By: angle-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 16:32 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love your story, although I'm kinda' saddend that they didn't get to geet married. But I hope that you will continue and update soon. Can't wait! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 15:51 CDT Comment/Review: Pardon me whilst I do the Dance of the Joyous Update.
When people talk about the Shikon no Tama attracting evil, I didn't quite think they meant old almost-boyfriends...
I was wondering when Fluffy-sama would show up. I should have known he'd be "The Tail." So is he a dancer or a singer or some kind of wierdo progressive artist? |
Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2003 13:27 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: poor yash...they say that every dog has his day...well for yash is just hasn't been his week.
great chapter, update soon! ja!! |
Reviewed By: Demonchic_K On: June 02, 2003 19:15 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You have got to update your fic. I rally love this story just update the damn thing!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Soudesuka_Shurikens On: July 31, 2003 20:07 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wow..i don't know who is the bigger freak ^_^
the author or the characters.VERY KINKY.
TWO THUMBS UP. this story is awsome.
keep updating and keep on trucking.
bene. |
Reviewed By: Leina On: May 29, 2003 01:45 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Yash is such an ass! Kagome better teach him a few things soon. I can't wait to see this one updated. I wonder what happened with the "sit" thing. |
Reviewed By: paulina [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2003 20:58 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: like your story |
Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2003 16:26 CDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Come on update already! you haven't updated for months! |
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