| "Lemonade, Too" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2006 17:42 CST
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Hm... History doesn't usually "shroud" things. Usually, it's the opposite. I adore Miroku's thought omissions. ~~~ Miroku has a list of possible people. The possibilities themselves would not have taken it. ~~~Hmm... Toukijin wasn't made from the Inupapa's fangs, right? I think it was Goshinki's. ~~~Hee hee hee! Our thorough little monk!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 19:37 CST
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wow an update! I applaud your coming back to this story..it's always sad when authors leave us hanging. I had to go back and read the first story and all I have to say is I love it! you're an awesome writer...can't wait to see what happens to the sword and the pup(s)
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Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2006 18:47 CST
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Wait a sec...am I going crazy? Did I just read an update on something that hasn't been updated in almost two years?!? No, I'm not?!? Awesome! Well, this was quite a shock to me when I got the notice saying you updated. Quite frankly, I thought I was seeing things. Turns out that I wasn't. Good thing too! To see a resurrection of a great fic done by an author is rare in and of itself. But to have it done while still retaining most of the feel of the previous entries despite the two year hiatus is quite another, and demands more than the normal sentence of praise and admiration: So kudos to you! I remember finishing "I'll Have Lemonade, Please", and thinking "This is the best AU Inuyahsa fic out there!" What was even cooler than that was finding out it had a sequel. However, I must admit I was quite disappointed when I found that it was incomplete. Seeing what looks to be a promising resurrection is excellant, and I'm hoping to see more. What strikes me though, like I said before, is how you've retained the same style and feel of this story, despite the two year absense. While it may not be completely on par with the rest, it is pretty damn close (95%). But hell, with as good as an author as you, I'm not complaining. Keep it up, hope to see more! Peace! d('')b
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2006 12:14 CST
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Visions? These actually sound like garden-variety pregnancy nightmares. This isn\'t as bright as your earlier chapters, but the ending is very strong. It\'s good to see the resurrection.
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Reviewed By: robyrules4eva On: July 25, 2005 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi. I love this story one of my faverotes for inuyasha fanfics. i was wonderingf when you would update next. it's a really good fic and i really love it and i was hoping i could find out what happens. please update soon so i can stop hanging off this fic. again i congratulate you on your awesome fic and it's orginality
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Title: I love it
Reviewed By: DonnaTuskino [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2005 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. When is are you gonna update? I am crazy about this story. keep up the good work -_^.
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Reviewed By: sweetmelchan On: February 09, 2005 02:15 CST
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Good story I read the first one a while back hope you get around to finishing it someday.
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Reviewed By: warcraft On: December 02, 2004 03:43 CST
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PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: INU-EARS On: September 18, 2004 22:37 CDT
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PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR STORIES!!!! I LOVE THE LEMONADE SERIES TO DEATH!!!! PLEASE DONT GIVE UP ON THEM NOW!!! YOUR WORK IS AMAZING!!!
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Title: EXCELLENT!
Reviewed By: Demonicslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2004 12:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have now read both Lemonade stories! THEY RULE! Ummm is chapter 15 the last one in the sequel? If it isn't UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: milady On: June 15, 2004 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good story and I hope you update it soon...
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Reviewed By: inu-ears On: May 29, 2004 11:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic!! please update soon!
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Title: It's me Miss Nikki
Reviewed By: MissNikki On: May 19, 2004 08:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey!!! I've been printing this story out, and I don't think the teachers like me coming in empty handed and leaving out with a thick stack. But I like the long chapters and this is the best sequel ever. Well I don't think I've ever read a fanfic with a squel. I like it so keep up the good work. Love MN
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Title: great chapter
Reviewed By: sorena27 On: May 14, 2004 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it! Great chapter. I can't believe I hadn't checked up until now! Well, glad you updated. ^_^
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Reviewed By: stephino On: April 29, 2004 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANKS FOR UPDATING!!! i was afraid you forgot this storie^^, i do have a bit of constructive critisisum...the constant talk or "aura" is really annoying. ut you have a great writing talent
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