| "Lemonade, Too" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: write more!! On: February 23, 2003 13:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! I love your first fic "I'll Have Lemonade, Please" and I just love your sequal even more!! you have got to write more of this stuff. The title of this fic reminds me of "Look Who's Talking Too" hmmmm... I wonder if you got the name from that?? |
Reviewed By: ale On: March 31, 2003 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!!
Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee |
Reviewed By: Silvertongue [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2003 16:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! I love it! Such a kickass fic, I'm serious. I *love* Inuyasha in this fic, he's awesome. My favorite part was probably the "yes lord inuyasha" part... haha, so funny. Great job, I can't wait for more! |
Reviewed By: lemon gal On: February 19, 2003 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it soooooo much. Pwease write more, is there gonna b more juicy lemon? |
Reviewed By: monkey86 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 20:44 CST
Comment/Review:
update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! update!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: lemia On: February 17, 2003 07:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update soon,oh it was kickass ^_^ |
Reviewed By: sorena27 On: February 16, 2003 03:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!
My favorite lemon! ^_^ this is so cute, and I can't wait for the wedding! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Kalika Higurashi On: February 15, 2003 16:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry but I really love this fanfic and you must update quickly! I'd love to know what happens next! :D |
Reviewed By: morningirl On: February 08, 2003 20:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. Are you going to continue with it? I really like it. i've read alot of I/K fics but this one has to be the best so far. Please write more! |
Reviewed By: lizzie On: February 13, 2003 22:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great update to this fic of yours...nice touch with the ring selection!!! Hope to read more from you as always! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen On: February 13, 2003 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This version of Miroku rocks! Even more than in "Lemonade," you're giving us a great pic of Miroku's levelheaded side translated into a modern context.
"You can't do that! This is Wisconsin!" I am so lucky I wasn't drinking anything during this one. I can only dry off my keyboard so many times... |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen On: February 14, 2003 09:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah! Once again, I love how you did Miroku: he's levelheaded and sweet, yet still obsessed with chickage. "How about because if you don't you won't be getting any 'til you get back to L.A.?"
And it's just as funny as the first one! "You can't do that here! This is Wisconsin!" (snark!)
Are we going to run into your version of Hojo in Kagome's hometown? Can't wait to see what THAT would do! |
Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 10:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the robbery scene where Kagome called Inu-chan "his supreme pompous assness." CTFU!!! I laughed so loud and hard at that!!! This is a great story, and I loved the first installment as well. Hurry and add more funny stuff....you're a great writer!!! |
Reviewed By: Saya415 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 14:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*giggles* I'm so happy you've decided to do a sequel!! It's too cute~! Never mess with moms!! They know all ^_____^v
So where's the next chapter? |
Reviewed By: Meg On: February 14, 2003 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this story can't wait to read chapter three and I can't wait to hear all the names she will call him when she goes into labor.....
ja ne |
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