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Title: meant to be
Reviewed By: dbzlover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 07:20 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i fell totally in love with your fic and i cant believe you you didnt finish it i am begging you to complete it i almost felt like crying when the when i saw that it was not finished and that the last time you updated it was almost 1.5years ago if you wrote a book abaut it i would buy it so pleassssssseeeeee update
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Title: meant to be
Reviewed By: dbzlover [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2006 07:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i fell totally in love with your fic and i cant believe you you didnt finish it i am begging you to complete it i almost felt like crying when the when i saw that it was not finished and that the last time you updated it was almost 1.5years ago if you wrote a book abaut it i would buy it so pleassssssseeeeee update
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Title: jaigobindg@bellsouth.net
Reviewed By: guyanagal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 21:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been the best story i have ever read this story just grabs my attention when i first started reading it. Pleeease update soon!
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Title: cool
Reviewed By: anelia On: November 19, 2005 00:27 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been the best story i have ever read this story just grabs my attention when i first started reading it. Pleeease update soon!
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Reviewed By: VegetasLindaLou On: May 31, 2005 21:28 EDT
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Your story is great. I really like the plot. please update soon, and I will check back soon.
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: May 11, 2005 14:02 EDT
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so this is me feeling really bad bc I added you to my favorites list but never reviewed your story. I love this story and the way you've played off this story so far. I loved how Vegeta and Bulma have come back together but you know that they have a lot of problems they are going to have to face soon. Its going so well and I love how the characters have grown through out the chapters. Great job; can't wait to see what you do next.
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Title: Meant To Be
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2005 21:40 EDT
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can you write this story on www.adultfanfiction.net
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Reviewed By: Marlies On: April 14, 2005 15:47 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As i've already emphasized in my mail- this fanfic is just gorgeous and I can't get enough of it! I like the storyline and your ideas so much that your spelling errors don't really bother at all. I have to say that you are very creative and have a great understanding of each character in this fanfic. I'm so happy I got to read it, but also disappointed that you haven't updated yet...I really wanna know what's gonna happen in the end! Please, don't keep us waiting so long, please finish this fic first and then go on with the others +loool+ XD!!!
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Title: AAAAAAHHHHHHHH!
Reviewed By: Vegeta's Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2005 16:41 EST
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When are you ever gonna update!? I love this fic and I can't wait to read more! You have a true talent at portreying emotions and characters, sceens and setting, love and deviltry. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!! Love ya babe!
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Reviewed By: Callista Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 14:50 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, FINALLY!! B & V back together!!! Yippie!!! Can't wait til the next chapter!!! Please update as soon as possible! Oh, and for teh rating: SoW: 9, because you're a good writer, but there are some grammar errors. S&G: Spelling goes wrong sometimes. And the grammar too; sometimes the sentences goes wrong and there are commas where there should be full stops and full stops where there should be commas. and I shouldn't judge anyone for these since I've only got English as 2nd language and am more than likely to f*ck up in that department). O/C: Plots along line with this has been seen maybe hundreds of times (Vegeta-sei still existing, Bulma being a slave), but like the other really great author out there, you have managed to see it from a whole new angle, so it seems like you're the first who ever wrote one of these stories. EF: I just... love this story to bits... *sigh* OR: 9, cuz' it's one of my fav. stories between all the DBZ stories I've ever read... And remember, update really soon!!! Great christmas present idea to your fans out here!!! ~Callista Moon~
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2004 19:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wooohooo!! Sorry I haven't commented in awhile, I just haven't been on period. Wonderful chapters, but it looks like trouble is brewing for Bulma and Vegeta where Freeza is concerned, plus the fact that Bulma needs to hurry up and tell Vegeta about Trunks already!!! Ok, well, hurry with the naxt chappy!!!!
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Reviewed By: Lei Lei On: September 25, 2004 18:38 EDT
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UPDATE!! pleeez! and soon!! i loove this story but you wont update! lol ttfn!
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Reviewed By: Princess Katreena On: September 19, 2004 04:28 EDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hiya, realy like youe story hope you up-date soon. I like how you keeped some on Gokus inocences but made him kaniveing as well. well do bye for now LadyKATT
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Reviewed By: Bex Drake On: September 18, 2004 15:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool chapter. sorry for not reviewing sooner but i don't particulally like mediaminer. thanks for the email letting me know you'd updated. bex
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Reviewed By: SGBX On: September 15, 2004 13:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know what to say but that your story is just the best DBZ fic I have ever read and even if the waiting period between chapters is so very very very long, I actually cannot find it within myself to stop reading. Really, your work is an inspiration.
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