| "Kindred" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kethry [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2004 11:42 CDT
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OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, I found a Bardock fic!!!! Yummy! He soo needs more attention. **dreamy look** I really like this, please update soon. I want to know what happens with HER. **Clears throat** well anyway.. thanks for giving old B the attention he needs. I surely would LOVE to give him mine... **sighs** is it heatly for a grown woman to have dark thoughts about a cartoon charater... aw hell I don't care I do! Wind to your Wings, Kethry MoonDragon
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2004 21:20 CDT
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Must needs more. I'm still a little confused about her orgions and this entire brother thing. I am also looking forward to seeing how Bardock handles himself and gets off the planet. So ... you just need to update. -El-
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Reviewed By: fireice [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2004 19:59 CDT
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hey this is an awesome story. update soon i would like to know what's going to happen next.
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Title: my first Bardock fic
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2004 19:26 CDT
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Today, Mother's Day of all days here in U.S., I have read my first Bardock fic! Yours! I was curious, I must admit, expected some angsty appeal with some dark overtones from the movie--should've known you'd give me a fine, lusty boy just brimming with--oh whatever it is, it's fun! "That's what a Saiyan is my girl" debbiechan
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Title: nice story
Reviewed By: annakiyah [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 09:48 CDT
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Nice story, very original. Please write the next chapter! I want to know about the past of the girl! I can see you're really into Goku's father! You talk more about how she sees him than how he sees her, although I have no problem with that! ;)
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Title: LisaB
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 15:45 CST
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Oh my! Way to leave us hanging! You simply must continue--and soon. I'm not a patient woman, you know.
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Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: Blue Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2004 15:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA you updated!!!!...was it because I asked?^^ Tonikaku I haven't read it yet I was just too shocked not to keep my mouth shut...I'll review the chappy after I read it later on today...OMG I can't believe you FINALLY updated
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Title: Shagging spree in chapter 6?!
Reviewed By: BBoom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 23:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i can hardly wait
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Title: DAMN you rule
Reviewed By: BBoom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 23:32 CST
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DAMN you rule! i'm so horny now >.>
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Reviewed By: Blue Siren [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 13:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Damn woman...damn! I want the commander now :) let's swap Raditz for a while ne? I must say I've never really read a Bar-kun fic before but I'm glad I read this one. Is awesome!!!
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Reviewed By: mischief maker On: August 21, 2003 09:58 CDT
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Weeee! I finally got on mm and discovered that you updated!! You know I love this story. She finally got her memories back. I can't wait to find out more. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, this is really starting to get interesting... so the mysterious female has a brother... Can't wait for the shagging spree in the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2003 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is just so professional!! I was kinda hoping for a continuation of the beautiful lemon, but the exquisite way in which it's written, makes up for- in actual fact the lime in it makes up for the lack of anything sour.. *purrs* it's so good!!Fantastic job, Barb and Mel!! Purked me up, wonderfully, Thanks! |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2003 02:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WWWHHHEEEERRRRREEEESSSS Chhhhhaaaaappppiiiiieeeee*pantpant*fffffiiiivvvveee!!!!! Please post it, please, please-*pleaseinsertpuppydogeyeshere* Must have, must read! CCCCHHHHHAAAAAAPPPPPIIIIIEEEEEFFFFFIIIIVVVEEE!!!!!(Psst..Come on B.. She's gotta cumm, you know!!!!!) |
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon On: June 24, 2003 07:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this fic! I noticed the changes to chapter one right away, having read it several times on ffn. God, you really have a way with words! *You go girl!* It's beautiful the way you describe Bardock and her attraction to him! It's very original too. We need more fics with him in it! |
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