| "Unfufilled Vow" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: Starscraped On: December 05, 2003 19:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This is one of the best stories I ever read. I read it last night [Dec. 4] and it was like eleven and having turned my computer off and being the only one awake, scared the hell out of me because of this story! It is great, and just wow. It really amzes me how you can write horror. I can't really write it, but I can write poetry, and sometimes I can't really do that. Well, I love your work and would love to read some more of your work. Bye! Star
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 10:24 CST
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"If it was you i wouldn't even turn around..." wow that was heavy... and he was right there about to die and he didn't turn around... wow. It's amazing how a story can scare you. this is one of the best writings i have ever read. Will Jou visit Seto or Yugi...
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Title: It's just wow
Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 10:17 CST
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this is sooo good. please keep writing! I was sooo creeped out at some parts... It's just wow. I love scary stuff but i can't write any. you planed it out so well to with the camera the oiji board and death and all the other things that brought the story together. Its just great. I can't beleive how sad i got at one time. I kept thinking Jou's dead jou's dead i don't know how many times i had to tell myself that its just a fic. Wow finish the next chapter soon!
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Reviewed By: Stacatto On: December 04, 2003 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my god! this had got to be in my top 5 of favorite fics in the world! so well written! i looked over my shoulder when jounichi kept saying 'TURNAROUNDTURNAROUNDTURNAROUND'. Please, i beg of you, update soon!
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Title: AGH!
Reviewed By: mew magic5 On: December 04, 2003 11:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SWEET! I'm SOOOO glad you updated! I feel bad this story is coming to an end. It was possibly one of the best ones I have ever read.
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Reviewed By: T.A. On: October 20, 2003 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wooooow! You have major talent! I couldnt sleep for a night after reading this! i even doodled pics relating to this fic. One of my favorites, hands down. Right well, anyways, hurry up with the next ones! i wanna see what happens! Poor Jou! Waai!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Hiead On: October 08, 2003 20:23 CDT
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awesome fic. i just love dis fic, please continue it.
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Reviewed By: maisie On: September 30, 2003 19:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i LOVE ur fanfic. its soo cool. u cant exactly imagine it as an actual cartoon but i still luv it. it isnt scary at all i reckon, its jus very breathtakin, cliffhanger or wateva. ur grammar is really bad. but i still get the story. cmon onli 2 chapters to go, please hurry up ur story needs to be finished it too good to be left unfinished. please hurry! ;)
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Reviewed By: Paris by Night rulz!! On: September 29, 2003 23:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! You're such a good writer. Plz continue soon!
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Reviewed By: Setofan On: September 14, 2003 21:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KEEP IT GOING! :O |
Reviewed By: Yami Lover On: September 14, 2003 21:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best horror story I've ever read. PLease update soon I want to know what happens next. |
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2003 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellant! You've got me on the edge of my seat. Can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: Furrtil On: September 08, 2003 21:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although the grammar of this story and definitely the spelling need work, this is one of the best horror stories that I've read. It's 10:53, I'm scared out of my mind, the suspense is killing me, I love the detective work that you've done. Fix up the spelling, and you would have a pretty much flawless story. Congratulations! |
Reviewed By: SETOFAN On: September 08, 2003 18:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You are the BEST writer EVER! I can't wait until THE END, and the official ending. You could really make an awsome movie creator. Everything makes sense! :D |
Reviewed By: Pecan On: September 08, 2003 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG. Keep going! You should write more stories! ;O |
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