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Reviewed By: Cait13 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2005 22:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! That story was like the only Horror story that ever freaked me out. Good job really good job.
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Title: great fanfic
Reviewed By: XxanimefreakxX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2004 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the BEST horror fanfic i have ever read. u should write more of these kinds of fics. it gave me shivers. i absoulutly love horror fics. keep writing.
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Title: I'm stunned
Reviewed By: Felidae5 On: June 07, 2004 14:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, first, let me say, you're grammar sucks. Big time. Sorry, but I just can't give you a good review without having to point out that one single, but near-aggravating annoyance. Second: Standing ovations for a never-ceasing plot, in-character development and lovingly detailed prescriptions, such as feelings, thoughts, medical and criminal evidence and finally, a beautiful, if not heart-breaking ending. If there's a price for 'best Yugi-Oh fic of the year', you most probably won it-at least in my book. I do hope to see more of your incredible writing around, oh, and if your book comes out, I'd like to read that, too! Take care and keep writing!^^ Arigato gozaimasu
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Title: of the fan fic????
Reviewed By: Cor Cor On: January 15, 2004 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved that so much, and i dont even watch yu-ge-oh or whatever you got talent, use it
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Reviewed By: Leaf Zelindor On: January 15, 2004 21:43 CST
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OMG! this fic was recomended to me and omg! i loved it! it caught my intrest from second one and i had a hard time leaving it for anything, in fact the internet went down in my dorm room and i had to finish it on my friends computer! but that was SO emotional! i loved it! ~leaf~
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Reviewed By: AngelS On: January 15, 2004 12:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this fic, it's so sad. I found myself absolutely hooked on this story and just couldn't stop reading. The only thing I had a problem with was some of your spelling but other than that it is a really awesome story.
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Title: DEAR GOD!
Reviewed By: R4][N130W >|][H3N On: January 15, 2004 06:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. GOD!~!!!! That was...I...You...Holy crap!!! *speechless for a minute* What a massive amount of talent you have! This fic was positively RIVETING. Man, if you wrote books I sure would shell out for them. Keep persuing your dream!!
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Reviewed By: Evil Inga an Evi lYami Inga On: January 14, 2004 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!! YOU FINISHED! THIS WAS A KICK ASS STORY!!! I LOVE IT! ABSOLUTLEY LOVE IT!!
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Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: January 09, 2004 21:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
At first I'm like yeah happy ending. Then the end. U have to continue with another story. OMG!!!!!
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Starscraped On: January 08, 2004 18:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... This ending is so...beautiful! I love it! *smiles happily* It is so peaceful, I love it... Each new paragraph I read was getting me more interested and I hate for stories to end, but they can't go on forever. If you are still looking for a beta-reader, I'd love to be it by the way. That is if you still have the opening up. ^-^ Once again, I absolutely love this fic and you were so intuned with it and...well, there isn't a word out there to describe this story and the way it made me feel. Makes me think about life more in a new perspective. Really great. I can't wait for you to write more stories! I'd love to read them. Once again, great job, keep it up, and don't loose yourself and keep trying. No one perfect and that makes it even better when you notice little mistakes on a story or chapter a person worked so hard on, and no one is perfect, but if you try your hardest, you can be perfect. Perfect is not nacessarily doing everything correct, never getting anything wrong, to me perfect means you are you, you are human, you make mistakes just like everyone else... I'm probably sounding wierd at the moment and you probably already know that, and I probably shouldn't have said that, but I like to ramble. ^-^ And maybe it will touch someone. Bye, Star-chan
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Reviewed By: Dahlre On: January 06, 2004 07:59 CST
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*cries* I absolutely love this story! The ending is so.... good it made me cry! I look forward (and hope for) any stories that might come from you in the future. really good *200 thumbs up*
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Reviewed By: InsaneAuthoress [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 17:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU FINISHED! I'm so happy yet so sad... It's hard thinking this is the end you no? ANd poor Yugi everyone left! And i don't even want to start with mokaba! He asked Seto if he wanted him to drive him home! AND HE GOT HIT IN A HIT AND RUN! Your storys AWSOME! THough after i figured that Seto died i wondered why he didn't see his body... Though i do like how he missed it! Oh I don't want to start with how scared i was during your story and beleive me it is all worth the wait! Now if only I could write as good as you!
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Title: OH MY GOD
Reviewed By: never read fan fic b4 On: January 04, 2004 07:29 CST
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oh my god oh my god oh my god!!! I have never read any fan fics before i dont even like reading that much but one of my friends who LOVES fan fic told about this really really good scary fan fic that she read and she told me a little bit about it and once she told me so much I HAD to read it so I asked her for the story site and she gave me this one and oh my god oh my god oh my god it was bloody great I thank you sooo fucking (sorry for swearing) for writing this story fuck i love it and (sorry for this next bit to) I love you and your style of writing and im so so so glad that by the time that i begung to read it you finished it cus i dont think i would of been able to wait to read any of it thank you once again
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Title: WHOA
Reviewed By: Technical Dragon On: December 29, 2003 00:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had me shaking with fear. This was so good. Great story.
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Reviewed By: Theif_Bakura [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2003 19:38 CST
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this is one of the best horror stories i've read in a long time. every time i walk alone outside, i always keep looking behind me. Great job! i can't wait to read your next story.
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