| "Unfufilled Vow" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Reviewed By: Evil Inga and Evil Yami Inga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 07:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evil Inga: OMG!!! you have to update this! you HAVE TO!! THIS SHOULD BE A BOOK!! lord knows i would buy it!! infact i think i'll print this and read it again later!
Evil Yami Inga: *is hiding somewhere* |
Reviewed By: Evil Inga and Evil Yami Inga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 06:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evil Inga: OMG! im only on chapter 4 am im freaking out! which is sad cuz it is 7:30 in the morning and the sun is out! im such a coward...
Evil Yami Inga: *is hiding behind the chair* |
Reviewed By: Evil Inga and Evil Yami Inga [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 06:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Evil Inga: OMG! im only on chapter 4 am im freaking out! which is sad cuz it is 7:30 in the morning and the sun is out! im such a coward...
Evil Yami Inga: *is hiding under the behind the chair* |
Reviewed By: Heather On: July 14, 2003 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ooooh! Creepy! You're right it's not good to read at night. Especially at 1:00 in the morning! I can't wait to see the next chap. |
Reviewed By: Jenny from the Block [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Violet Eyes: Wow!And like you said, to think it started when you saw a face out your window! I hope you continue with 'The Guilty!'
Kuribo-kun: I completely agree. This story should be on the most Popular list, its soooo cool. Oh my gosh I sound like Violet Eyes.
Violet Eyes: |
Reviewed By: Jenny from the Block [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Violet Eyes: Wow!And like you said, to think it started when you saw a face out your window! I hope you continue with 'The Guilty!'
Kuribo-kun: I completely agree. This story should be on the most Popular list, its soooo cool. Oh my gosh I sound like Violet Eyes.
Violet Eyes: |
Reviewed By: Jenny from the Block [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2003 01:10 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Violet Eyes: Wow!And like you said, to think it started when you saw a face out your window! I hope you continue with 'The Guilty!'
Kuribo-kun: I completely agree. This story should be on the most Popular list, its soooo cool. Oh my gosh I sound like Violet Eyes.
Violet Eyes: |
Reviewed By: mew_magic5 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
God, I read the first three or four chapters last night and it took me forever to fall asleep, this is one of thoses things that could sell as one of those horror movies everyine talks about constantly and even keeps the adults awake. You need to continue, this is one of the best stories I've ever read, not to mention probably the only good horror story I've ever read... I think... I can't even remember the last time I read a horror story, so that's one heck of a compliment right there. So keep writing cause if you don't I'll find some way of tracking you down... MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!... sorry.... -^_^- |
Reviewed By: Zoids Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2003 04:54 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is truly a good story, but now I'll have nightmares. Anyway, please continue. I'm begging you...soooo looking forward to 'The Evidence' I want to know what happens sooo badly.
You are one hell-kicking good author.
Yours truly,
Zoids Angel
P.S: PUH-LEEEEEZ CONTINUE SHIROI-MISA!!!! |
Reviewed By: Jenny from the Block [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2003 04:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
My God you're good!!!!!!!! CONTINUE!!! |
Reviewed By: Author Artemis On: June 11, 2003 15:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ohhh! Good chapter! Can't wait for the next one. But, why is Joey haunting Kaiba..of all people really! Hmm...well...hurry and update! |
Reviewed By: Ryosa On: June 10, 2003 22:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more, i'll probably lose this link so i would appreciate if you could e-mail the chapter or link to me when you get you get chapter finished. If you would, my e-mail addy is ryoko_hakubi_vicky@msn.com. thanks a bunch! |
Reviewed By: Ryou's Mistress265 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is too kewl! You need to update! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 13:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: Turn around? Was Kaiba at Widow's Ridge when Jou went over the edge?
LD: And Mokuba said Jou couldn't acutally speak, so maybe he couldn't call for help...
Karen: heh, we are doing it again.
LD: Ooops, sorry. We aren't trying to ruin the story, I just like to play guessing games!
Karen: And I hate surprises. "The Ring"freaked me out, big time!
LD: This is a great story! A Seto/Jonouchi centric fic without romance! Very unusual.
Karen: And very cool! So update soon, 'kay? |
Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2003 08:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great update! Looking forward to more. Congratulations on your graduation. |
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