| "Lemonade, Too" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2003 20:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
keep it up!!!!!!!!! i usually have some "constructive" critism BUT i have none for you! this fic ROCKS!!!!! you RULE!!!! KEEP wrITING! PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLEAZZZZZZZZZZ if you can't b/c of skool that i unserstand cuz i'm in the same sistuation......but plezzzzz!!! |
Reviewed By: *~Sorena~* On: December 31, 1969 18:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic chapter as always, you've never let me down. ^_^ Keep up the awesome work.
*~Sorena~* |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2003 21:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
I was right! I was right! Bad InuYasha! Making Sango and Miroku do all that work for you and turning around and giving them that godforsaken eyesore.
I see that InuYasha still has Shippo treading around him. So possesive! I like how you made Sango block InuYasha. I never thought about doing that when I didn't want to talk to an annoying friend. And I think that their home life is going to be really sweet but, right now InuYasha has this crissies to keep Kagome caged but.....Its not going to last forever. I wonder it he will let her go to the wedding?
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next one! |
Reviewed By: little_bit_of_faith16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 21:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story so much. As far as I'm concerned you can do no wrong. It was nice to finally get some answers too. At least there was some reason behind the wedding from hell, although I still wouldn't call it "fun". Can't wait for the nest installment. |
Reviewed By: fluffy'slova4life [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2003 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe.........gotta love it~! plez write more! i luve it!
-locachickea |
Reviewed By: Babsie On: August 22, 2003 23:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
I donīt know how many times i declare my unconditional love for this fic...but Iīll do it again.
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER! I LOVE THIS FIC!
The fear that Kagome fells, all the possibilities, the possessiviness from Inuyasha.
Very good...
Canīt wait for the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: lizzie On: August 22, 2003 23:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oh Fujifunfum this story just keeps getting better. Hehehehehe, liked the idea of Yash getting back at Sango and Miroku. Although, I am starting to get worried about Sango. As usual, I will await the next installment! Take care! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 13:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Sess and Inu are the only ones left? No wonder Rin was so sad.
"Right. Like you know how to work the microwave."
Hee!
Very nice touch that Inuyasha feels glad to have Tetsusaiga back.
I think Sesshoumaru might have his own ideas about where Toukijin ought be kept.
How often do primarily-lemon 'fics like "Lemonade" turn into epics like this? |
Reviewed By: Nanda [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2003 10:08 CDT
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Glad to see a new chapter, disappointed that we missed the revolving bed in Chapter 10... *laughs* Although, with all that was going on at the time, perhaps it really was for the best. *sighs* Pups in danger... I must confess that the thought had already occurred to me, but still... *sigh* Great work! |
Reviewed By: lizzie On: August 10, 2003 11:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
This update sure made my otherwise disastrous weekend into one I could enjoy!!!! THANK YOU!!!! To think I missed the other chapters tsk,tsk,tsk. Again it was a great read, you continue to uphold the quality I have come to expect and admire from your fics. The plot just continues to thicken and I look forward to reading more of it! Take care! |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2003 01:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmmm. Well isn't this an interesting development! I wonder if Kagome used the Jewel during the marking as an instinct or if she just didn't want it to interupt the "festivites". Well either way it has made a juciy plot twist. If InuYasha can wield can't Kagome? If that is the case then he might want to reconsider how she will fit in this "plan" of his. I wonder if Sesshou-maru and Rin are in danger, too. I'm guessing that he can also use the Tensaiga, but won't vice versa be true with Sesshou-maru and the Tetsusaiga?
I just know that something disaterious is going to happen at Miroku and Sango's wedding. I bet the Toukijin shows up without RSVPing!
Thanks for the update and the great writing that I have come to expect. Update soon! And sorry about the errors. ( I wrote this kinda fast )
Bye
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Reviewed By: Kissi21 On: August 09, 2003 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent. Fan-freaking-tastic. Great story. Update soon. |
Reviewed By: little_bit_of_faith16 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2003 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hhmmm...an interesting chapter. I was wondering when we were going to get back to the actual plot. Very creative. I'm liking this story more and more every chapter. I can't wait to read what happends next so don't be away too long! |
Reviewed By: Babsie On: August 08, 2003 22:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
You know.
I love so much your work.
You know. I read "I`ll have lemonade, please" and now "Lemonade, too" is priceless.
You make me laugh so hard that I wake my parents in the next room.
I love it.
Please update soon |
Reviewed By: starr-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2003 23:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best written stories I've seen on mm.org or on ff.net. I absolutly love it and I always enjoy reading it! Please continue, I'd love to see how this all works out. |
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