| "Kindred" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Reviewed By: Susan On: June 03, 2003 07:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First, I want to apologize for not having reviewed before. I thought I had. Second, that was one of the best lemons that I've ever read. My God he's such and animal and she's a control freak. They're perfect for each other ^_^. I found it amusing that she didn't care for any of the saiyans names Bardy had in mind. One thing that concerns me is that she was created to destroy a certain evil...what if that evil are the Saiyans O_O. Just a thought and a sick one too, especially since he already claimed her. Ain't I a fucking kill-joy! Anyhoo, excellent chap Bgurl and Kudos on your first lemon. It was lip-smacking good ^_~. |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2003 06:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love the updates... you continue to make the story even better... but... but... bit...
When do I get to see a NEW chapter???? |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2003 13:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
"She wasn't the worlds foremost expert on aerodynamics, she'd been taught a little about drag, lift, and thrust."
Oh, PLEASE let me borrow Bardock and see what I can learn about drag, lift and thrust!!! :) :) :) |
Reviewed By: LS On: May 28, 2003 02:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahhhh!! I didn't know you had updated *^_^*' {I guess I've been having a tough time getting mediaminer to come up lately...and I fell short on checking up ??} Whew! Great chapter!! *^_^* Really unique moments. I love when she sends 'tingling trails of fire dancing' along his arms hmmm perfect! I like when he 'rains little butterfly kisses' on her arm *sweet*...And, I love when he says "No"...*^_^* wonderful!! I really enjoy the realism in this chapter...you draw us in with it...but, there is also an element of the 'fantastic' as she is in awe of him {I like when she notices his feral scent and how 'beautiful' he is} I like how he is 'possessive' of her in the way he holds her to himself as she tries to deal w/ her overwhelmed senses...{and his growls change from lustful to reassuring etc.}I can't wait to read what happens next. I like the way you weave the 'mystery' of her throughout this chapter...still keeping us guessing as to who or what she is. And I like how no matter who or what she is, he is compelled to 'claim' her...and feel compassion for her...even feeling the need to try to give her a name. What fun characters to be drawn into this mystery with...hmmm |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
mmmmmmmmmmmmm that was great I still wish that was me lol. great ep love this |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2003 08:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your first lemon....YOU LIE! That was great! Very realistic. We all, myself included, tend to make lemons larger than life where the men are all sex gods, and the women are never left unfulfilled. It's nice to see that other side of it especially in the first time scenarios. I know I sure didn't....uh nevermind. You don't want to hear about that. Anyway, kudos to you!
Moving on..
I liked how Bardock was trying to get her attention, but she just kept on blabbing obliviously and even pulled her arm away from him. I couldn't help but laugh. Poor guy. But hey, all that's about to change. Pretty soon, she won't be able to get enough of him!! Go Bardock and his sexiness!
Wow, I didn't mean to write a book here, but I did want to make sure you knew how much I'm enjoying this story. Please update soon! |
Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another one bites the dust! Bardockgurl is no longer a "Lemon Virgin!" :)
Personally, I think she's really done this before, just under a different pen name. Either that or Bardock has been giving her way more attention than he's been giving me! >:O
Girl, this fic is so... so... what's the word?
Oh yeah. Fan-fucking-tastic!
I don't think I've ever read a lemon where they both don't have mind-blowing sex, and here the poor girl missed out twice! I loved how her lack of a name affected Bardock, even if she didn't care for his suggestions. You manage to fill your writing with events such as these, and it makes you stand out that much more.
I could go on and on, but I guess I should let others leave a review... :D |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: April 14, 2003 19:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Listen, your writing makes me feel many things; rest assured that pity is not one of them. I'm so glad you finally decided to post this. No part of it sucks...it's all incredible. |
Reviewed By: christabel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 18:49 CDT
Comment/Review:
My favorite part was where he made vain attempts to wake her up for round two. I also loved the lemon too :) |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2003 13:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS SOOOOOOO HOT!!!!! What a LEMON!!! DAMN! That's the first het lemon I've read in I can't remember when, and it was SOOOOO DELICIOUS!!
I loved how gentle he was when he realized it was her first time, and allowed her to take control. It was also SO refreshing and realistic that she wasn't sent to the moon her first time!! It seems that he's about to rectify that, though!
Enough about the lemon...the story itself is wonderful, too! I'm really intrigued to find out what exactly she is, who she is there to balance out the evil of, and what memories she has that haven't yet surfaced. Just an excellent plot all the way around! |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2003 08:00 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FIC!! That is ONE sexy Saiyajin you are writing here!! Excellent job! Can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: March 13, 2003 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should be ashamed of yourself!!! Hiding such an awesome talent from us for so long!!!
Great chap. |
Reviewed By: sirius b#tch On: March 13, 2003 06:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Sh#t, this is a good Bardock-fic.
You truly understand bardock's personality and
saiyan nature. I'm glad to know the Bardock-Spirit is still out there, alive and kicking.
(or doing somethin' else^^)
Let this story be an example for
authors who plan on writing Bardock-stories in
Saiyan-style.
You Rock, Girl, keep it up ...and now UPDATE!! |
Reviewed By: sirius b#tch On: March 13, 2003 06:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy Sh#t, this is a good Bardock-fic.
I'm glad 2 know the Bardock-spirit is still out there. You truly understand Bardock's true
personality and saiyan nature.
Let this story be an example to other authors
who plan to write a Bardock-story in saiyan-style!
You rock Girl.....and now...UPDATE,UPDATE! |
Reviewed By: Susan On: March 12, 2003 03:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My God Bgurl, this chap was excellent. The way you described the surroundings, the fight scenes, the monsters and everything that was going on made me feel like I was there. Utter brilliance. Needless to say I can't wait for chap#4 and the lemon that is fast approaching. I just hope my neighbor's laptop doesn't go up in flames. Bravo, great update!! ^_^ |
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