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Reviewed By: Tempest/Tempting On: April 08, 2005 13:14 CDT
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My adorable, darling brat daughter has finally given me a moment to myself to which I promptly used to read your chapter. Boy was it HOT! I loved your reference to Bardock as a lion and her as the lamb. I love that kind of stuff. Your lemon was so intense that I'm a little intimidated. Your Bardock is so awesomely fierce, so beastial, I could never write anything half as bloodboiling. I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2005 16:08 CST
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Well, *I* can't see---my eyes have been scorched by the lemon! Shagadelic, baby! I suppose I'm boring to enjoy the story as well. Seventeen's scene was just chilling and I like how you're setting up the backstory with Eighteen. These two are so underused. Oh, I guess Bardock was OK too!:P
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Title: ch. 5
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2005 09:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohh, Bardock slamming into her- what indulgent writing! Fantastic lemon! Fabulous writing! Thank you for the update, it was well worth waiting for! Hopefully, in the next chapter, he's taking her along for the ride! Lol.
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Title: AN UPDATE!
Reviewed By: AM On: March 24, 2005 06:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really should write more! It was so good, but then there was Bardie and ohhh Bardie... How can you go wrong with hot studly Bardie. passes out free SPORKS... So now we have to wait huh?
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Reviewed By: MelizaMac [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 22:17 CST
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It's difficult to write anything - my fingers are numb. So are my toes. And my eyes are crossed and my tongue is just flopping out of my mouth. I want to have wild monkey sex like that, dammit! There, I've said it. You've done an excellent job of expressing the character's emotions, BTW. I like how Bardock is comfortable enough to go wandering about the base in search of food. (Of course, his intimidating size and glare had nothing to do with his confidence...)
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Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 21:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
How inconsiderate of him! He fucks her blind then says I need to go home, but hey a least she got to fuck him. Lucky girl!
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Reviewed By: Elenek [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 20:45 CST
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I've been a slacker about reviewing butI refuse to be a slacker on yours. I'll admit I read it twice. Went and took a cold shower. Came back and read it again. That line about Bardock's tail was the best. I'm sure he is quite talented with it. Then again you would know better than I. I'm also extremely jealous of you. Yes, You. I can't write a lemon to save my life. Ok. Going to read the chapter again. *Meep* -EL-
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Reviewed By: Kethry (Not logged) On: March 23, 2005 09:22 CST
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WWAAAAAAAA!!!!!!! I swear if you make me wait 18 months for the next chapter... I will send you everything I have that needs to be beta-ed TWICE!! Bardie... *swoons* have I told you that your a wonderful writter lately??????
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 08:39 CST
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Oh. My. AAAh!!!! The prose was just gorgeous, even before I got to the lemon. Then it was a feast of detail. WHY do you angst so much over this stuff--it's gorgeous! Now I've got to go back and re-read the old chapters (this was your evil plan all along?) to get myself in a Kindred mood for the next (upcoming soon???) chapter.....
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Title: Aren't you SPECIAL?
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72-Carla On: March 23, 2005 08:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey - I'm only mean to you because you're a nasty old ninny who deserves it :P. You know, it's been forever since you updated this fic, but this chapter proves beyond a shadow of a doubt that good things are worth waiting for. I bow before your writing greatness and eagerly look forward to the next work that makes it out of your brilliant mind and onto Mediaminer.
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Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: Saiyazon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Lovin Bardock. Your descriptions are great I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Title: Wrong!
Reviewed By: Evanscent [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2005 02:45 CST
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Sweety. You uploaded the wrong copy of this... I hope you come online soon so I can tell you...
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Reviewed By: ginia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2004 03:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was certainly entertaining... but not updated since Feb 2004? Well, that might just mean that your mental juices are fermemting and preparing one hell of a Christmas gift for all your readers! I'll keep my fingers crossed!
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Title: Tempest/Temptation
Reviewed By: TemptingTemptation [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2004 21:21 CST
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Hey this is the first real Bardock story that I have ever read and I have to say that I greatly enjoyed it. You have a such insight into him that you so rarely get to see with the 'other' Saiyans. He's a true born and breed Saiyan with all the traits and its great to see him in action. I hope to see the end someday.
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Title: Kindred
Reviewed By: Anita Dick On: August 18, 2004 05:15 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I checked and you were right...I couldn't review when you first posted chap 5. Anyway, this chap was as awesome as the rest. Those two were definitely made for each other. I love the part where she was shocked that he could fly ^_^. There's so much sexual tension between them that you can cut it with a knife. I guess that's what happens when you get laid by such a sexy bastard. And the dude at the end...what the hell is his problem. That sure didn't look like brotherly love to me. Of course, I can't wait for you to post the very much awaited chap 6. So get crackin and do it already!! -_-
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