| "An Experimental Lemon" Reviews/Comments [ 69 ] |
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Reviewed By: Moreover On: February 17, 2007 20:24 PST
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Damn, is he ever gonna update this? Moreover, will this site EVER get updated? >
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Title: Pah.
Reviewed By: ReturnToSender On: February 03, 2007 23:47 PST
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I don't understand how you can say so many things are wrong about this fic. sure, the grammar's a little off, but it's just a sexy fanfic! It doesn't NEED to be a novel, nor is it supposed to be. If it was it, would be under a more serious topic with a long, annoying plot that takes 10 chapters to reach the sex scene. Obviously, as you can see by the title, it's a story about really, REALLY hawt sex scenes, and that's all it needs. Quit treating it like the author's trying to win a pulitzer and read it like a sexy fanfic about... sex!
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Reviewed By: What the hell? On: December 02, 2006 10:19 PST
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Have you guys ever considered that the people who are flaming this story actually have some sense? You should have some more space between your paragraphs. You make them look all bunched up which turns off readers. Second, add more plot. It adds more interest then just pointless sex. Splenda is right. All this seems so wrong. The people who actually like this probably never read a literate story. They probably never read a story that actually has value, too. Pointless sex(says it in the name) is pointless! Third, the character should be more like themselves. It just sounds so stupid when you guys make the characters so unrealistic. To the people who may call me stupid, I actually gave some reasons why I don't like it. I'm not one of those flamers who suddenly say 'I don't like it' without a reason. I actually have a valid point.
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Reviewed By: Zezerou On: October 11, 2006 14:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jesus, you can't dis a fanfic like this, it's SPECIFICALLY a Fic about crazy sex! The hotter and sexier it is, the better a rating it gets, he's not writing a novel xP Amazing btw!!
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Reviewed By: Splenda On: October 09, 2006 16:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 2 of 10 Comment/Review:
What the bloody fucking hell??? Inuyasha fisted kagome??? I'm sorry, but that's wrong altogether. And all these people who are like 'oh, it's so good,' must never have read a /literate/ story.
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Reviewed By: ja On: June 19, 2006 20:37 PDT
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Ooh, this is hot. You should update this! Must see Woman's Best Friend Part 6! >
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Title: yo
Reviewed By: spiritshinobi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2006 20:54 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yo al these dudes that are dissin this are nerds so dont listen to them they probabllly dont even know what a lemon is lol
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Title: amazing!
Reviewed By: Kai-Kun On: February 15, 2006 20:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy COW is this amazing! >< update it NOW!
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Title: Baaaadd
Reviewed By: Rosia On: January 24, 2006 22:01 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KIKYO-CHAN?!?!?!??!?!?!?! OHHHHHH NOOOOO MMMM AUTHOR? WOULD YOU BARE MY CHILDREN???
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_girl92 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2005 11:10 PST
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THAT was very hott and and very different you should update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kei-Chan89 On: November 23, 2005 18:03 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow..this is the most erotic fanfic I have ever read...and I mean ever....very sexy and kinkey. Good job. Keiko
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Title: Hot!!!!
Reviewed By: Shadowgirl425294 On: November 20, 2005 19:04 PST
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Update!! This is so good!
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Reviewed By: miaa_hiaa [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2005 15:44 PST
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nice! keep it going!
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Reviewed By: Hentai_Chick [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2005 19:24 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mmmmm...experimental huh? Hot ^.~
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Reviewed By: Kagome_Warrior_Miko12 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2005 23:31 PDT
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thats ehhhhhhh........... whats the word im looking for....................interesting? well its better than some. im going to put a lemon in my story but im not sure how. im trying to get ideas from reading lemons.
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