| "Time for Healing" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Reviewed By: Forsaken [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 11:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the interaction with Drew and Dee. Oh, but I smell more angst in the air. Poor Dee. He's probably recollecting the last time he came up to his door, and the horrible events there after. *smiles* I just love emotional trauma. Keep up the great work you two. Can't wait to see more! |
Reviewed By: magegirl On: March 05, 2003 06:12 CST
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Wow! you guys are good. I have only heard about Fake from an anime catalog that I own, so I only got a small explaination of the plot. After reading your story I would really like to find out more about Fake. I hope you two post more onto mediaminer, I'm dying to find out what happens with Dee and Ryu. |
Reviewed By: Forsaken [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2003 15:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the chapter, ladies. Excellent job as usual. Keep up the angst! |
Reviewed By: Joma On: March 03, 2003 13:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good work. |
Reviewed By: BPurg On: February 28, 2003 01:15 CST
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Oh what to say what to say....other then I'm very happy with this chapter. Yes very very good.
Finaly we learn what Bikky and Dee are feeling and they make sence! Bikky is no longer confuzals. He is unconfuzald. Yay.
Also nice to see what's going on with Dee, and I am worried what torments the authors will inflict upon him next.
Oh what will next chapter bring? what oh what? Eeeee!
BPurg |
Reviewed By: BPurg On: February 23, 2003 17:11 CST
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It's been....how many days and no review from me? What ever has happened? Well..I fell off the face of the earth and would just like to stay there. But then I remembered that there are two wonderful o are working their butts off making a wonderful fic and are in need for reviews. n_n My name was mentioned in the end!!! (happiness and smiles!)
Another chapter that could border on being called happy. (I was soooooooooooo worried that you guys were going to put Ryo in the hospital! But he’s okay- for the moment). It was nice to see Ryo get out of the house and talk to Lyn. Very very good imagery/use of dialog (a main reason why I like the story so much n_n) Now I’m wondering what’s going on between Dee and Andrew. (May Dee become enlightened and may he and Ryo both be rewarded with a nice fat juicy lemon in the end)
This story is moving at a nice pace. It hasn’t moved any where- yet- but the build up has been good. Oh, man what else are you going to do to them?! The suspense is killing me….Don’t kill Ryo! Or Dee….or Andrew and Lyn!
Keep doing what you’ve been doing (my head hurts thus the reason why coherent sentences or the like is non-existent.) It’s nice finding out more about Andrew and Lyn and their relationship just as it is nice watching Dee’s and Ryo’s grow (shrink?) and being tested. Those two need to talk/ get their eyes open. Ryo is getting there, now it’s Dee’s turn.
Music- I’ve wanted a copy of that song since forever! Thank you and again it fits the tone and pace of the chapter quite nicely. There’s close to over 30min of music already, and I love it!
*going to take some Advil and lay down now*
squeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
BPurg |
Reviewed By: Jexia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2003 15:54 CST
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Thanks for the update!!! More, more, more, please! You guys are fast though. I check in every couple of days to see if there's anything new and today's update was a pleasant surprise. I want Dee and Ryo back in love with each other, but I'm willing to put up with some angst before they get there. Kind of goes with the "Fake" territory, doesn't it. |
Reviewed By: BPurg On: February 15, 2003 16:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am fixated and confused by Bikky’s behavior. When shall the boy make up his mind where he stands with Ryo/Dee’s relation ship? (he was willing to help in the prequel chapter and seemed to already know Ryo was in love with Dee, though nothing has been said). He is confused. And his confusion is confusing meeee!!!! So he’s cool with Lyn, (what could be cooler than an Irishman with piercings?) and Lyn’s speech about how he and Dee are hurting Ryo had a momentary effect on Bikky (momentary. Pretty sure it’s gonna go out the window next chapter)
Oh, next chapter is gonna be a lot of fun. Bikky jumping on Dee, chewing Dee out- blaming Dee for all the misery in their lives and Dee…will he fight back or will he to have a break down? Or both? Or worse…..
Dee hasn’t made the best of first impressions with Lyn and Andrew. Poor Dee, but what Lyn said was true. But at the same time it’s hard to hear/see other people’s pain when you are wrapped up in your own self-misery (he’s kinda fixated on the fact that he hasn’t had sex with Ryo yet- which IMOP is ADDING to his self loathing. He needs to get over that. Ryo ain’t going any where (unless you two do something unthinkably evil to him! Mean authors! ~_^) cause with all the hell Dee and Bikky are putting him through- he MUST love them both very very much)
Very good development and build up of plot and keeping all the characters moving and changing along with the story. Very good talent you guys have. And as always, the music track fits the tone and words of the chapter (very good coordination on that)
BPurg |
Reviewed By: KitsuneKyo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 13:48 CST
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*gasping*more, please! *arms flail wildly as kitsune falls to the floor in addiction-deprived throes* more dammit!
*giggle*Seriously.Great work. pleeeaaasssee update soon! |
Reviewed By: Forsaken [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 19:41 CST
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Gah! Thanks for posting your combo author name. I wouldn't have know otherwise that you'd started the sequel. And it's marvelous so far. You two are doing a fabulous job in depicting how much Dee and Ryo's lives have changed since Dee's attack. Thumbs up to both of you! |
Reviewed By: BPurg On: February 12, 2003 12:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter 4- it's a happy chapter (or more happy then it has been. Ryo wasn't crying at the end and there's this ray of hope with Lyn and Andrew being around. (and the song was a lot faster/happy too.)
Mygawd- what are you two planing to do to these guy next?!?
Seeing Andrew deal with Dee an Bikky is gonna be worth seeing- awaiting in high antisapation. Why? Cuz Bikky needs to stop being such a stuborn @$$ and HELP Ryo and Dee instead of putting more stress on Ryo. (Understand that the only reason why I want to tear Bikky's head off is cuz I think that's what his character is supose to do- and he is so good job.)
And Dee. Dee is being a pain in the butt- moody- broody- jerk. And who can blame him? May he become some-what enlightend and be rewarded with a big yummy lemon in the end.
Mygawd- what are you 2 going to do to him next?!?
*note the slight hint of fear in her voice and enjoy it*
And yes- a Lyn and Andrew fic would be MUCH loved and wanted. *and worshiped, and adored* :D |
Reviewed By: Sanaz On: February 13, 2003 08:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Mmm!
Lovly. A really lovly fic. it's good but you sure know it yourself by now! |
Reviewed By: BPurg On: February 06, 2003 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought Bikky was okay with Dee and Ryo's relationship. Unless he's such a pig headed brat he's not gonna admit it. The @#%! !
This is one of the best chapters yet. The tention is just- yee-ow poor Ryo. It's not gonna be pretty when things start snapping. Owch.
Your blood and sweat has been well used. Much love to you both.
n_n |
Reviewed By: Kagome33 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2003 23:12 CST
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I'm just wondering if Dee will get his sight back. I really like the story keep up the good work. I f you like pelase e-mail me at srchesanek@nichols.edu |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: February 04, 2003 02:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWWooooaaahhhhh,...it seems that things're NNNoottt looking good between our beloved couple,...*shaking head*...poor ryo,...he's goin to get grey hair before things started to go right again with dee,...
and dee isn't helping with his selfish-brat atitude,...*sssssiiiiiggghhhhhh*....continue soon kay,...and keep-up the good work,...till-yer next chapter,...JJaaaaaaaaaaa and GGGaaaanbbbbaatteeeeee-Neeeee!!^.^!! |
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