| "Baby of Mine" Reviews/Comments [ 468 ] |
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Reviewed By: Angel Black On: April 17, 2003 17:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
Angel: Hehehehe......can't......stop laughing. Mr. Happy PICKLE!!!!!!!HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!
Natasha: *snort*
Angel: WHat the hell are you doing here!
Natasha: *innocent look*Nothing.......
Angel: Natasha more known as Nat is a snorting, perverted, sick, dumb pig. Literally.
Natasha: HEy! I'm not dumb
Angel: *flashes Natasha's report card* Then explain the FIVE F'S!!!!!!!!!!!
Natasha: So at least i still get better grades then Mr. Happy Pickle.
Mr.Happy Pickle: I don't go to school and I'm not Mr. Happy Pickle. My name is Marik.
Natasha: I'm hungry. I like pickles.........
Angel: Marik run. Be afraid be VERY afraid. |
Reviewed By: Yui On: April 17, 2003 16:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
BWAHAHAHAHAHAAAA! Mr. Happy Pickle! Hahahahaha! *wipes away tears* That's great. Poor Marik, but Ra is that funny. Oh, and so you know, Tenshi means angel. Bye, for now. *walks off chuckling and muttering Mr. Happy Pickle under her breath*
Until Next Chapter
~Yui |
Reviewed By: Tiamat On: April 17, 2003 07:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
I cant wait till they find out that they are both the daddies hehe somehow I think Iris is going to find that highly amusing! hehe not only was Ryou a girl for less then a day and got pregnant but he got pregnant by two guys at the same time!! Not bad for a boy hehe! |
Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 22:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOW........
me like......
:)
I sorry for delay my computer sucks!
anyway, I would give the a bunch of stuff:
first of all a bumper sticker with my new favorite trademark phrase "Legato Owns ________"
Your name here
Then I get them a huge anime doll set including the following characters:
Vash,Legato,Seto,Aoshi,Kenshin,Kurama,Ryou, Malik,and Joey.
Finally I get them a little book I call
"How To Kill A Anzu In 60,000,000,000 Different Ways: Now With Color Pictures!"
:)gralnak
I'm happy |
Reviewed By: Jocelyn On: April 16, 2003 20:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOOHOO!! Ryou should definately tell steven, just for me to enjoy his hot-headed reaction! I mean, he cant complain, he got what he wanted. Ryou's straight and everything... and pregnant!! Okay, i'm done blabbering. Great job on 'Tenshi'. Your lemons are some of your best works, if you did as much on the other chapters, not even a book 'Simon' could criticize. Still, it's weird to see Ryou as a 'she'. He... i mean SHE, didnt get to enjoy most of the 'other' things before getting pregnant... gee, she's so deprived...
~Joci~ |
Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 19:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww, those 2 are so cute together!!! hmmmm, where'd he get a job? |
Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Must...Know....Marik's....JOB!*throws things at random*
Bakura:*ducks from a U.F.P(Unidentified Flying Pikachu)O_o Thats not healthy.
Deal with it!Arrgggggghhhhhh!!!!I can't think!CURSE YOU WRITERS BLOCK!!!!!!*throws more things*
Ryou:Is that even helping?
I don't know.BUT ITS FUN!*throws more random objects*
Marik:What's my job gonna be?
Malik:I don't know.But it better pay well.
(BOOM!Mushroom clouds form)*inside Gundam Rose*AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!*fires missles*
Everyone:O.O
WRITE MORE!THANKS! |
Reviewed By: Pharaoh Yamis Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 19:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY! Lemony goodnes!!! This really cheered me up after the day I had. Heh, I hope Ryou doesn't get too hurt while going through birth. |
Reviewed By: leila15rose On: April 16, 2003 19:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
I LOVE THIS FANFIC!! *Runs over and hugs the author.* |
Reviewed By: Falling Leaves On: April 16, 2003 19:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD XD XD XD
Argggghhh
The other reviewers are RIGHT.
WE NEED TO KNOW MARIK'S JOB!..... NOW!
Waaaaah! |
Reviewed By: Yui On: April 16, 2003 19:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
You tease bakurasgirl! I wanna know his job now! ARGH! I'm going insane here! Have some sympathy on a fellow poor, rabid fangirl! *sighs* but this chapter was great lemon. I have to admit I missed the yaoi once Ryou turned into a girl, no matter how much humor it supplies. Thank you for this little bit of yaoi-ish goodness.
Until the next chapter
~Yui |
Reviewed By: Caro On: April 16, 2003 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HI! i haven't given a presant yet... i wanna give the babies a chibi miroku! i have one and i carry it aroud with me EVERYWHERE! even in school, i bring it with me to all of my classes! it's soooooooooo cute! chibi miroku has black hair in very short pony tail and wears a purple robe and he has a gold staff, and three golden earings! hope they like my gift!
Caro |
Reviewed By: goldaries13 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 17:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
As always, the lemon was tasteful. It must be the nice weather, like you said. I mean, I`ve been thinking about a lemon scene around the end of my fic and the weather`s pretty nice, so it has be the weather. |
Reviewed By: NegaCat On: April 16, 2003 17:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, I'm relieved. Good little babies get their little baby souls back! Malik is one HOT guy! Marik's ok, but Malik's the BEST!!! i'm sure other people think otherwise, but that's ok! More Malik for me!!!! I can't wait to see what Marik's job is. I keep thinking about him doing the Ryoko from Tenchi Muyo thing. Blowing up McDonalds, blowing up the gas station, ect. It'll be funny! And Steven is gonna get it from Bakura who is dressed up like Ryou!!! Yay!!! |
Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2003 17:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: Interesting? To say the least.
LD: Yay! My favorite boys go at it! Woohoo!
Karen: Poor Bakura is going to have a busy day. And the gods help Marik's employer.
LD: What is wrong with Marik?
Karen: You mean other than the fact that he only just recently mostly sane?
LD: *sigh* At least he is trying. He doesn't even know if the baby is his and he is trying to provide for it. Some fathers don't do half that.
Karen: I know... which is why I hope the job works out. But that doesn't mean that I don't still pity whoever he is working for. |
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