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Title: meant to be
Reviewed By: carinne On: August 19, 2004 09:52 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well this story is great and all but where is the next chapter? do you plan on resuming it or not? let me know each time i read it again and each time it end at the same point raging uh? so i would like to know see you on the group ccfleursdelys
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Reviewed By: Jess-X-Vegeta On: June 24, 2004 07:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic is great, PLEASE REVIEW SOON!!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2004 19:32 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... that was a pretty hot lemon there! Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: Oh my gosh!!!
Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2004 23:49 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I did not see that coming at all!!! Celpia and Radditz, Bulma is going to blow up in his face!! And I can't believe what a hateful bitch Celpia is!! Bulma needs to check the girl real quick. Please update as soon as possible!! I really like the pace of the story but the updates need to come quicker. But since it's a matter of quality vs. quantity I guess I can sit at home an knit until the next exciting chapter. Keep up the great work!!!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Oblivion/Sorceresss Fujin On: May 10, 2004 21:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! EXCELLENT CHAPTER! Bulma is gonna be mad... lol!
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Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2004 19:27 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooo, looks like things are soon to be discovered by the King, eh? That should prove to be interesting! I hope Vegeta or Bulma comes out with their feelings soon, but it does bring out some intense angst in the story. I love it!!! Hope to see the next chapter soon!!!
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 10:24 EDT
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I don't know why, but the thought of Vegeta asking Goku if he was "fucking" Bulma cracked me up! Excellent chapter as always.
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Reviewed By: dark oblivion/sorceress fujin On: April 26, 2004 16:21 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: morgansgirl23 On: April 15, 2004 20:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this fanfic for two days and I have to say that it's amazing!! You have captured every character and woven such an intricate story that I haven't been able to focus on anything else since I began reading this last night. Please update soon and I can marvel again at your masterpiece!
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Title: WOW!
Reviewed By: Dark Oblivion/Sorceress Fujin On: March 20, 2004 14:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!! EXCELLENT FIC!!
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Title: LisaB
Reviewed By: LisaB [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2004 13:43 EST
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Well, now what? I feel so sorry for your poor Radditz. He doesn't have a chance, does he? Nice way to work in the Xmen reference. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 - carla On: March 12, 2004 06:46 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a long, satisfying chapter. The plot is really heating up. Wonderful job!
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Reviewed By: Padraigin On: March 09, 2004 19:05 EST
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Oh my god, I'm dieing to read the very next update!!!!! This story kicks ass! It's so creative and eventful and full of suspence and romance that you have me completely hooked! The lemons are great, the characterizations are well down, the plot has brilliant twists, and the chapters are pleasurably long. God, I really can't wait until the next update which you said may be soon so I'm REALLY HOPING! For so many chapters, Vegeta and Bulma could only think about each other as they weren't even in close proximity. NOW, they have a chance to get a closer to one and other again and hopefully start sorting things out! bleh...and what Freeza's done to Vegeta just makes me cringe. ha, but, Continue you on, amazing writer!! That is for the sake of my sanity dealing with when I get to read the next chapter. hehe, I hope to see your update soon! Take care -Padraigin
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Reviewed By: G4ng574 On: March 09, 2004 00:04 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
this fanfic is tyte,keep it up,
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Reviewed By: LisaB (not logged in) On: March 06, 2004 11:38 EST
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Why did I think this was a canon get together? I could have read this ages ago? This is great, there's so much going on and I have absolutely no idea where you're going yet, which is great!
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