| "Unfufilled Vow" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zello On: September 08, 2003 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I REALLY REALLY REALLY want to read the last chapter. KEEP GOING!!! :O You're the best! |
Reviewed By: ShadowYami And Malik-Kun On: September 06, 2003 15:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*trembling* I cannot believe this.....I just finished reading the whole thing so far start to finish and I just looked at my clock and guess what? Its 12:57.
I am not gonna be able to sleep tonight. *is still shaking* Damn, but this is really, really scary. Keep it up, only...no, just keep it up. I'm off to go quietly have a fear attack right now. *hides under bed*
-Malik- There, there, SY. Its ok...oh Ra! Whats that in the mirror!
-SY- *screams and cowers*
-Malik-....Man, I love being evil.^^ |
Title: 2:14 am
Reviewed By: Zani [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2003 02:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had stayed up to read some online articles for an anthropology class today, until I came across your fic a little after one. I liked Jou fics so I decided to read a little bit to see if it was worth my attention and then save it to my aol fav list to read at a more convenient time. That was the plan but your story was so good that I had foregone my work (I pray that there is no quiz) and started reading from chapter one to chapter nine. If only anthropology was that riviting. I finished at 2:14 am and if I plan on being able to function without coffee at at 6:30 in the morning I better get some sort of sleep. Your story also reminded me freakishly of that movie with Bruce Willis and Haley Joel Osmand about the kid who saw dead people. I know the title, but the Nicole Kidman movie "The Others" keep popping up in my head and I am to brain dead to to try and remember. If I do I'll send another review. Don't worry about the spelling rating when it comes to grammer I am a cruel bitch. I have never given anybody a perfect 10, but that does not display about how much I enjoy your fic. Getting a review/comment out of me at 2:30 am is a good way to tell if I would be reading more of your work. Have a good morning. Without a strong cup of coffee I doubt if mine will be tolerable and I still have that anthropology to read Shimatta!!!!
Ja ne
Zani |
Reviewed By: S. M. On: August 25, 2003 00:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is wonderful! Each chapter is full of suspense, and is painted with great emotion and horror. I have so far enjoyed every chapter and it is read just like a good movie. This story puts an interesting spin in the YGO realm, and I can't wait for you to continue. |
Reviewed By: angel_soul03 On: July 31, 2003 15:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this story on ff.net and I just HAVE to review it again here! It was THAT GOOD!!! |
Reviewed By: Jenny from the Block [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 06:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Violet Eyes: Hey! I'm back!
Kuribo-kun: Yeah, keep up the fabulous work Shiroi Misa, its soooo good!
Violet Eyes: Yes, and intensely scary, please continue. I'm begging you! |
Reviewed By: J.P. On: July 28, 2003 02:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do not Like this story. just playing. i'm gonna have nightmares for reading this at night but i can't stop reading. please hurry up with the next chapter. I love this story ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Evil Inga and Evil Yami Inga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evil Inga: so that is what jou ment by turn around! o_0? what? you cant update till August 10?!? NO NO NO!! YA GOTTA UPDATE SOONER!! OH PLZ!! *grabs her yami and cries on his shoulder*
Evil Yami Inga: it is ok! august will be here before ya know it! ^-\\
Evil Inga: NO IT WONT! *cries harder* IT WILL BE MY LUCK AND TIME WITH SLOW DOWN!!
Evil Yami Inga: *rolls eyes* Oh your impossible! time will not slow down!
Evil Inga: o_0! YOU DARE DEFYE ME?! *eye twitches*
Evil Yami Inga: oh man! here we go again! *runs for his life* |
Reviewed By: Evil Inga and Evil Yami Inga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 01:25 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evil Inga: so that is what jou ment by turn around! o_0? what? you cant update till August 10?!? NO NO NO!! YA GOTTA UPDATE SOONER!! OH PLZ!! *grabs her yami and cries on his shoulder*
Evil Yami Inga: it is ok! august will be here before ya know it! ^-\\
Evil Inga: NO IT WONT! *cries harder* IT WILL BE MY LUCK AND TIME WITH SLOW DOWN!!
Evil Yami Inga: *rolls eyes* Oh your impossible! time will not slow down!
Evil Inga: o_0! YOU DARE DEFYE ME?! *eye twitches*
Evil Yami Inga: oh man! here we go again! *runs for his life* |
Reviewed By: Evil Inga and Evil Yami Inga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 01:24 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evil Inga: so that is what jou ment by turn around! o_0? what? you cant update till August 10?!? NO NO NO!! YA GOTTA UPDATE SOONER!! OH PLZ!! *grabs her yami and cries on his shoulder*
Evil Yami Inga: it is ok! august will be here before ya know it! ^-\\
Evil Inga: NO IT WONT! *cries harder* IT WILL BE MY LUCK AND TIME WITH SLOW DOWN!!
Evil Yami Inga: *rolls eyes* Oh your impossible! time will not slow down!
Evil Inga: o_0! YOU DARE DEFYE ME?! *eye twitches*
Evil Yami Inga: oh man! here we go again! *runs for his life* |
Reviewed By: Split Persona-The Ones and Onlies [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 00:27 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JC: This is soo good. I'm scared shitless right now, but we're the type of people who love being scared shitless.
Kathrine: That was sweet, you have to keep going immediately! This is a great story!
JC: Poor Jounouchi, Kaiba left him to die and now Icy is paying for it. People should follow their instincts.
Kathrine: And what would Yugi say if he knew? He'd probably hate Kaiba or at least try to. Love the way you also put in Jou's view too. Is really showed how everything went quite well.
JC: MORE!!!! SOON PLEASE!!! This is one of the only stories that have actually scared me and I demand to be terrified some more! |
Reviewed By: mew_magic5 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2003 20:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
*blink blink* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! I can't wait til August 10 to see another chappie!!!! *hits head against table...* NO! ow..... @_@ |
Reviewed By: Angel_as On: July 19, 2003 18:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is an awesome fic. Believe it or not, detailed plots such as yours are hard write. although...the quatily of your grammar is to be desired. But who cares?! Anyways, just take this review as a damn good compliment because i never take the time to review unless it's a pretty good story.
Plz updante soon!... or else |
Reviewed By: mew_magic5 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 20:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the freakiest story ever!!! You haave to update soon!!! I do have to admit, the whole thing about a really bad horror story on ff.net was funny! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Oakland Peanuts [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 19:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
So Creepy! This fic's messing with my brain, but i still love it. Please update faster before i start growing paranoid or something, though i haven't ever since i first read this fic a couple of months ago. |
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