| "Kindred" Reviews/Comments [ 75 ] |
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Reviewed By: tina On: February 19, 2003 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good i just cant praise it enough. you should be published for the world to read, such talent shouldnt be allowed to go to waste. i hope there is a publisher reading this, because they need to get hold of you. you will make them a fortune |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 16:50 CST
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Ooooooooooh. I'm hooked.
A chapter ago I would have had skepticism that a military base would send one unaccompanied female soldier to counter an airspace anomaly.... now I'm not so sure, as it's obvious she's not normal!
Bardock... nummers... |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 13:17 CST
Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS!!! You must update soon! |
Reviewed By: christabeleve On: February 19, 2003 11:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the sexual tension between the two. Bardock is a ten plus and so is your story. |
Reviewed By: Ember [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2003 03:40 CST
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Wow! Absolutely breathtaking! I can't wait to see how this all plays out. You have such a talent for description. I was completely hooked from the first word to the last.
I'm glad you're finally posting on mm. ^-^
*hugs*
Ember |
Reviewed By: AM On: February 18, 2003 21:10 CST
Comment/Review:
I have waited and waited HURRY UP! more now! more more more more more more more more more more more more more!!! ohhh and one more word for you NOW |
Reviewed By: AM On: February 18, 2003 21:08 CST
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Lusting romping Bardie!!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 21:07 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What's gonna happen next??? What?? Hurry up and update...I can't wait...
Seriously, great beginning to a great story! |
Reviewed By: Space Monkey Ku [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 20:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Yes, this is ALL my fault! If I hadn't kept pestering you about it, this terrific fic would never have been posted! Now stop telling everyone or you're going to ruin my reputation for being a screw up! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ah damn sam freacking cliffhangers. lol this story is getting beter and better as I read the two chaps. I was drawn into it and felt like I was there and this is good keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: Indigo Gem On: February 18, 2003 11:42 CST
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You get a ten...for everything. You've really managed to capture an essence of Bardock that is believable and utterly intriguing. He has a glint of humor;playfull passionate humor, combined with that Saiyan urge for blood and battle. Kinda like a weird clash of Goku & Vegeta...but not quite...He has his own personality. Know what I mean? Anyways, excellent start...Dont Stop Now!!! Update! Update! Update! |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2003 11:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
woop!
Good start :) Bardock is such a sessy bitch... heh... I loved it when he was messin with her with his tail... their flirting is just great :)
I wanna know what happens next, so update soon! |
Reviewed By: DemonQueen17 On: February 18, 2003 09:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's not every day you see a lemon with Bardock as the main character. That's where Goku gets his sexiness from. Then again, it has to start somewhere. Like father, like son. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more. |
Reviewed By: christabeleve On: February 19, 2003 15:46 CST
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Your Bardock is a bellicose brash bad boy with a beauteous body to behold, a real buccaneer. Bravo!!! |
Reviewed By: Soul Reader On: May 11, 2003 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bloody brilliant |
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