| "Baby of Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 468 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angel Black On: May 29, 2003 13:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Angel: Awwwwwwww........it's so cute. So abou how old are Aten and Aria now? Two? five? Eleven? Fifty? ok so maybe not quite that old.......
Ryou: I'm seventeen aren't i?
Angel: Haven't you ever heard of waiting for children?
Ryou: I'm a MALE!
Angel: And i thought your mother had taught you better.
Ryou: I'm a FUCKING BOY FOR CRYING OUT LOUD!
Angel: 0.o I think you need a lesson in manners young one! *grabs Ryou's ear*
Ryou: YOUR THE SAME AGE AS ME!
Angel: Oh yeah! ^_^
Shadow: -_-'
Angel: *lights match* Shadow do you really want your tail to lose it's fur again?
Shadow: !_!
Ryou: Update! |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2003 06:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY!! SEQUEL!!! Umm........
Bakura:It the last day of school
My god....YOU'RE RIGHT!!!!!SCHOOL IS OVER TODAY!!!
HURRY WRITE MORE!!!!! |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2003 23:38 CDT
Comment/Review:
AWWW!! That was a cute chapter!! And they got Aria and Aten back!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Angel Black On: May 28, 2003 10:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry i haven't reviewed. I had a biking accident jumping a speed bump and it jarred both my elbows so it hurt just to move them. Today i can actually type slowly so I'm working on it. luckily neither arms broke. No more jumping speed bumps for a while. Dang that was fun. Anyways keep up the good work and bye bye Anubis! and Cinetti! Good luck with the sequel! |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2003 06:12 CDT
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Awwwww! Malike is ok ^_^ I love Malik!! Great chapter!!!! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2003 19:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha byebye bad guy. lol can't wait to see what never |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2003 15:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: Hehehe *cough* hehe. Of course he rushed into danger without thinking how he was going to get out of it.
LD: Well, wouldn't you for the people you love.
Karen: Yeah, good point. You just don't think of the Yamis, well never mind. That is definitly something Marik would do.
LD: So the babies are babies again, they've got Malik back, Anubis and Cinetti are gone... looks like it is just about time for the sequel!
Karen: YAY FRIENDSHIP! I mean, uh, good chapter! |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2003 04:56 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Anubis is gonna get his ass kicked! Anubis is gonna get his ass kicked! YEAH FOR VIOLENCE!!! That means death and all that other crap I love!!
Bakura:....
How come nowadays everyone wants it quick and painless? Why not just torture? Its more fun that way.
Malik:Do you even care that I died?!
*laughs*Uhhhh....................I guess. I don't know. I'm just really happy right now.^__________________^
Malik:*glares*
Yes I'm really sad. I just don't show it.*cries*
Everyone:?
But why quick and painless?! How come noone ever tortures each other?! WHY?!
Everyone:-_-
PS-If you really want get and painless then all you have to do is snap the neck. That way they won't come back no matter what.
Just a friendly litle note from your neiborhood phsyco. ^________^
(Always run with knives. You'll get your prey faster that way) |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2003 23:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*Cries like crazy* NOOOOOOOO! He can't be dead!! He just can't be!! NOOOO!!!!!! And poor Aten and Aria!! I was seriously crying!!! |
Reviewed By: super_JM [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2003 17:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waaaaaaaa. so sad. waaaaaa very nice chapter even though it was sad. |
Reviewed By: the shadow girl On: May 26, 2003 11:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you killed malick(boo-boo) how could you do such a thing. nobodys going to be a perv with his yami like malick was. plus you know you were wrong to do that you better make malickand the kids come back after there kill abmuis(is that how you spell it).but please update |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2003 23:19 CDT
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Awwww, Aria is so swet. LOL @ the fact that Yami was playing with dolls. |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2003 15:31 CDT
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The kids are gonna grow up? Awww! They're so cute at this age though! YAY! A sequel?!?! I can't wait ^_^ |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2003 09:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awwwwww! Poor Aten! He was so scared! |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2003 05:03 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARIA'S SO MEAN!I LOVE HER!
Bakura:She has a thing for evil people.Explains why I'm here.
Karona:Or quiet ones.She likes them too.
SEE!I TOLD YA THE DARK MAGIAN WAS EVIL!!SCARIN' POOR CHIBI ATEN!!
Malik:You would've done the same thing.
*sigh*I know. |
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