| "Lemonade, Too" Reviews/Comments [ 163 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lady Abhorsen [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Giggles* I loved the Elvis thing! It was hilarious. Poor Kagome!!! Can't wait for the next chapter Fuji-san |
Reviewed By: Yoraeryu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2003 13:11 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gawd... That was.. the worst.. Yash dressing up as Elvis and Kagome in go-go boots... Oh geez... I couldn't stop laughing the entire time I was reading it! I'm still cackling as I type this! I can't stand Elvis, but you made me laugh, so you deserve a... well a much higher number than a ten! Update soon, but no more Elvis, please! Lol!! |
Reviewed By: Zorro On: July 28, 2003 21:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fanfic! the lemons are extra sweet!
*don't forget about Sango and Miroku!!!!! Two lemons=x2 sweetness!! |
Reviewed By: Lor [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 20:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one word to describe the two latest chapters....damn! Update again SOON |
Reviewed By: Sorena On: July 26, 2003 04:49 CDT
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I loved this chapter! So cute! ^_^ I can't wait to find out where they're going, and the lemon scenes were as always, superb. Keep up the fantastic work!
*~Sorena~* |
Reviewed By: Yoraeryu [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 21:26 CDT
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Aaaahh!! That was so good!! Inu-kun stealing the soaps... HE STOLE MY HOBBY!! T.T; ^.^;; Ah, well.. I can forgive him if he comes back in another chapter soon... I absolutely love the story! You HAVE to update A.S.A.P., ok?? Thanks. Oh, wait.... What's the deal with Inu-kun saying "pups?" Are there really more than one? WILL THEY HAVE HIS EARS?!? I must know!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen On: July 25, 2003 18:48 CDT
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Inu goodies...
BWAhahahahhaaa! Inuyasha is stealing the shampoo! |
Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 14:58 CDT
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Ha ha! Nice of you to remember that she would want to wash her hair.
Off to Montana, then? |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2003 14:07 CDT
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Thank You! Thank You! Thank You! I have been checking everyday since the last update. ( Yes I have a life! ) Well good chapter as always, a little short for you. But thats okay. I wonder where the hanyou is taking his "mate". Since he has made it obvious they are not going home yet....
Be looking for your next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Ithilwen [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 21:22 CDT
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Hm... Kagome is less out-of-character than I thought. She's so innocent about wanting to meet Sesshoumaru. Catches on quick, but her reactions were dead-on what I'd expect of Kagome ten years later. |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 01:37 CDT
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I can't belive I forgot to put this in my review. I really liked your version of "Marking" it made a lot of sense. Unlike the others I've read this was less painful and the mixing of the scent and auras seems to make more senes than a bite mark. Also, the Marking in this way states the forever bonding that will be detected by any and all demons. Some how I know that this is going to play a big part in the rest of the story. I am also intrieged by the after math of this joining. What will the side effects be....?
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Reviewed By: Babsie On: July 13, 2003 19:23 CDT
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I´ve readed the fic I´ll have lemonade, please...and I love it.
Now...I´m reading Lemonade,too and I have no words to say how much I´m enjoing it.
It´s interesting the way you are rescuing the old problems between Inuyasha and Kagome and put all of this ina a today´s world.
Very good.
Keep doing a great job.
Congratulations. |
Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2003 17:25 CDT
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Wow! Dog demons bring a whole new meaning to the words 'horny' and 'desire'. These last two chapters have left me hot and senseless. Words are no good at describing them and it would be a crime to due so. You did a good job, be looking for your next update. Now I am going to go call my boyfriend your writing has given me some fun ideas!
Peace
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Reviewed By: AngelOfDiamonds On: July 13, 2003 15:40 CDT
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one word...
WOW |
Reviewed By: Sorena On: July 11, 2003 15:16 CDT
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Wow! That was a great chapter. The first time I read a lemon that was so much based on the rules. I really enjoyed reading this, and congrats again to writing such an awesome fic! ^_^
*~Sorena~* |
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