| "Unfufilled Vow" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 13:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: Turn around? Was Kaiba at Widow's Ridge when Jou went over the edge?
LD: And Mokuba said Jou couldn't acutally speak, so maybe he couldn't call for help...
Karen: heh, we are doing it again.
LD: Ooops, sorry. We aren't trying to ruin the story, I just like to play guessing games!
Karen: And I hate surprises. "The Ring"freaked me out, big time!
LD: This is a great story! A Seto/Jonouchi centric fic without romance! Very unusual.
Karen: And very cool! So update soon, 'kay? |
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 08:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great update! Looking forward to more. Congratulations on your graduation. |
Reviewed By: Author Artemis On: June 09, 2003 17:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. This is really scary and has an excellent plot to boot. That whole ouija board thing was scaring me to pieces. I love it! UPDATE FAST! I've got some theories.....but I need more of the story! HURRY! |
Reviewed By: author artemis On: June 11, 2003 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry and update...this story is great! I love it! |
Reviewed By: Larania [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this story a lot, but you mispelled a lot of words, and your grammar was a little weak. Other than that... DEAR LORD?? What's gonna happen NEXT? |
Reviewed By: firemasterskye On: March 12, 2003 18:20 CST
Comment/Review:
This is great, and sooo creepy!
Please update soon, I can't wait to read more ^_^ |
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 06, 2003 22:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Spooky and interesting. Wonder what 12:57 means? Looking forward to Seto's investigation, |
Reviewed By: Bay On: March 06, 2003 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Get more right away! I really want to see what happens! |
Reviewed By: Kendra On: March 05, 2003 16:20 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH MY GOD!!!!!!! This has got to be one of the creepiest fanfics i ever read! You NEED to finish it AND HURRY! Oh, and u scared the crap out of me with that turn around stuff! |
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2003 09:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really starting to get good. Looking forward to Kaiba's investigation. |
Reviewed By: Kris On: March 04, 2003 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. I can't wait to find out what's going to happen to Kaiba next and discover what the big deal about 12:57 is. Please write more! |
Reviewed By: Balis On: March 04, 2003 11:28 CST
Comment/Review:
This is great! Sad.. Kinda scary.. It would make a good movie. ^_^ I can't wait to see what happens! |
Reviewed By: Mononoke [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2003 04:36 CST
Comment/Review:
Your right... dont read it in the dark! I'm gonna have nightmares now! |
Reviewed By: Chikana On: June 10, 2003 01:15 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Comment/Review:
Your plot is kinda simple to me. |
Reviewed By: Pyro Dragon On: July 15, 2003 14:41 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. that was great. i loved it! poor jou-kun though. update soon! please? |
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