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 Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 10, 2003 10:33 CDT
Comment/Review:
LD: *Grinning* I LOVE YOU!
Karen: Not to shabby! *winks*
LD: *sighs* Ryou is so lucky... Bakura and Marik all in one night.
Karen: Ha, who is jealous now!
LD: (>_
 Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 10, 2003 10:03 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YEAH RYOU'S PREGNANT!BAKURA AND MARIK ARE DADDIES!^o^

Bakura:......

Marik:Let's name the kid after me.

Marik Jr......KAWAII!^____^Poor Hikari Cinetti.*sniff*He just wants to help people.

Ryou:O_o

What?

Ryou:How could you write this stuff?!

What stuff?Oh!You mean...Yeah that one is my best work.Umm...Do you remember when I told you about "The Talk" during history?Well it all started because my friend/rival,Jacob,found a tampon wrapper.Thats how it all started.Plus everyone called him perverted,IT WAS GREAT!^________^Ad he calls me pervert.Pffft.

~~~~~~~~~Stories are posted PLEASE READ~~~~~~~~~
 Reviewed By: GRALNAK, The Lord of Chaos [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 09, 2003 23:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Not with Malik.....awww man......oh well
:)gralnak
*Hugs Seto doll*
 Reviewed By: hotaruchan27  On: April 09, 2003 21:34 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I don't know what to say... I can't stop grinning!

Tigerlily: I got something to say... sort of. Did you ever watch the old looney tunes / merrie melodies cartoons? You remember those cartoon wolves they'd have, leering at pretty girls and cat calling and whistling? I've decided, that who Marik reminds me of, more or less. Strange, ain't it?

I feel sorry for Malik. He still can't have any fun...poor baby. Here's something to pass the time.

Malik: *looks at it* You gave me a doll. I know I'm the femmie, but isn't this going just a little too far?

Silly boy, it's not just any doll. It's an Anzu plushie!

Malik: That's sick, even for you.

But it came with one million needles. What's not to love?

Tigerlily: You forgot to mention it's a voodoo doll.

Malik: REVENGE IS MINE!!

Marik: I wanna turn! The bitch is going down!

I think they like it. ^_^
 Reviewed By: Angel Black [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 09, 2003 20:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Angel: I found some stuff out from my mom she told me this when we had the pregnant talk thing. She said that even if your on your period you can get pregnant cause the sperm can stay active inside of you for a couple of days. Just a little fact i remembered. By the way. Ive been comparing this to your other three stories and Malik seems a little less perverted unless its jokes. is he actually growing up? Is that even possible? *snicker* *snicker*

Marik: Hey! And i can't do anything perverted cause a Anzu and the stupid golf ball.

Angel: *snicker**snicker*
 Reviewed By: moonnymph [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 09, 2003 17:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
*giggles* Isis is jealous. Okies, that's fine with me. ^^ I can't wait...hey, what do they mean 'shorten the process'? Will Ryou give birth sooner or will they grow up faster?
 Reviewed By: Angel Black [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 09, 2003 16:39 CDT
Comment/Review:
That would be a good one-shot the possibillities are endless. Especially if it's Marik......a little too endless. What kind of spells would HE memorize...........i don't wnat to think about it. Anywho keep going it's getting great one question. Who's Malik going to be pregnant with? Maybe if Steven gets the death pnealty.........i can't think of any body else. Just PLEASE don't make anyone go through the torture of having ANZU! I mean i've never heard if she had a mom or dad so i'm assuming she's either an alien or her parents died of shock when they first saw her. She probably killed the whole hospital......................
 Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 09, 2003 15:46 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Splitting Cinniti into light and dark? That was a good idea. Oh! Are the babies gonna be boy & girl, boy & boy, or Girl & girl?
 Reviewed By: lupusdragon [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 09, 2003 15:36 CDT
Comment/Review:
Karen: *gasps*
LD: *grins*
Karen: *pouts*
LD: *chuckles*
Karen: I don't like that bit about Ryou easily adjusting to being a girl. That was mean.
LD: Two lemons?! You must love us (collective as in all of your reviewers) Bakurasgirl!
Karen: Ryou is just too sweet. (S)he is going to carry a child for Malik and Marik. How can anything evil come from someone so selfless, even if it is an enduced evil. *crosses arms* I don't think the plan will work like Anubis hopes. I've put my foot down.
LD: She is so cute when she tries to use authority.
 Reviewed By: ssjgoddessChico [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 09, 2003 14:13 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That's good that Marik appologized! Lol! It was funny seeing the others reactions to Ryou being turned into a girl!
 Reviewed By: A.M.T [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 09, 2003 07:51 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Bakura's gonna get his surprise.

Ryou:Really?

I don't know.YAY TWO MORE!I CAN'T WAIT!Awwwwwwwwwwww Marik is so sweet.Ryou's fantisizing.O_o Even I don't do that much.

Bakura:Pfft Whatever.

Shut up!

Bakura:No.

URUSAI BAKAYARO!

Bakura:.........

*laughs*Fear me for I am all powerful.

Bakura:You really need to stop drinking coke before bed.

Shut up.
 Reviewed By: goldaries13 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 09, 2003 06:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
wonderful chappie. Can`t wait to see what happens!
 Reviewed By: Yui  On: April 08, 2003 22:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ryou's doing pretty good with the sudden change. Most guys I know would probably comit suicide or something if they lost.... that.... *coughs* Will you change him back after he has the babies? Or is he going to stay a girl forever? Well, I've got to be going.

Utnil next chapter!
~Yui
 Reviewed By: hotaruchan27  On: April 08, 2003 22:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Love it! Have I mentioned I love it?

Tigerlily: *snicker* I think Ryou may be in heat.

Gee ya think? Ryou and Marik's heart to heart was very sweet. I think that reassured Ryou more than anything else because Marik is so direct and truthful. Joey's and Yami's reactions were great. ^_^ I wonder if Yami is going to get a lecture when they get home?
 Reviewed By: MysticalElf78 [MediaMiner Member]  On: April 08, 2003 21:44 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Poor Ryou... trust me you will like being a girl... except for one week a month.. and having babies.

You are a gifted writer girl, I hope you continue! PLEASE
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