| "Lemonade, Too" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2003 11:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Some word repetition...
I'd been wondering how an independant person like Kag would react to this archaic bit. Not to mention that the details were often quite cool.
I hadn't counted on that trick with the Shikon. If anything, I'd thought it would complicate things in a bad way. |
Reviewed By: Sorena On: July 10, 2003 03:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was a well-written lemon, though I must say I was a tad bit disappointed when I learnt it was a Rin/Sess, y'know? But don't be disappointed, you can't please everyone, right? ^_^ I am a huge fan of your works and even more so of this story. I know I can't WAIT for the Inu/Kag fluff! *wink wink* Please post the next chapter as soon as you can!
*~Sorena~* |
Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2003 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice lemon scene with sess and rin...next chapter more yash and kagome fluff eh?
anyways, no death threats, not begging and pleading, all i ask is that you update when you can.
ja! |
Reviewed By: Bunny On: July 06, 2003 00:09 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK. I've never read a Sesshy/Rin pairing before and frankly, it was a bit of a shock. I think my problem is the fact that i can't picture her older than what she is in the series. Adding to that it really pissed me off to read Sesshy so dominanent and Rin so freakin submissive it was depressing. HOW COULD SHE BE HAPPY BEING SO BLOODY ACOMIDATING! I'm not flamming you or anything but I'm a girl of the 21st century and that honor and obey stuff don't work well with me! The way you wrote Sesshy is probably the way he would be with Rin and in real life; it's just hate it when reality intrudes on my fantasies with Sesshy.(Pout) Sorry,I will stop now before I take up too much space with my whinning. |
Reviewed By: amanda On: July 05, 2003 01:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! Although I have to admit I don't really care for rin/sess. But I can't wait to read more inu/kag! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2003 17:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Lost empire... I wonder what happened. I wonder whether Inu ever lived in Japan, or whether he was born in Montana.
But I like the take on Rin, an old-fashioned woman but just a little out of place in this time. She always seemed so energetic as a kid. The telling of Sess' past, Inutaisho's favoritism... Sesshoumaru's choices all make sense when put in this perspective.
The lemon is touching. We have so many stories about people just getting together, and it's warming to see some of the closeness that comes from knowing each other for a long time.
Is this meant to be a foil for something? Rin knows very well what's going on and for all Sess' other characteristics, their time together is harmonious, but Kagome has no idea. Now that I've got some idea what the Marking is supposed to be, I wonder how she'll react. |
Reviewed By: ScarletRaven1001 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, this is like, so cool! When are Yash and Kag gonna be on? Man, I am so excited! |
Reviewed By: Sorena On: June 28, 2003 23:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Liked this chapter a lot! Always happy to see you update! ^_^ Can't wait for the lemon chapter and keep up the great work! I wonder why she can't use the soap...
*~Sorena~* |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 21:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
The Asshole is about to become her Asshole-in-Law.
I wonder what of the soap... And I wonder why Sess thinks that this has something to do with a reason why Inuyasha would prefer Tennseiga. Something is a danger to her -- I hope she swats his stubborn hide until he spills. |
Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you rock! chapter six totally rocked, and the dialogue between Yash and the Artist...nice.
update soon! |
Reviewed By: Jess On: June 27, 2003 12:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting chp! Can't wait to read how does he preform the Marking and why would it be harmful to them in a way! (^_^) |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2003 08:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dun dun duuuuun! And here I thought it wasn't going to have this kind of plot!
What could Sesshoumaru have to gain by offering him Tennseiga? (I can see why such an offer woulkd upset Rin.) Is it a test of his loyalty ot their father? |
Reviewed By: Jenny On: June 23, 2003 09:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this was a very good fanfic and I hope there is more to the story soon. |
Reviewed By: Sorena On: June 22, 2003 14:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Very well written! Only complaint I got is not enough fluff between Inu/Kag! Otherwise, really good chapter! ^_^
*~Sorena~* |
Reviewed By: Precious On: June 21, 2003 03:54 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am very pleased with this story and I look foward to see where you are going to take the readers(us)next. I also dig this suave Inu Yasha. I can honestly say that I am truly intriged by this twist so much that I an going to read part 1 I Have Lemonade, Please. Be lookinh for the next chapter.
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